Akdha FF-Luv you Mr.Vampire chapter 14 updated pg 41

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Hi guys... I am very late to write a fanfiction but have been reading many ffs like destiny, is it hate or love,etc. My sister told me to go ahead and write a ff so I am here. You must already be knowing the topic from the title. Please encourage this new writer. 😊

Bharmal Singh was calling out to his children because they were going to Hyderabad.
"Sujamal, Bhagwan, Jodha, Sukanya, Shivani niche aao...
Shivani," kya hua papa??"
"Jana nahi hai kya???kahan hain sab?"
"Sujamal bhaiya aur Bhagwan bhaiya Kopal bhabi aur Priti Bhabi ke saath mandir gaye hain aur Jodha jiji packing kar rahi hai. Sukanya jiji naha rahi hai."
"Thik hai jaldi chalo varna flight miss ho jaegi."
Sujamal was the eldest and kopal was his wife.
Next was Bhagwan and Priti his wife.
Then Jodha,Sukanya and Shivani.
All loved each other but the one who was loved the most was Jodha.
Everyone were sitting in the flight. It was going to be 12. As the clock struck 12, everyone wished Jodha Happy Birthday. In the morning they reached Hyderabad and next day the three sisters had college and the brothers had to go to the office with bharmal while Mainavati, Kopal and Priti were handling household chores.
The three sisters reached the university. Jodha was 20, Sukanya 19 and Shivani 18. They straight away went to their classes. While Jodha was going she tripped into a man but couldn't see his face and shouted "dekh ke nahi chalsakte?? Jerk..."


Precap: Akdha first meeting...
I hope you liked it...


Index
chapter 1-pg 1
chapter 2-pg 2
chapter 3-pg 3
chapter 4 part I and II-pg 4
chapter 4 part III-pg 5
chapter 5 part I-pg 9
chapter 5 part II-pg 10
chapter 6-pg 13
chapter 7-pg 14
chapter 8-pg 16
chapter 9-pg 19
chapter 10-pg 21
chapter 11-pg 24
chapter 12-pg 28
chapter 13-pg 31
chapter 14-pg 41
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Hey its really nice
Very nice
Pls do update soon and continue too
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Congrats for d story
nice start, pls continue
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I love vampire uff
Awesome blossom update darling loved it please update soon ND pm me
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Awesme chappy! Update sn nd pm me
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Vampires interesting Good start dear..update soon.
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heyy guys...
I am back with chapter 2😳
Chapter 2
"kya kaha tumne?tum jaante nahi main kaun hun? main is college ka sabse popular ladka hun.tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe jerk bulane ki?
"ohh please...mere paas tum jaise popular aur akdu logon ke liye time nahi hai. I am getting late so just get lost"
And they both leave...
In the class
(please note...the chat in pink refers to jodha while blue to jalal..)
Jodha notices Jalal not paying attention to the lecture...
She had made may friends within two hours and they had a group consisting Jodha, Sukanya, Shivani, Moti, Mirza, Maan, Surya, Rukaiya, Salima, Abdul and Adham.
(p.s.Jalal is not in the group...)
"Surya...yeh jalal class mein attention kyun nahi de raha hai???"
"pata nahin voh aisa hi hai.. kabhi attention nahi deta magar puchne par har saval ka sahi javab deta hai. aur hamesha classmein first aata hai..
"ohh ok"

Lunch time...
"chalo yaar kuch khelte hain.."said a bored Maan
"par kya?"asked moti
"truth and dare"replied maan
They started the game...
It came on Jodha..
"Main dare lungi.."replied Jodha
"woa.. to ready ho jaaa.. hmmm..tu library ke fiction book shelf ke piche khadi reh aur jo bhi pehla insaan aaega use tujhe kiss karna padega😆."said Rukaiya
Jodha was like whattt..."nahi yaar vo...vo...to haan galti se mooh se nikal gaya tha...main to truth lungi..😕
"nahi nahi ab kya tu dar gayii..?"
Jodha replied,"main ek rajvanshi hoon..kisi chiz se nahi darti to yeh kya hai? main ise zaroor pura karoongi..

she goes and stands there with her eyes closed.
everyone giggle seeing her and they see a peon there and start smirking.Jodha sees it and goes towards him with her eyes closed but in the meantime the peon mooves and Jalal comes there😆
she goes there and gives him a quick kiss and says" sorry, vo mere doston ne shart lagayi...akdu!!!!
suddenly a slap comes to her cheeks..."how dare you"says Jalal
Jodha starts crying.😭 She had never been slapped..She runs away from there...
Abdul comes there and says"yeh tumne thik nahin kiya..voto bas ek shart pura kar rahi thi jaao maafi mango usse.."
Abdul was Jalal's best friend and Jalal used to share everything with him..
Jalal replied,"tum logon ki vajah se maine use thappad maara.age se aisa shart mat lagana main ja raha hun use maafi mangne ke liye."
He apologizes to Jodha and she forgives him..Later Jalal was added to the group and they both became best friends.

2 months later..
Both had started to love each other but were scared to confess fearing of rejection...

Precap: Jodha shares her feelings to Moti while Jalal to Abdul.

Sorry for a chappy going in a bullet train speed but I wanted to write chapters where Jodha and Jalal would be confessing their love and romance and mystery...😊

(P.S. these are the couples who already love each other anhave confessed their love..(Sukanya, Surya), (Maan ,Moti), (Rukaiya, Adham), (Salima, Abdul), (Shivani, Mirza)😊


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it's nice... thanks for the pm
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Nice Chapter plz continue and thoda slow chalo yaar taaki story mein majaa aaye but great story plz update soon😛

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