akdha ff ek mohabbat aisi bhi(Chapter-16updatedpage-140thread-1closed)

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deepa111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA
watever.. hw can he force her??????????

he shouldn't do this to her .
poor jo really get scared nd unconsious.

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

update soon
pls dont take this much time

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

please dear update soon eagerly waiting.

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deepa111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

pls pls update nxt chptr asap .
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harini1482002

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

he shouldn't do this to her .
poor jo really get scared nd unconsious.

hey plz accept my buddy request nd pm me wgen u update nxt part.

yep he shouldn't hv done tht n update soon na

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deepa111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

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swriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

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Chapter -6
Hakim sahab arived jalal's tent.he checked jodha's pulse and put down a herbal lap on her her rosy but swellon lips.
Hakim sahab->"don't worry shahensha she is fine i think because of lake of air and weakness she got faint.but after some time she will be all right.After taking some time and deep breath.
Hakim sahab(hasitatly)->" gustakhi maaf ho shahensha per ye sab huaa kaise aur inn ke honto per ye chot ke nishan kai...".
On this stage jalal did not in mood to share anything with anyone .so before complete his sentence jalal swiftly cut it middle on its way
Jalal(in commanding tone)->"anything else hakim sahab".Sensing his master's mood hakim sahab sent his curiosity back on seat.[
Hakim sahab->" nothing shahensa i am giving you herbal cada for her.when she will gain her consciousness then please give her.because of it she feel better but she is badly need to bed rest and she have to do it minimum one or two day.if you feel any problem with her then inform me"

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Jalal simply noded jis head on yes.after giving to him herbal cada and taking his beg.
Hakim sahab(with bent down his head)->" ab mujhe ijajt degiye shahensha khudha hafish".

Jalal swiftly noded his head on yes with approvel.hakim sahab went away from there.after his departure jalal swiftly sat down on the bed besides on jodha.although jodha was peacefuly lost in her unconscious world.jalal was softly carassed her head and moving his finger in her long and beautiful hair.his tears was ready to got out from his dark brown eyes.but his controlled and stubborn nature did not allow.

Jalal(in teary and tremble voice)->"i...i...i am sorry.i did not want to hurt you trust me i did not want but when you come to near me suddenly i lost my control on my nerve.i do not why but your mere scene or touch make me feel like heavenly.i forget my all worries and pain.when you come to near me i only want to touch you,feel you.my mind think only one thing that you are mine and i badly need to make you mine".

Edited by swriter - 10 years ago