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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii

nic updste..
plz pm me..

thanks will pm u wheneever I update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update Ana👏
sorry for late comment😳
i totally loved it chappy😊
when both jodha and jalal meet😭
thanks to pm me😃
update soon😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
So finally jodha reached DR cottage..waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow nice chappy ana...sorry for late comment.
Update soon ..waiting for ja jo meeting
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Posted: 10 years ago
please please please...update ur all stories...Update soon...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cuty1997

Awesome Update Ana👏

sorry for late comment😳
i totally loved it chappy😊
when both jodha and jalal meet😭
thanks to pm me😃
update soon😉

thanks 4 d cmnt Krina
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prathi025

Nice update

So finally jodha reached DR cottage..waiting for next

Yup! actually the 1 next to it
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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER-7

Jalal is busy scanning the perfection of this hideout. When he finds an old rug and fetters nearby, he is now cent percent sure that somebody was held here as a captive, but what he could not comprehend were three things. Firstly, who was held a captive here? Secondly, whether the person who was held here is a man or a woman? Thirdly and the most important question that the person who was held captive where he or she? Has the person been shifted somewhere else or has the person ran away? He had many questions, but no answers. Above, all this questions the greatest question which had been asked by his heart is that whether the person who had been held captive here is Jodha? He could not answer this until he had any clue to proof his heart that it is wrong because he did not want this to be true, because this thought gave him chills to the bones. If, it is reality he had no clue how is he going to react, leave reaction, he is not even sure if he is going to survive this shock. He needs some proof to comprehend what had happened here? And who was held here as a captive here? So, he gets busy finding some clue, which could help him to sort things out and calm his heart whose anxiety level is above its limits and he could clearly feel and here it beat like an express train. He sends a small to Allah asking him that Jodha should be the one who had been held captive but it seemed Allah did not answer his prayer because when he is about to move away from the rug he steps something solid. He had no clue what it is because he could not see it, because there is no sufficient light in the cave to see it. So he bends to pick an anklet of someone, he could feel it but he could see it as the torch which is lit is a bit faraway so he could not see it. Somehow is heart understood that it belonged to his Jodha, but his mind disagreed saying that it could not believe until it sees' the anklet from his very eyes. Jalal new the truth which is too bitter from him to accept but still he tried his level best to ignore the truth. He is afraid to feel the pain, but pain is meant to be felt, after all that is the only remedy for pain. You can only overcome pain when you feel it or you can say when you face it, so could Jalal. All the while when Jalal is nearing the torch his heart is screaming- It is Jodha's anklet, it belongs to her, you have to believe it. Whether you want to or not. When Jalal reaches near the torch what he sees' make his heart skip a beat, he hold his breath, and leaves it with a gasp and his eyes wide in disbelief that what his heart said is true. Jalal's mind screams on Jalal's heart saying that I hate you because you are always right. Jalal drops the anklet as he recognizes that he had gifted her anklet as a symbol of their friendship. It is a beautiful silver anklet with few precious and surely they were Jodha favourite chum chum sounding small bells. He remembers Jodha telling him that she loves the chum chum sound and he smiled at her innocence. He allows the tears to come which for pricking like a thorn in his eyes. He says- Yeh kyon hua Allah? Kyon Jodha Begum itni takleef bardash karna padta hai jinke voh hakdar nahi hai? Takleef ya dard dene hai hum do une bakash do Maula? Hum ek bara Jodha se mila do maula? He is totally and badly broken by the thought the feeling how much pain she might be while staying here? And those fetter around here delicate ankle and wrists Oh! How much pain she might have gone through? How did she adjust in such worse condition as she is a delicate princess? No he corrected himself that she is not a delicate princess, but, his and only his delicate queen Jalal's wife. Is she fine? Or has something happened to her? No, he shouted diverting everybody's attention to him nothing can happen to her? He remembered Jodha's words when she had helped him in a matter; she said that- Kisi bhi parishani ka hal dosron se puchne se nahi milta hai Shehanshah . Har ek parishani ka hal manushiya ke pas hi hota hai, uske dil mai. Bas use us parshini ka hal apne dil mai ek bar jank kar dundhna hota hai jab tak jivan ke is katin marg mai usko apna jeevan sathi na mila jaye. Tab tak munshiya ko har ek mushkil ka hal khud hi dundhna hota. Kyunki mushkilo se harkar bhetne se koi lab nahi hota , kyunki asa karne par mushkile sirf badti hai Shehanshah. Mushkilon se bachne ashambhav par unka datke samna karna ashambhav nahi hai. He heard this when he believed that he did not own a heart he had just asked the suggestion from Jodha was to criticize but he was dumbfounded by her reply not because he believed her but because of the way the ease she explained the whole thing. For a moment a heartless man like Jalal also had to think whether her words were true because hearing it only soothed something he did not believe that it existed that time i.e.; heart , but here lay the irony of his life today he agreed this statement which he disagreed a while ago. He says- Hum apko dundh kar rahega, ap humari har ek pareshani ka hal hai hum apko dund kar rahenge, humare dil ko jo sukoon chaiye voh hum pa kar rahenge. Aur hume koi nahi rok sakta. Jalal asks his soldiers to find some clue nearby. Jalal himself did not sit still because it is impossible because he had almost reached the climax of finding his beloved. After a long time of search one of the soldiers comes with the other pair of the anklet. Jalal understands that Jodha has ran away from here he says- Jungli Billi. Bhag gaye. Akhir kar Jalal ki Jungli Billi ko kab tak koi kaid kar sakta hai ya kabu kar sakta hai. Kyunki jab Jalal he har bar asfal rahte hai apni Junglli billi ko kabu ya kaid karne mai toh aur kisi kya majal. Par na jane voh kahan gaye hogi., hume usi bat ki chinta hai, Kyunki hum jante hai ki ap nahi Agra ayenge nahi Amer jayenge . Par hum apko dundh kar rahenge hum jamen asam ek kar denge par hum apko dundh kar rahenge. Jalal health and been troubling him since the morning as he had a severe headache and his body throbbed due to insufficient rest, but he is not ready to take rest until he finds his Jodha, but for the past hour or so it seemed that his health had been affecting him badly. So, he decides to go to DR's cottage. As, soon as DR sees him he says - Agaye beta. Jalal plasters a smile and says- Ji , but no sooner after saying this he faints. DR holds him before hits the ground and with much difficulty he makes him lie down on the bed. On, the other Jodha also in bed as she has got high fever as she had been roaming and running all night correction cold night, without anything warm to protect her from the cold harsh winds. Jalal also had got fever. So, DR is looking after him and the widow after Jodha. Both were on their respective beds which were put near the wall which separates and joins the two houses. Both Jalal and Jodha have drifted to the unconscious world, but somewhere unknowingly also their hearts and souls were at peace, as, their hearts were elated to find each other's owner and their souls were happy to be so near again together and they want that this moment should last forever. After an hour or so they both get conscious again they begin feeling a similar aura, their hearts surely had recognized the aura but their minds disagreed again as usual. They both could sense the same aura which they both had sensed earlier in the morning, but they both were afraid to accept that it belonged to their respective beloved's. Jodha is scared to believe that this aura belonged to Jalal as she did not have the guts to face him, after that night because she knew that if she will see again she does not know whether she will survive that moment as she doubted whether her shattered heart could keep beating further or whether it would stop beating as soon as she sees' him and for Jalal he is scared to accept that this aura belonged to Jodha has he also had no guts to face Jodha with all his guilt for accusing an innocent and spotless soul for committing adultery. He is scared that whether she will forgive him or not? Will he lose her forever if she did not forgive him? Because the thought only gave him chills if she did not forgive him he doubted whether he could survive that fatal shock. In, short both were afraid to face each other as they both had no clue that how will they react after seeing each other ? Will their tangled relations get untangled? Or will it get more tangled in such a way that they both could never resolve the issues? So, they both ignored their hearts who had been screaming It belong to her (Jalal's heart) and it belongs to him (Jodha's heart). As, they both were not still not completely ready to face each other as they badly want to see each other but the outcome of their meeting is a question which could not be answered. Both fate and destiny were smiling at their helplessness, and their pure love, as they had some mischief up their sleeves. Both fate and destiny very well knew the outcome of their meeting, but still these two love birds had to face one more test after meeting each other

Promo- Jodha leaves the widow's house as she did not want to trouble the widow's house as, she knew that the kidnappers were still finding her, but this time they were dressed like Mughal soldiers, even though they were not. So, decides to leave through the market as its the safest palace from where she could escape as its always crowded and Jalal is also in the market .

Sorry 4 d errors done no proof reading. Plzzz hit the like button and cmnt if, u liked the chappy. Criticism and suggestions are always welcomed. Thanks 4 reading Ana

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.Just loved that jungli billi vala scene.waiting for when they come face 2 face.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome chappy Dea... update soon

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