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Chapter 7
p.s. blue is for jalal, pink is for jodha and green is for shareefuddin.

bhai...kis soch mein dooba hua hai?? tu itni fikr mat kar...be calm
how can i be calm shareefuddin...tujhe yaad nahi ki badi ammi ne sirf mujhe aadha raaz bataya hai...jodha mere liye important hai kyunki uske zariye main apna aadha maksad pura kar sakta hun...magar apne aap ko insaan banane ke liye mujhe us raaz ka dusra hissa janna hai...
magar jalal us din hua kya tha...mujhe batade...shaayad main kuch madad kar sakun..
uss raat...kaise bhulun main uss raat ko...
(where are you lost? don't worry..be calm...how can i be calm? don't you remember that badi ammi just gave me half information..jodha is important for me because i can complete half of my mission using her..but to reform myself i need to know the second half of the secret..
but jalal what had happened on that night..tell me..maybe i can help you..that night..how can i forget that night...)

*****flashback*****
a 16 year old Jalal going back to home after a late night movie...suddenly he sees someone
"help...help...koi hai"
he stops his bike
kya hua? aap itne pareshaan kyun hai
" mera gaadi kharab ho gaya hai mujhe ghar jaana hai...please meri madad kijiye"
aapka ghar kahan hai?
"bandra"
magar bandra yahan se bahut dur hai...aap ek kaam kijiye..mere saath mere ghar chaliye
"magar.."
aap fikr mat kijiye.. meri badi ammi aur khan baba honge
"thik hai"
(help...help...someone there...what happened?why are you so worried?
actually my car is stuck...i need to go home..please help me...but where is your house?..in bandra...but bandra is very far away from here..do one thing..come with me to my house..but..don't worry..my badi ammi and khan baba would be there..ok)
they reach home
"aapne to kaha tha ki aapki badi ammi hogi yahan par"
"shaayad vo baahar gayi hogi..aap so jaiye"
"thik hai"
(you said that your badi ammi would be there...maybe she has gone out..you go and sleep..ok)
jalal goes near the bar and feels happy that no one is there and starts drinking...he gets drunk...and goes near that girl..wakes her up..gets close to her..
"yeh aap kya kar rahe hain...jaaiye yahan se"
(what are you doing? go from here..)
he starts touching her
"dekhiye yeh aap thik nahi kar rahe hai"
(look you are not doing right)
she tries to run away but jalal molests her and rapes her
she cries" help help"
suddenly the door flings open
jalal is shocked to see khan baba
khan baba is shocked and drags him out of the house
he slaps him hard
"jalal tumne aaj hame sharminda kardiya hai...are main toh yeh kehne aaya tha ki tumhaari badi ammi apni aakhri saanse le rahi hai magar tu..chi..tumne aaj hame sharminda kardiya jalal"
"khan baba ham nashe ke haalat mein the hame kuch pata nahi chala hame maaf kardijiye..."
"nahi jalal..tumne aaj hame sharminda kardiya hai..hum tumhe baddua dete hain ki.."
"nahi bairam khan..bacha hai wo chod dijiye use"
"nahi mahamanga aaj usne had paar kar di hai...mai tumhe baddua deta hun jalal ki tum ek pishaach ban jaaoge""nahi khan baba"
"ab iska koi faayda nahi hai jalal magar ek hal hai...tum tabhi vaapas insaan ban sakoge jab koi tumse pyaar karne vaala tumhaare saath ek ho jaaye aur.."
(jalal..today you made me feel ashamed of you..are i had just come to say that your badi ammi is on her death bed..but...khan baba please forgive me.. i was drunk..no jalal today you made me very low..i am cursing you...no bairam khan...he is a kid..forgive him...no mahamanga today he crossed his limits...i curse you jalal that you will become a vampire...no khan baba...jalal there is no use of it...you can only become a human if you maary someone who loves you and become one and...)
but before she says anything she dies
"badi ammi..."

*****flashback ends*****

"bhai tu fikr mat kar...main ek tantrik ko jaanta hun...vo in sab ka bahut gyaan rakhta hai...vo kuch kaam se baahar gaya hai...jaise hi vo vaapas aayega hum uske paas jaayenge..'
"thik hai"
(you don't worry bro..i know a person who keeps knowledge of these things.. he has gone out of town for some work...once he comes back, we will go to him...ok)
suddenly his phone rings
"haan jodha"
"jalal kal ma aur papa aa rahe hain...agar tum free ho toh kal ham unse baat kare...shaadi ke liye"
sure jaan
chup..acha main rakhti hun..bye
bye
(yes jodha... jalal tomorrow mama and papa are coming.. if you are free shall we talk to them about our marraige.. sure honey shut up..bye bye)

enough for today...and i gave a long chappy...please do like and comment
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Edited by Prachi0409 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Nice chapter
Poor Jo
Update soon
Thanks for jo
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Interesting update... Thnks fr the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nic chappi.
cont sooon
& a long chappi
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lovely chaptr update soon dnt delay...
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nice update.. do pm wenever u update...
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Nice chapter continue soon pm me thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm chapter,
poor jo
thanks for the pm...
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Guyzz if you all are not getting the ff journey down the memory lane then go to my buddy list...you will find ananyaanindita2... Click on her profile and check her posts you will get it...sorry for the trouble...due to pink spam forums is not allowing newbies to send links...sorry for the trouble😔
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Awesome ff dear👏
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