Fasle updated chappy 17 on pg 72 updated on 23/01/17 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo for new FF awesome chapter..
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Happy new year to all.

Chapter -2

He needed her very badly. He sees a Dargah nearby, and decides to go and pray or the best word that can be used here is to beg Allah to return his beloved. To give him back the person who was his heartbeat. Whose presence made him feel that he was in heaven. He goes inside Dargah and begins praying- Aye dono jahan ke malik hume tumhare samne sar jhuka kar bhig mange te hain. Kit um hume humari mohabbat lauata do. Jodha aur mujhe ek akhri bar mila de maula. Mila de. Aaj humare pas sab kuch hone ke bavjod hume aisa ehssas hota hai ki humare pas kuch nahi hain. Maula tumse aj tak kya chupa hai tum toh jante ho ki hum jodha se kitni mohabbat karte hain. Tum yeh bhi jante ho ki jodha meri zindagi hai. Hume humari zindagi hai lauta do maula. Humara sab kuck lauta do maula. Hum vada karte hain ki hum jodha ko phir se kabhi bhi takleef nahi paunchayenge. Ya Maula! Meri dua qubool kar. Ameen (I'm no Muslim and i have no idea how do they pray. If it's wrong i'm sorry) His eyes had swollen up and they were puffy and red due to crying. He wipes his remaining tears on his cheeks and moves out of the Dargah. He did not much like a King or a person from the royal family. Yes he was still handsome and charming as before, but he looked more like a sick man or the better way to explain it . He looked like a mad man who needed a treatment. Who needs to be cured as soon as possible .People walking on the streets of Mathura began to think that he was mad man because his cloths were filthy as if he had worked all day in the mud and unknowingly he went on asking few people for jodha whom he had already asked. One man says- Are bhaya hume lagta hai tum pagal ho gaye ho. Jao jakar pehle apna ilaj karo. Phir us stri ko dunte rahene. Bas hume tang mat karo. Jalal wanted to scream at the top of his lungs- yes I'm mad. I'm mad in love and the woman I'm finding is my only cure do you get that, but he passes silently. His heart screamed Jodha I need you. You are my cure. Please come back. It's afternoon by know and jalal has not eaten anything since the morning. He was feeling very weak in this scorching heat. While jalal was walking jalal notices a man misbehaving with his wife. He wanted to trash the man as nobody in his saltnat was allowed to misbehave with their wives, but he had no right to interfere between a husband and wife. If he had any right he had it only as a King and he could not afford revealing his identity, but this scene shook him. Cause it reminded him unfortunately of something and that something that he tried to slap jodha, but he does not know that how how he managed to control himself from slapping her. Maybe because his heart still believed her and was not ready to accept that she could cheat him, but then also how come he could imagine of hitting her delicate checks and her beautiful face. His heart screamed- How could you jalal ? How dare you? What made you think that she could betray you? How could you not believe in those innocent eyes. Which were begging him that believe in them and understand what she was going through. Jalal took his right hand and made a fist of it and began hitting it on the tree. Until blood oozed out from it. (know u may think why right cause according to me it was the right hand with which he tried to slap her. I tried seeing the video, but there some problem)

Promo- jalal taking with peer baba.

How was it? Please do comment and hit the like buttons if you liked. Sorry for the errors .Thanks for reading.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ana It's awesome dear.😊
finally you back.😉
i am so so happy dear.😃
plz don't take long time and update soon.😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Hope peer baba guides him in finding jodha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful update!👏
Although I am still hell angry on Jalal for mistrusting her, but yeah you know how could I ignore his heartfelt plea that he wants to be forgiven, that he needs to be forgiven... by Jodha. I guess I still have belief in his love so yeah! I am hoping he would find his life soon...❤️
Thanks for the pm!
Update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry for the late comment.wonderful update di.kab se update ke liye wait kar rahi thi thanks for the update di please update next chappy soon.
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Originally posted by: Rubina999

sorry for the late comment.wonderful update di.kab se update ke liye wait kar rahi thi thanks for the update di please update next chappy soon.

Sure dear i'll try and update as soon as possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Thanks for d pm
N Happy New Year to you to
#with_love_bubbles ❤️
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Interesting continue soon and thank you for the pm

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