Originally posted by: Tehzeeb89
amazingly written dear!!!!
>>Thanks Tehzeeb...🤗u let the readers know about Bakshi's plight...i felt so sorry for bakshi but wat to do ur husband is just a power hungry moron... who doesn't value relationship...
>>Yes...It is not Bakshi's fault but still she trying hard to mend everything...coming to jodha's dream... is a hint for jodha???
>>Hint...a past and a future and what her heart wants...😉hahahah i love the advancement of their relationship...
>>😃as for the map n miniature soldier... was jodha giving hint to jalal that Amer soldier will be guarding at northern side??? very well written...
>>This you would know with the flow of story...😉Atgah sahab always come at the right moment hope he'll deliver what he saw to marium makani so that there'll be some changes in proposal hehehe it just my opinion...
>>a small change...😆 name of her son who will be getting married...jo ja conversation about to choose between two was awesome...their dialogue was superbly written...
>>Thanks dear...glad you liked it...😳continue soon...eagerly waiting for ur update!!!!
>>I am trying to write...😉 it takes some time to come out of answer writing mode and go into FF writing mode...😆
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