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Barnali

@Paradise_1

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

awesome update...
it was so emotional... the way you described jodha's pain is awesome... this story reminded me of the serial geet...
btw thanks for the pm...

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Barnali

@Paradise_1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

cont soon... can't wait to read more... and pm me!!!

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surabhi chandgothia

@chandgothia

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Awsomely written...gosh this was superb...loved it...update soon...excited to read about the jajo relations...

Update soon

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Ambidextrous

@Ambidextrous

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

awesomw di continue soon

truly you are an awesome writer love this jalal

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

its beautiful dear..continue soon & do pm

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Amazing amazing amazing chappy .!!!!!!
poor jodha 😭every1 has left her family,her nikamma hubby and baby😭
she is totally broken n lost all hopes but m sure jalal will bring her back😳
he would be her support😳
and so happy that Jalal realize he lovess jodha he needs her
loved last part to the core ❤️
Pls Continue the next part soon😳

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Wow !!!!!!!!!
Such a Beautiful Update it held all the right emotions and I really admire
Jalal's possessive nature towards Jodha

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...jaskaran...

@...jaskaran...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Nice concept 👏👏👏 Very different n sounds quite interesting...lovely and beautiful one... 😊 Plz continue the story dear 😛... i know u have taken a large hint from the serial geet.. first i was having doubt but then shivpur express.. confirmed...
N HAPPY NEW YEAR ...😊😊😊

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Brilliantly written pari... emotional and heart touching first chapter...really it was awesome

she was all alone including her baby left her... thank god ... jalal came back to her realised his

emotions... he needs her... happy to see them together..

plz do continue... update soon dear.

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

OMG!!! Pari di this was one heart tugging update..👏👏 I mean, how could that bl**dy Rohan do this to our Jodha??? That bas*ard...🤬

And yeah!!! I loved, nahi even more than loved Jallu in this ff.. I mean everyone has an ego but not many realize their mistakes on time and make amends, our Jalal did..uff that guy.. made me crazy for him!

I mean, not everyone is perfect.. even Jalal isn't... but at least he's trying to bring his Shivpur express back.. and this effort, this try is WHAT is known as true, pure love..❤️

And her baby... my Jodha.. she is just so strong!👏 She fought against the whole world for her unborn baby who.. who left her too.. Kudos to my Jodha!⭐️ Becoz of her child she had fought against the world, but now even her child deserted her.. she'd lost her reason of existence.. Omg my Jodha..😭😭

Just hoping that Jalal would bring her back to normalcy.. My Jodha deserves a life, and those villagers were just 🤢🤢😡 its 21st century for god's sake! in which era are those dogs living!!😡😡😡

Anyways.. your writing gave full justice to their emotions.. your writing is amazing Pari di!👏

Update soon!

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