TH# 2 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH4 to CH5)

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Mushat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#441

Rasika another awesome chapter..loved jalal jodha convo...
Thanks for the pm...
waiting for the next chapter

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...
Rasika di awesome update
thanks for the pm

Thanks Shefa...🤗

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa
awesome update...
>>Thanks Rani...🤗

felt short dear...
>>You felt it short? as this was last part of this chapter so I didn't have anything else to add...
And I don't want to confuse you all with parallel stories and schemes so I am taking it a bit slow...😊

both r planning... smart jodha... the way she checked that prisoner best.. jalal is as usual brilliant
>>Both are clever and sensible...

continue soon nd do pm
>>Will do...and thanks for your comment...😃

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Deepa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#444

Another awesome update.

So a storm is brewing and jo Ja are prepared mentally to face it.

Although they want to be in each others company there seems to be a plot Jo is weaving to escape and JA is not going to give away his pawn.

So I'm assuming there will be an escape attempt while they break camp 😉 right?

And will Jo escape or will she let her sister escape.

So there r many plots to be discussed. Not sure if Jo knows about some of them.

Ja is shrewd n is reading between the lines of that riddle.

Was it really a riddle or message in a bottle!

Continue soon dear. Waiting for next update😊

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: geeta.M
Nice update👏
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it..😆
THQ for pm😊

Thanks Geeta...🤗
It feels so nice when silent readers decide to break silence and comment...😃
If I am not wrong you have been reading the story for a while but this is your first comment here...😳
Would love to know more from you...about how you find the story, of course if time permits...😊

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: Shivanikadel
thanks for PM
and very wonderful chapter

Thank you Shivani...🤗 keep reading and commenting...😃

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@old_charm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#447

wonderful update dear...😃

thanx for the pm & extremely sorry for late reply...

i loved it , u have penned it down so well...👏

oh this riddle , what to say about it , it has some deep meaning & has managed to give some hints to jalal(much known to him)😕

& jodha , loved the way she inspected that soldier & got confirmed that he is not an ameri & warned jalal in her own mysterious way but what is her plan though both hv their own plan , it's too thrilling , am too excited for next chappy plz try to update soon...😆

i so luv ur one liners , can't even pick favourite part here or i'll end up in copying full chappy

i equally agree with hema di tht u can be a good screenplay writer ,very well narration with crispy twists , is adding essence to plot...👍🏼

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: sonali96
Beautiful update...a chapter full of mystery...thnks fr the pm nd continue soon

Thanks Sonali...🤗 Yes a chapter full of mysteries...😉
But I dropped 1 clue about Jalal's Paigam...no one noticed...😭

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: Abi23
wonderful update enjoy reading
>>Glad you are enjoying it...😃

you are a amazing writer rasika
>>Thanks Abi...😳

this ff is going very interesting in each update i love this ff
>>Hope I am able to hold this interest...😊

waiting for the teaser
>>Teaser...🤔 Once I finish the outline of next chapter will post a teaser...😊