*Not just a passionate affair TS* Argh! Not my AUDI, Jodha! Ud 18/01 - Page 74

Originally posted by: perdhani

Oh My God...

Lashy, so many words i want to say to admire your writings... but i couldn't because of my terrible english language...

Firstly, I loved reading your message... considered myself blessed read it again and again!

Having thought to write it in my indonesian language but then you will not understand..

That is true... 🤔

It so annoying me when all of your readers here can express their admiration while i can't 😭🤢

Awww sweetie... still I wish I could have heard from your earlier...🤗

But let me try one thing. I keep reading the golconda fort while listening "Flying without wings" from westlife...and i don't know why, i can't stop tears running out from my eyes. I feel like standing there looking at those fragmen, and i think this is the most beautiful moment for them after their long struggle to defend their relationship...

Awww... this was so beautifully penned... here... I've posted some more pictures of Golconda Fort for you

You know, i need to read every chapter of yours, 4, 5, 6 times, with some help from some dictionary, to reach every detail of your writings. I can easy understand the general plot. But i know the most interesting thing from your writings is the detail. So i won't let it missed although i need i big effort for that. The more i read, the more i understand, the more i love this story...

Awww thank you so much

Here's an emotional me wiping my tears -> 😭

Btw, the Hindi words... how do you manage with those?

I just imagine if any producer made a tv serials from this story, and keep using paridhi and rajat as jodha and jalal... waaahhh... it must be great...

☺️

Nia, njapa addict from indonesia

Awww thank you so much! Please keep posting ...🤗

Originally posted by: mushat

yes.. m a student..and dinner I love to Cook.and Sunday tha.Ammi ko chutti dedi Maine.upar se Bhai ka borad exam hai.so Ammi busy rehti hai.

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Chellam🤗
Chellam to you too 🤗

What you've done... Such a package of surprises you gave us😳 I'm so touched, speechless and still cherishing their moments
Awww thank you sooo much 🤗

I can't simply pick and highlight anything here. 'coz I loved each and every word of this update and craving for more😭
Nooo not done!!!! 🥱 You gave similar line past update too.. 😭

"Shraddha is irreplaceable in ours life, isn't she?" 😳 Love you just as much, my chellam😃
Hee hee... sach???☺️

Still... I'm not going to be swayed by your last line 🤓

Originally posted by: ashpat

Hiii Shraddha!! How are you doing?

I am going to put combined comment for 1st and 2nd part.

Awww so glad to see you here Ayesha... 🤗

I was not at all surprised with Jalal's reaction after the accident. I totally understand his love and obsession for his baby I mean car. I was same way with my car (mine was not sportscar but still it was my baby). actually, he is better than me; At least he let Jodha drive his baby when she had just LEARNER'S license. I did not let my siblings touch my car when they had permit and told them to use dad's car for practice and I used to sit beside them when they did. I was very protective of my car.lol.

Loool ayesha you're like this too????? 😆 so someone to understand Jalal's frustration here...

Come to think about it, this is how Mr. Lashy would have reacted too 🤣

But, I let them drive once in a while after they got license.

What car did you have then? 😳

anyways, back to jodha and jalal, i understand Jodha wanted to be spontaneous and daring and all but still come on Jalal warned him so many times. no wonder he was so stiff and silent and cold towards her.

WOW! I can totally feel your anger here too 🤣 like it was your own car being smashed!!!

But, Jodha totally made it up with the research and restoring his car with her own savings and not using parents' or jalal's help. That was just awesome.

Yes... she is like that na..

I loved the poetry Jalal wrote (I mean you wrote). That was nice summation of his feelings for Jodha.

☺️ Thank you!!!!

I liked the funny scene between shantamma and jalal. I was little surprised with Jodha acting so cool and normal when jalal came.

Loool she was confident of her research... till she realized that her guy was quite the taskmaster when it came to business affairs 😆😉 she's never had to see his Mr.Boss version, na?

Jalal was like an inspector when he was checking out his car well i can't blame him- that's what I would have done too but then making jodha wait to hear enthusiastic words from him was bad bad boy.

Oh yesss! That he is... a bad bad boy... 😎

he just loves teasing her and i love these two. I liked that Jodha got little possesive with "she" comment. and loved jalal more by clarifying that it was for her.

Yeah... she isn't used to seeing him go so goo-goo-gaa-gaa over anyone/anything else so much na?

Jalal wanted to give back the money somehow bec he knows how much it must have taken her to save all of it but jodha is jodha and that's what makes her special too.

Yes dear... 😊

Oh and that sparks and sexual tension in car when buckling the seat belt was so hottt. ufff- this almost there kiss make it steamy atmosphere.

☺️ thanks!!!! Having said that... did you read the last chapter of NJAPA... the epilogue the post-marriage one... of Ja and Jo... 😛

Omg, I really did not expect Jalal proposing to Jodha until he took out the ring. Usually, I can guess when I read stories but this was unexpected. I liked how he picked the place where they went for her 1st bday after they started dating first time. the setting was perfect- evening, fort, sunset. I am assuming she was dressed as she was wearing heels.

It was really spontaneous decision... what she said at the driveway, really made him flip over... he was flat out.. melted... as it is, he was so impressed by all she'd done for the car... oopar se her confidence, dialogues ... he just wanted to marry her then!!!

I also liked the caption of photo and how jalal informed jodha's dad about it before proposing her.

Thanks dear

I actually LOVED everything that happened at the fort- dialogues, expressions, emotions everything. I also loved he pciked her up in his arms to the car.

You mean how he kidnapped her... 😉😆

btw, thank you so much for giving this flashback of proposal and you can give more like this regarding their wedding day and pre wedding rituals etc and pregnancy in future.

sorry I was going to type little more but I got to go for dinner. tc. love ya

I loved this comment dear.. feels like ages since I heard from you... hope you are well 🤗

Originally posted by: _SJM_

Lashy 🤗

Sorry I have still not commented.😳Feeling a little bit lazy😛

Originally posted by: lashy

Ok me shall give you... errr... a very very teeny weeny lil more time.. 🤓

Hee hee Sujata... 😛

Btw... I saw your siggie only now... 😲 have you been having it for long?

🤗love you loadssesss

😉What an awesome, OMG, psychedelic, enthralling second shot Lashy!

Sorry for the late comment. I have just managed to fix my neck or rather it listens to me now. Till this arvo it was controlled not by me. 😆

Wonderfully written and emotionally portrayed 👏

They say people fall in love in mysteriously ways:😉

By a touch of a feather, by a glance by the secret admirer, by a sense of untold feelings... mmm.

Jallal turned into a poet. See what Jo has done to him! So he missed her terribly Ha in Mumbai ? He should/better do, after killing her with his silence.

I too hate that tactic, which is so annoying and is a sure killer. Well, at least Ja realized it and penned down the non-rhyming poem. Guess he wrote down his true feelings, so will not deduct marks for rhyming. He he😆

And what has Ja done to Jo! Poor girl😭 had to endure two days of dewy eyes and was now anxiously waiting for the man & the machine.

Who kidnapped whom ! or shall we say who hitched whom ?

Jallal merely carried her to be seated in the car. He was bowled over by the unexpected googly delivered by Jodha!. He fell in love all over again 😳 and most probably thought where & when did I miss this rarest Jem!

Jodha with her perseverance, determination and sheer love of this man & his love for his machine got inspired to do undertake the Blore job.

Oh Boy! The outcome was psychedelic! Never expected that you would pen down the proposal so beautifully. 👍🏼

And where else to go for the monumental confession, but to the one place she enjoyed previously and the sunset added the much needed glamour to the occasion.

Drop of a hat he fell head over heals in love with his sweetheart!. And for him to pre-plan the engagement dinner, grab the ring, oh !my what a debonair swank he was! And twisted too. But She was his match a top notch one. What one-liners she comes up with. I remember the sigma one too. So apt and so sweet too for the situation.

Yes you have rightly termed it TS, OS would have been too short. Yes they both were eager to resolve the Audi issue in person. Yes it was not just any AUDI was it ? IT was custom made for them ...he he😆

For him the AUDI was

A: Affectionate gesture of his GF to the extent of losing all of her savings.

U: Uplifting with her inspirational one liners

D: Doting Sweetheart to her man, with unwavering faithfulness ( she would not take his car without his permission)

I: Illuminating the spark of love again & again in him

For her, the AUDI meant

A: Affable, receptive and accommodating BF

U: Unforgettable urbane proposal from him

D: Debonair & distinguished swank he was for her

I: Independent & Illustrious man who made his decisions ( what a nice decision to propose on that eventful day)

I think many of us like your writing better today than yesterday and even better tomorrow. By the way I will still re-read NJAPA n PBD like P&P when I'm bored of other stories or books.

Now we will wait for your future OS and TS. I guess you already have a short list of topics.

So good luck with everything. Big hugs to you and hope you write something as soon as you can.