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Originally posted by: sonali96

Interesting update...continue soon dear ...thnks fr the pm

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CHAPTER 11
jalal" yaa allah...kya khoob dikh rahi thi jodha...uske husn se mujhe bachana mere maula😆
(ohh god how beautiful was she looking... save me from her glamour)
by overcoming every difficulties as such as his saalis and jodha's bhabhis he reaches his room...
he comes in and closes the door but unfortunately finds Jodha sleeping
he tries waking up Jodha...
Jodha" mmm...maa sone do na...please 5 minute aur...
jalal"jodha puri raat baaki hai...utho na...
Jodha" are maa to kyaa apko...zzz
jalal" are ye insaan hai ya kya... bolte bolte so gayi🤣
(maa let me sleep...only 5 more minutes
jalal"jodha the whole night is left..wake up"
jodha" maa so do you.zzz"
jalal" ohh god is she a human or what??
slept while talking."

Meanwhile:-
Jodha's POV-
is jalal ko thoda buddhu banate hain... bechara use lagta hai ki main so gayi lekin use to ye bhi nahi pata ki aaj main uske saath kya kya pranks karne vaali hun...
(let me play some pranks on jalal...he thinks i am asleep😛)
POV ends...

suddenly Jodha sits up and starts laughing... Jalal gets scared and rushes out when he sees sukanya and others laughing...
jalal becomes embarrased...
then jodha comes and says" acha bas... ab bahut ho gaya...(ok enough now)
jodha pulls jalal inside and locks the door
she comes near jalal and just when their lips are going to touch each other, Jodha sits back...now jalal makes the move...just when their lips are about to be smashed...
all the others come inside and jodha and all of them begin to laugh...🤣
now jalal's really embarrassed...
jodha" wo..ooo.oo.. ha ha... maine to...ha ha... darwaza band hi nahi kiya tha...ha ha😆
(actually i didn't close the door..)
jalal then gets angry and goes outside the room while the others and jodha continued their laughing session...

jodha looks at the clock and it's already 2:00 am
she gets worried wondering where is jalal and goes in search of him...
"jalal...jalal...kaha ho tum...jalal i am sorry...jalal please kaha ho tum baahar aao na...
(jalal where are you?? i am sorry...come here.where are you...)
she tries calling him...
but the phone gets disconnected...
then suddenly there's a bright spot of light which is coming from the moonlight and jodha finds someone in the garden and goes towards it...she finds jalal there and says...
"jalal...tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...sona nahi hai kya tumhe... chalo na"
"kyun... abhi koi aur tarh ka joke baaki hai kya..."
(jalal what are you doing here... don't you wanna sleep?? come
jalal"why is ther any kind of joke left??)
jodha is shocked...
she says"jalal wo bas ek joke tha...mujhe maaf kar do..."
"kis baat ki maafi...tumne kya kiya...mujhe akela chod do...
(jalal that was just a joke...please forgive me
forgiveness for what???you didn't do anything...now leave me alone)

jodha is very upset but suddenly remembers...

Flashback...
jodha"jalal agar kabhi tum mere upar gussa ho jaaoge to main kya karun...
jalal"tum mujhe manana jisse main khush ho jaaun jaise ki gaana gaakar lekin main to tumpar kabhi gussa hi nahi karunga..."😳
(jodha"if you ever get angry on me what will i do?
jalal" just sing a song...but i won't get angry on you ever)
flashback ends...

jodha starts singing...
aaa
pyaase hain naina...tarse sari raina...
jinme tu hai rehta
haal kyun tu jaane na
saiyaan pehchaane na
haal unka kyun tu jaane na
saiyaan naino ki bhasha samje na...
naino ki bhasha samjhena
samjhena
kuch to hai zaroor dil mera kitna majboor
kuch to hai zaroor dil mera kitna majboor
jaanke tu bhi jaane na
saiyaan pyaase hai naina
saiyaan tarse sari raina
saiyaan jinme tu hai rehta
hal kyun tu jaane na
saiyaan pehchaane
haal unka kyun tu jaane na
saiyaan naino ki bhasha samjhena
naino ki bhasha samjhena
samjhena
kuch to hai zaroor dil mera kitna majboor
kuch to hai zaroor dil mera kitna majboor
jaanke tu bhi jaane na


jodha gets sad when jalal doesn't respond and starts walking away when jalal holds her hand...
"maine kaha tha agar tum gaana gaogi to main maan jaaunga..."
"jalal mujhe maaf kardo..."
"it's ok"
(i had said no that if you will sing i would be pacified
jalal i am really sorry
it's ok)

jalal carries jodha to the bed...
he lies on top of her...his half body is on top of her...
he brings his lips near her while jodha gets shy and closes her eyes...
at the initial a soft kiss turns out to be passionate smooch...
the tongues tasting the saliva...
they part for breathing...
jalal removes jodha's dress and starts sucking her whole body...
while they enter into their climax...

in the morning...

jodha wakes up and finds jalal sleeping and goes to take a shower and the thing she spotted in the mirror made her shocked...

precap: jodha "are ruko ruko... bas thoda sa baaki hai...please kha lo"
(wait...there's only little left..please eat it)

abhi baaki ka jaane ke liye like and do comment..they are precious...
btw... there are many readers who are under 16 so jisko bhi pura sr chahiye they can ask me and i will send it via pm...thanks for understanding😊
Edited by Prachi0409 - 10 years ago
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omg wat happend to jodha???? Poor jalal update soon
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pheww...update done
sorry guys...i was not well so couldn't update
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nice ch
after so much time u have updated
update asap next update...
eagerly waiting...
n pm me 2...
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Nice chapter continue soon eagerly waiting for nest chapter don't be late make it fast please update fast update ur other stories nest chapter also pm me thanks for pm
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superb chapter...
continue soon...
nd thanks for pm...

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