An ideal man, #1, page 6 , chappy 2 posted, 23/3/15

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inspired by a novel
Hi friends this is my 2nd attempt to write hope you all like it... if you feel somewhere in the story that its not worth please inform me i will stop immediately...

chapter 1 = page 1
chapter 2 = page 6
link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4315490/an-ideal-man-1-page-6-chappy-2-posted-23-3-15
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AN IDEAL MAN

Chapter 1

Last night she had found a dog in the woodpile, nearly starving, she immediately returns to her kitchen, taking a look of what she had that would benefit the dog...

Well, A starving dog would eat anything, she decided

She had taken a piece of bread, actually the last one and torn it to piece and placed them in a waste tin (bowl) and poured some milk on top of it...

Taking the bread out for dog... It was both gratifying and heartbreaking when the dog near gobbled up at once...

Dog seemed to be tamed, with shiny skin, white paws and wearing shiny elegant gloves. Dog had left promising that she would return In morning

In morning, the dog was waiting with her two puppies...

Jodha looked down at the small bowl of leftover food, before putting it to ground. It wouldn't be enough ...she thought

And now that man was watching her was watching her again, ever since she had moved to this house, this man would often give her a stare, it wasn't actually a stare but look a indeed..

If he was old enough, then it wasn't the matter to be considered, he is young, actually same as her age and very attractive in all sense. Unlike surya, he has brown copper coloured silky hair and green eyed. Snapping out with... Why does she always compare men with surya..

However, Jodha was capable enough to bring her attention back to dog and its puppies. they might be near wood pile she thought... making her way to the woodpile with the bowl of food in her hand.

"Nice dogs" he said

She wasn't able to believe her ears..., was he calling her., she turned to look at them... and their he was standing.. with his arm crossed and watching whole scene..

"They're not my dogs" she answered back..

"oh, then I guess they probably belonged to previous owner" he said

Why, the damn he should care about the dog ? she thought and decided to ignore him... watching the food being completed by the dog , "I will get some more food for you and your puppies.." she said looking towards the mother dog and she turned to leave..but stopped when the man again called her

" I think you should make a dog house for them, it will surely help them out. Or else in the upcoming rainy they will surely give trouble"

" I am sure, I will manage somehow at that point of time, hopefully.., anyways thank you " she answered...and started her ways towards the kitchen

" Do you know, how many puppies will a dog have in its life time" he asked

She resisted the urge to answer him and thought to ignore him..

Mean while , he made his way towards her, crossing the drive way

" They will have 7 puppies , and they live about fifteen age" he said

" Are you a dog nurse?" she asked in confusion

"No" he said with a smile on his face., "I am software develpor, and I spend a huge time on internet", now his smile became even wider..

" surfing about dogs?" she said.. she could not help grinning to herself

Now he was standing in front of her with a smile, he was nicer to look at ., dressed in a checked shirt and half pant., she noticed he was bare footed, " very brave of him to cross over the drive way barefooted" , she thought

He nodded his head

"I am Jallal , by the way" he said..

"I am Jodha, I often see you at your desk, dumb" she said , but he didn't seem to mind it..

He nodded... with a smile

" coffee or tea" she added

"no, actually I don't like that beverages" he said

" me too, I will get some, looking at the wrap, but it won't find interest after" she said... " oh, well I am getting late., I need to take a look at other things" she added..

" I will let you go" he said... "nice meeting you"...

"same here" she said with a smile ...

Both made their way out..., now , it doesn't seem strange anymore...

No proof reading is done... so please excuse me for mistakes done ... guys if you find it boring let me know i will stop it immediately

Edited by Archananayak - 10 years ago
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Nice story plz continue and plz first complete your first story i am waiting for updating of it's😳
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Originally posted by: swriter

<font size="1">Nice story plz continue and plz first complete your first story i am waiting for updating of it's😳</font>

sure Dea... its almost Done with... I will be posting it by evening or Tomm mrng
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Archananayak

inspired by a novel
<font size="3"> Hi friends this is my 2nd attempt to write hope you all like it... if you feel somewhere in the story that its not worth please inform me i will stop immediately...
</font>
<font size="3">chapter 1 = page 1</font>

😊 update soon dr..specialy "milan" tks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Archana...
Congo for new story dear:):)
nice start..
but itna short. .suru hote hi khatm ho gaya...continue soon;);)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc story...continue soon wid both ur stories
Thnks fr the pm
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Originally posted by: mushat

Hey Archana...
Congo for new story dear:):)
nice start..
but itna short. .suru hote hi khatm ho gaya...continue soon;);)

Bcz I am writing Milan Dea
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: savindi.db

😊 update soon dr..specialy "milan" tks for the pm...

sure Dea... I will

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