FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 4 (Chap 24 page1 07/04/15) updated

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Nancy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#871

If such magical is the effect... We should soon be expecting a story from The Great Writer Deepz Di !! 😉

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NimishaBothra90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#872

Just an awesome update .
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laharipriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#873

you know what akka ur best to write some hilarious situvations between such a suspense and my jallu is too much worried about his would be wife akka and here jo also not less and i very much love bade papa and peddamma u know akka my peddamma name is also pramila.and my favoirte dialogue is idiot i will kill u if u call me again wow jo ur awesome yaar.and the way always jo stuck her self infornt jalal this girl will never change jhanu akka.so prithvi doubt sanyu?how is that possible?sanyu is one of the character i love very much here and pls do not make her villan akka pls.jo assumed things very negatively dear jhanu di.pls make some love movements between jo and ja enough of this boss and employee relationship akka.its time to begin love story akka.pls update soon and make sure di u will give ja jo moments fully in coming update.

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abhi

@abhi786

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Posted: 10 years ago

#874

Oh Jhanu wonderful chapter with JJ feeling each other touch alone, also Bpapa got the truth with investigated started...👏

What a resolution JO baby has, on MR. DON even though pained by his words but couldn't stop caring about him & trying her way to inform the one person to answer if not her 😃

Finally Prithvi & Jalaal got that someone is stalking her and correctly predicted this attempt is spur of moment 👍🏼 But Prithivi insisted on asking Jo to get a clue

Wow B.paps is so good without any change, he just assured her to talk to Jalaal seeing her worry line. The man even though pain put a plastic smile smooth her to forget the incident also got the doubt on JO anxiety towards Jalaal 👏 Waiting to see if he is going to get those doubts from Jalaal side also towards his laadli JO 😉

Wow JO feeling the touch by touching the place & remembering the incident the rolling & hug.. Jo the seductress 😆 stop going gaga over him. Shuck.. don't let him rule your mind and body!!"🤣 I liked the way she is controlling herself, Ayoo kya haal Jo in passion couldn't even get angry with him , one HUG did that miracle 😆

Other someone is Mr.Don is also in same condition touching his body & And... if miss stubborn denies listening to me.."I'll make her heed to me by completing what I left halfway today!!" wanted he want to prove his name apt 😆

Jalaal wants to tame a tigress "Idiot... will kill you if you ring again..." what a answer is got 🤣 Pch... seems your tigress set out on a hunt!" 🤣 Jhanu coudln't stop laughing this is too good 👏

The nazar utaar between Prameelal & Jo is too good.. I couldn't stop remember by MIL specialist in doing nazar uttar doing that to my HUBBY allways 🤣 also my MIL bestowed the same duty to me continue to do that to my hubby,since my family doesn't believe MOM got shocked seeing me doing to hubby😆 not to forget hubby believes insist doing that 😉

ACP Prithivi questonaire being, but poor girl feels that Jalaal suspect that , and now Samyu got into suspection... Hope Prithivi doesn't go question Samyu , if so JO gets that info she is going to blast on Jalaal 😒 Someone who is close to Samyu got info on JO visit...

Jhanu wonderful update yaar, 🤗 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏

Waiting to know how JO will behave with Jalaal now especially after the hurt that he suspect her 😕

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Deepa

@Deepasub

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Posted: 10 years ago

#875

Jahnu

😲 You have 33 likes already for chapt 24.

What April 1st and I could not see the invisible writings. Tho update Kab milegi behenji.

Hum intezar karate karte gum na hojaaye

For a long lamba update😆

Hope to see u soon on IF. Ab vanvaas se laut aa!

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Deepa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict
If such magical is the effect... We should soon be expecting a story from The Great Writer Deepz Di !! 😉

Nams if you put it that way, then this is just the test drive to see if people like my writing and one day when I get stung by the bee(enthu) and drink boost fo energy I may write a story. 😆 😭 😳

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devikamahankal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#877

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Where r u Jahnvi Di?

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: Deepasub
Jahnu
😲 You have 33 likes already for chapt 24.
What April 1st and I could not see the invisible writings. Tho update Kab milegi behenji.
Hum intezar karate karte gum na hojaaye
For a long lamba update😆

Hope to see u soon on IF. Ab vanvaas se laut aa!

I too liked it when she posted 😎 and i know I'll like it😃