TH# 2 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH4 to CH5) - Page 51

Originally posted by: Rasika29

😆 it has totally become kind of hide and seek between you and me...
Update...I am on it yaar...😳
I have still not decided what will be the name of next chapter...but will try to update before weekend for sure...

Originally posted by: lashy

Excellent work Rasika...
>>Lashy di...😃 🤗

If there is one word to describe their relationship at this point, it's 'Tangled'😉
>>You read my mind...😳 the part after THE kiss was named 'Tangled" but I changed it later to the current one...

If there is one phrase to describe the looming political unrest at this point, it's 'The plot thickens...'😲

>> aptly described here too...👍🏼
This is the area where the story will be concentrating more along with the love story...

Waiting to read more...

I wonder if Jodha or Jalal are going to be forced to betray each other's trust... and if they are wonder who'd be first!
>>Don't worry about it right now, it still has a long way to go...😊

Waiting to read more dear... 👏
>>Will try to update soon...😳

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

I don't want Jodha Jalal to betray each other..😭

Originally posted by: ...rio...

Di..i cmntd

Originally posted by: tmaddy

Thnx for the PM ... Nice update ...😃
>>Thanks Tanvi...🤗

I must tell you one thing -- i really really enjoy reading ypur FF... its not just plain story -- it sometimes gets your thinking to -- with all the riddles and stuff... I thoroughly enjoy it...also i would like to appreciate you for this it does take a lot of creativity to think of the such riddles puzzles messages etc and then include them in the plots and again you need to think of the plot beforehand its not just at the spur...👏👏
>>Glad to hear that...well when I started writing, I wasn't sure whether everyone would like to read this genre...I mean the story with lot of political, strategic stuff...😳 because sometimes it really gets boring to read...😆 But I am really very happy that many people are loving it...😃

About the update loved it --- Jo-Ja are definitely made for each other? -- the way they understand each other and decrypt the messages and behaviuor...
>>They are made for each other...😛

Jodha is too smart -- apt for a warrior princess -- a very smart and strategical mind...
>>Yes...she is one true warrior and same is true for Jalal too...😳

the way she warned Jalal --- "Men die of thirst and not poisoned water" -- just wanted to confirm that she mean that -- in desert men die of lack or shortage of basic necessities rather than attacks and war - rite? was that the answer to the riddle too - i mean the man was travelling alone so somehwere he knew he would die of thirst - what he never thought of was that the water would be poisoned -- so the man who poisoned the water was guiltier -- is it?
>>👏 Another interesting POV...and pretty close to my version of answer too...I won't write much...😉 because if I do then I would end up writing the next update here only...😆

Originally posted by: swriter

Wonderful Chapter dear hey when you will start beautiful love story between jodha and jalal i want it plz make them love birds soon plz update soon with long and wonderful chapter😳

Originally posted by: harshu27

superb chaptr luvd jallal's cross questioning 😉
>>Thanks Harshu...🤗

Another change of topic dis sentence sumhw I found v funny 😆 I thnk he may b mean in sarcastic manner I dnt knw bt aftr reading it I ws laughing 😆
>>Hehe...😆 he was confused with her mood swings so was being a bit sarcastic...

jodha is feeling jealous nw she is so much botherd abt d marrge of jallal 😉
>>Both are bothered about each others marriage...😉

interestingly d story is progressing fantastically 😆 I really liked those verses tkn frm gita its v meaningful luks like u hav really read and studied gita 👏
>>Thanks dear...😳
The verses from Gita...yes they are very meaningful...
About Gita...I have read...yes. Studied...no...😆

He decides to cross the desert ALONE He had two enemies does dis riddle mean dat d 2 enemies are shariff and jodha? I ws v confused 😕 the riddles also were quiet tght engrossing
>>You would know soon...next update...

waiting fr der luv confession
>>Confession itni jaldi...😲 we are still in 4th chapter of story...😆

bt overall liked ur update wil b waiting fr d next update 😛 😊
>>Thanks for lovely comment dear...will update soon...😃

Originally posted by: abhi786

Rasika wonderful update dear 👏

Your FF is going so great with suspence 👍🏼 and two complicated character JJ both are too good for each other 😆
>>Thanks Abhi...🤗

Another change of Topic ... Not only you Jalaal Jo also quiet unpredictable just like you 😉 and Jalaal still suspect she is a spy & changed the Topic again with her Fiance and happy to know she HATE him , why are you interested Jalaal 😆
>>He is very much interested...😉

It's good to know that Jalaal & Ruqu didn't meet long time
>>I told someone already...😉 no bachpan ki dosti here...😆

but Jalaal now you got someone to LIKE think about that 😉

>>😆 he should think more about jo...👍🏼

Finally JO spelled attack is not from amer troops which Jalaal wants to prove her with proofs 😃

Liked the way JO suspected he is not Ameer solider & also that line 'Jatasya hi dhruvo mrityu' confirmed it 👍🏼
>>Amer got a clean chit...😆


So JO herself gave answer to the puzzle that men in dessert die with thrist not poision ? Who are two enemies he has ? 😲 Shariff & Amer ?
>>You would know in next update...😉

The like way JO said to Jalaal he knows that she can't run away as her sister is his brother custody
>>That is why he lets her roam so easily around the camp...

😃 Rasika I liked the way you revealed the answer for the line and linked very well for JO get to know that the person belong to her camp 👏 and that too her Bhaisa ..
>>those lines are used as code word to identify their people by Ameris...

So Jalaal finally got Bharmal letter and now waiting for Shahansha call ? and guess that they aretaking time to attack also Jalaal is really very clever & shifting his camp ⭐️
>>they are just pressurizing each other...

I couldn't understand how can Bhaisaa think to take her away leaving Shivani, it's shivani who needs to be rescued
>>For him both are his sister re...😳 He would want to take them out of there asap...

and I liked the way Jo suspected that attack is coming not from Jalaal, but from someone who doesn't want peace and also ⭐️👏

>>It is clear that some one is bluffing them by creating MUs bet Amer and Mughals. So what was the need to create all this deception??? Jo is quick thinker...😉

Waiting to know JJ are players or prawns of the game 😕

Rasika you are very good writer yaar 👏 keeping much suspense and even unpredictable sequences with puzzels 👍🏼 Waiting what JJ will do now ?
>>Thanks Abhi...glad to hear that you all like these sequences...😃