TH# 2 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH4 to CH5)

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#451

Excellent work Rasika...

If there is one word to describe their relationship at this point, it's 'Tangled'😉

If there is one phrase to describe the looming political unrest at this point, it's 'The plot thickens...'😲

Waiting to read more...

I wonder if Jodha or Jalal are going to be forced to betray each other's trust... and if they are wonder who'd be first!

Waiting to read more dear... 👏

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: lashy
Excellent work Rasika...
If there is one word to describe their relationship at this point, it's 'Tangled'😉
If there is one phrase to describe the looming political unrest at this point, it's 'The plot thickens...'😲

Waiting to read more...
I wonder if Jodha or Jalal are going to be forced to betray each other's trust... and if they are wonder who'd be first!

Waiting to read more dear... 👏

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#453

I don't want Jodha Jalal to betray each other..😭

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Rasika29

@Rasika29

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: prathi025
Another awesome update
>>Thanks Prathi...🤗

Both are planning n both are mysterious also
>>Yes...😉 Plans and mysteries...

Waiting to know d mystery
>>Will be revealed as the story unfolds...😳 keep reading...😃

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Rasika29

@Rasika29

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: rima4ever
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: rima4ever
wonderful update

Originally posted by: rima4ever
continue soon

Thanks Rima...😃
Will continue soon...😳

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...
I don't want Jodha Jalal to betray each other..😭

same here...😭

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2thless

@2thless

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Posted: 10 years ago

#457

Thnx for the PM ... Nice update ...😃
I must tell you one thing -- i really really enjoy reading ypur FF... its not just plain story -- it sometimes gets your thinking to -- with all the riddles and stuff... I thoroughly enjoy it... also i would like to appreciate you for this it does take a lot of creativity to think of the such riddles puzzles messages etc and then include them in the plots and again you need to think of the plot beforehand its not just at the spur...👏👏
About the update loved it --- Jo-Ja are definitely made for each other? -- the way they understand each other and decrypt the messages and behaviuor... Jodha is too smart -- apt for a warrior princess -- a very smart and strategical mind... the way she warned Jalal --- "Men die of thirst and not poisoned water" -- just wanted to confirm that she mean that -- in desert men die of lack or shortage of basic necessities rather than attacks and war - rite? was that the answer to the riddle too - i mean the man was travelling alone so somehwere he knew he would die of thirst - what he never thought of was that the water would be poisoned -- so the man who poisoned the water was guiltier -- is it?

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swriter

@swriter

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#458

Wonderful Chapter dear hey when you will start beautiful love story between jodha and jalal i want it plz make them love birds soon plz update soon with long and wonderful chapter😳😳😳😳😳😳

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#459

superb chaptr luvd jallal's cross questioning 😉 Another change of topic dis sentence sumhw I found v funny 😆 I thnk he may b mean in sarcastic manner I dnt knw bt aftr reading it I ws laughing 😆 jodha is feeling jealous nw she is so much botherd abt d marrge of jallal 😉 interestingly d story is progressing fantastically 😆 I really liked those verses tkn frm gita its v meaningful luks like u hav really read and studied gita 👏 He decides to cross the desert ALONE He had two enemies does dis riddle mean dat d 2 enemies are shariff and jodha? I ws v confused 😕 the riddles also were quiet tght engrossing waiting fr der luv confession bt overall liked ur update wil b waiting fr d next update 😛 😊

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Rasika29

@Rasika29

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: hemakeerti
Now the update.. as intriguing as ever..
>>Hema di...🤗 intriguing...😆 hope I am not confusing you all...

don't understand who's scheming what.. 😆..
>>Sometimes even I loose track of that...😉

and is the man in riddle Jalal? Two enemies Shariff and Ameris?? Would die of thirst means were the water sources targeted? Is that why Jalal urgently shifted the war camp?? all questions only.. when are we going to get answers..
>>Answers in next chapter...ab solve hi kar dete hai riddle ko...😆

very interesting and crisp narration dear...
>>Thanks...😳

u can be a good screenplay writer 😉
>>Screenplay writer? It takes me so much time to write a single chapter...😆 BTW any idea how much they get paid? if it is good then I am all ready to switch my job...😉

@blue

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