IT WAS ALWAYS ABUT US , NEW THREAD CHAPTER 4 UPDATED ON PG 9 (18/2/15) - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

150

Views

17.6k

Users

45

Likes

237

Frequent Posters

ArunimaJA thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#11
MERA YE CHAPTER JATAHAI RIO KO... YRR USKA BDAY HAI
HAPPY BIRTHDAY RIO...
THIS IS THE SURPRISE I WAS TALKING ABOUT...
HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY IT!!!!
CHAPTER 3
Jodha was sleeping in their room (hers and jallal's)
@@*@@*Jodha's dream *@@*@@
2 handsome young man was standing in front of her , one was her angel and other was a devil , a devil who has destroyed her life, who has betrayed her , who has left her alone...
And her angel , who has always helped her , who has never left her alone , who has always comforted her...
Jodha " kya hoon mai , kya hoon main tum logo ke liye (zyaada dramatical hogya na??)
Sushant "tum ... tum ho bas ek khoobsurat chera aur kuch nahi"
Jallal " nahi , nahi jodha , tum sab kuch, mera sab kuch ho , meri dunia tumhi pe shuru aur tumhi pe khatam hoti hai , I love you jodha, I love you a lot"
@@*@@* END OF THE DREAM*@@*@
Jodha waked up... it was early morning , the sun was about to rise, she saw her all alone on the bed , "where is Jallal" she thought and she remembered the whole incident, fresh tears started coming out from her eyes .
Jodha in a low tone "kyu jodha kyu , tum uss insane ke liye roo rahi hoo jisne tumhe chod diya, nahi bilkul nahi , tumhe mazboot bana hoga,apni nayi life ko accept karlo , Jallal tumhara bff hai ( meri ff me bhi dono bff hai, what a co-incidence , sab sush ki meherbaa ni hai )
Jodha " dekho jodha, Jallal ne tumhare kehne par tumse shaadi karli and you are thinking about that as**ole"
And here comes our Jallal , he saw jodha lost in her thoughts , marks of dried tears were visible on her face... he understood what she is thinking and why she is so upset
Jallal "jodha... are you fine" he kept his hand on her .
As soon as jodha realised that Jallal is here , she hugged him tightly,
Jallal got extremely shocked, he hugged him back , he started caressing with his hands on her back.
Jallal "what happened ... Jodha r u fine??" in a worried tone.
Jodha " sob...sob... Jallal ...sob...sob... Jallal ...sob...sob... I m ...sob...sob... sorry ...sob"
Jallal " don't be sorry... Don't be sorry, its not your mistake , calm down, calm down dear"
Jodha "Jallal help me... Plsss , help me"
Jallal " stop crying dear...stop crying"
He made jodha sit on the bed and he too sat next to her , he cupped her face and said "I m your best frnd naa , then say what is wrong" he said it in a concerned tone.
Jodha " wrong??every thing is wrong Jallal" she said it in a crying tone.
Jallal "jodha just forget about sushant"
Jodha "I want to ... But I cant"
Jallal " acha, rona band karo , abhi breakfast kar lete hai phir baat karte hain, hmmm" he said it in a polite tone.
######### AT DINING HALL######
Everyone was know to the fact : why Jallal and jodha got married and a silence has covered them.
Breking the sielence mirza said " bhabhi jaan , ap itna kam kyu kha rahi hain?? (why r u eating so less?)
Jodha "no I m fine"
Humayun "arre, mirza usse dekh rahe ho... kitni fit hai, aur apne app ko dekho.. (mirza , see she is so fit and u huh"
Jallal " ummm, dad today I will not come to office"
Humayun "no problem beta, it will better if u don't come for 2 weeks... Stay with jodha"
Jodha "no, no Jallal you don't leave your work for me"
Maham "yess, Jallal, go , she doesn't need you" she said it in a evil tone.
Jallal "plsss, stay away from my personal matter" he said it in a rude tone.
Jallal to jodha "see jodha, I wil not go anywhere ...until and unless you are ok hmmm"
Jodha "but Jallal"
Jallal "no ifs and no buts okkk??
Jodha "hmmm"
###### IN BED ROOM#######
Jodha was resting on the bed + crying ...
Jallal was trying to comfort her in every possible way... then a idea came to his brilliant mind...
He quickly brought a album , he sat next to jodha and said "she this"
Jodha "I don't want to see anything"
Jallal "plsss, for me" with puppy eyes.
Jodha "hmmm, dikhayo"
Jallal started showing her pics... They started discussing about their childhood cutii moments..
Jallal "see , this pic...oh! God you were eating chocolates endlessly that day... Bhukad" he said it in a teasing tone.
Jodha " hooowww, mai bhukad hoon?
Jallal "yes you are"
Jodha "I m not going to talk to you" she started walking away from him but before she could Jallal hugged him from back and said "you know, I cant even think that... what you just said"
Jodha turned back and gave him a FRIENDLY hug. ( a hug like we frnds do not that passionate one)
Jodha "acha, let me go...I have some work"
Jallal " hmmm? Excuse me , actually you are holding me" he said it in a notty tone.
Jodha bfoked their hug and went out of the room.
Jallal to himself "sorry jodha, I cant tell you the truth...it will hurt you a lot , I m sorry , I m sorry my WIFE"
$$$$$$### flashback ###$$$$$
LAST NIGHT
Jallal woke up in a shock , he realised that it was only a dream , he saw jodha sleeping like a feared baby a sweet smile crawled over his lips. Then his phone started ringing , he saw adham's name flashing on the screen, he quickly picke uped the call.
Adham "hello, Jallal sir.. sushant has escaped" he panicked
Jallal "what???" how?" , just come and meet me near jodhas house asap"
Adham "yes sir"
Jallal quickly went to his parking lot and rushed towards his car...after sometime , his phone ringed
Adham " Jallal sir, we have again captured sushant"
Jallal "how, where are you??"
Adham "sir, I was waiting for you near mam's house and there our guards got him , he was about enter mam's house"
Jallal with relief " you have done an excellent job... You will be given money"
Adham "thank you sir"
$$$$$###### fb ends ######$$$$$
Jallal to himself " that dream , has really helped me"
###@@@$$$###@@@$$$###@@@$$$#
Sooo, how was it??? Should I continue????
And thksss to ice cream aka akanshaja for giving me such a lovely surprise...you r my love my girl...
DO COMMENTS AND HIT LIKES
REGARDS
ARUNIMA😃
Impairlove thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Superbb liked and even loved it
the teaser sared me a little but u r perfect in writing stories and even shocking us
loved it pls do continue
Sricharan416 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Wow, awesome update
sushant captured again 👏
Update soon and pm me.
Forthislifeonly thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Hey...Actually It's a strange feeling to comment on ur Ex-Story!!!!!! what a experience!!!!!🤣 🤣 🤣...
Ok ok now come to the story...Actually I am relieved that u have changed the teaser part!!!!!😆 😆...
But hey...U have written so so beautifully dear!!!!!! I am actually glad & happy that U have continued this story & doing justice with us all!!!!👏 👏
So...Many many thnx...
So...as from this chappy I am also a reader...So I am really happy that Sushant the idiot has been captured again!!!!!!
So...Jodha is now going through a inner turmoil😉 😉...good good Aru...😉 😉
Maham deserves a well lecture fro Jodha !!!!!!😡 😡
How could she say that Jo doesn't need her hubby????😡 😡
& the dream part was really unique...I just loved this...😳 😳
Thank you so much again for doing the justice & making me happy by continuing this so well..love u dear!!!!!🤗 🤗
RSlovesJA thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#15
super-duper update dear.. continu soon nd do pm
NSKay thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#16
really its an cute + awsm chappy...aww jalal care for jodha so much...mst update hai..
Zayn_1Dholic thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#17
How chweeetuu chapter re Aru!!!omg!ur another surprise gift for me..aww..thankz gf...la la la...so caring jalal...so cute jodha...love our jalal...thanku fr all the surprises..my best b'day ever..muwah
--a.ishu-- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Arunima!!! It was just ozzm!!! Super cute update!! Aww.. Jalal is so sweeet!! Great writing yrr!! Continue soon.. N thanx a lott fa pm!! 🤗 rio!!! Happy b'day yrr!!! 🥳
gauriS thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#19
really nice update😊
thanks for the pm🤗

meeramiss18 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Awesome update dear 👏 do continue😊

Related Topics

Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: hemakeerti

3 months ago

FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 6/19/2025 Chapter 44 Part2

Hemakeerti OSes - Compiled PBD INDEX Prologue Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: Swissgerman

6 years ago

Jodha Akbar FF Who loves Him Most Chapter 78B updated on 08/07/2024

Jodha Akbar FF : --- Who loves Him Most (M) --- Link to my other threads Thread 1 Thread 2 - Thread 3 :::::Thread 4::::...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: Swissgerman

9 years ago

Jodha Akbar FF: Shahzada of Her Dreams Chapter 48 Updated 20/7/2025

... Shahzada Of Her Dreams ... ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Index::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Chapter-1.....The beginning Chapter-2:...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: Shinning_Stuti

5 years ago

Thread 3: Destined Love... (Chapter 61 updated)

Prologue: How it happens when both the hearts fall for each other madly without knowing each other? He is the emperor of the great Mughal...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: ParijatDeewani

2 months ago

Jodha Akbar Vm Thread

Hey y'all! I've created this thread so that you'll can easily access all the Akdha Vms in one place. Please feel free to add to the list. 1....

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".