2 ~Whatever happens...~ Part 10 'Something is changing' Pg 127

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#901

Mei bhi ress

Unress

Wonderful chapter samy👏

Really felt bad for Jodha , her pain, hurt well written.. his indifference hurt her.

Brave girl made her view point clear to the suspicious man..can't blame Jalal coz she had issues with him...That particular scene ... Jo held Jalal's arm..and he turns around.. couldn't help but remember the JJ scene from the show.loved it. UFF Jalal's wild imagination..flattered me😉😳.Love ammijaan always supports Jo.. she suspected daal me kuch kaala hai..

Like in the show here too Maham's true colors revealed through Rahim [ ruks abortion track]😆

Loved the interaction of Jalal and Rahim... their convo was so nice enjoyed reading it. cutie pie noticed his mamu .. always happy when jo was around him😳

The after effect of Rahim's revelations on Jalal narrated perfectly👏

Just loved Jodha's reaction in car 😆 loved their cute petty fight 😊 Love their attitudes😉

Finally, Mr Mohammed in action👍🏼 Poor Jo slept heavy -heartedly

It would be definitely going to be interesting to see Jalal manofying the wounded tigress😆

Eagerly waiting for more of JJ interaction..😉😳 Update next chappy soon😳

Edited by shruthikarthik - 10 years ago

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#902

WOW! GREAT STORY DEAR...

LOVED IT...SUPERB...👏

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Mavaddat

@Mavi_16_2

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#903

lovely chapter di! Jo n JA started feeling something something, n this JA ignoring Jo really so pathetic attitude,
I lyk ur thread of index too . I read your all stories in one go . your blog stories I mean one shots n short stories too, u have beautifully written ur stories
Now waiting for ur next. story HIS FIRST LOVE n Blog story DARK FANTASY . DI PLEASE TELL ME WHEN U WILL UPDATE THESE TWO STORIES PLEASE SAMY DI :p
n thanks for pm

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#904

wonderful update.something is changing dimension of their relation is changing .deep somewhere jo has a trust he will listen and understand her .ja has a trust on her but its starting of new relation so steel have doubt after know about maham he dig deep on that path and soon whole truth will be in front of everyone.it will be strong pillar of new start.he can't bare tears in HER eyes and set beside her and creasing her head is lovely.

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Dani

@erning_w

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#905

Superb update dear..

Finally Jalal knowing the truth

And eagerly waiting for precap.

Continue soon dear

Thank's for the pm 😊

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#906

OMG whatta chapter 👏...my dear sammy !! the emotions u brought out of both character is worth reading thousand times ... I am so proud of you ... you have come a long long way since your first FF ... so much of improvement !!! this story is going in an excellent direction ... i am so much in love with this story ... this jalal & jodha, they are so different from HFL ... yet so lovable ...

each of them have their own distinguished features ... !! nothing less or nothing more ...unlike our show characters ... importance is given to each of them equally !!!

so finally the truth unveils & that to by a child ... now I want to know how jalal will manaofy his sherni ... & what will be his reaction knowing adham as maham's son ...

btw keep writing sammy ... keep JA alive with your updates on FF's & OS ... so what , if the show ended abruptly ... we can keep JA alive here in this very forum ... !!! love ya ❤️

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#907

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
OMG whatta chapter 👏...my dear sammy !! the emotions u brought out of both character is worth reading thousand times ... I am so proud of you ... you have come a long long way since your first FF ... so much of improvement !!! this story is going in an excellent direction ... i am so much in love with this story ...(me too varshu & sam knws it well ) this jalal & jodha, they are so different from HFL ... yet so lovable ... Indeed
each of them have their own distinguished features ... !! nothing less or nothing more ...unlike our show characters ... importance is given to each of them equally !!!

so finally the truth unveils & that to by a child ... now I want to know how jalal will manaofy his sherni ... & what will be his reaction knowing adham as maham's son ...

btw keep writing sammy ... keep JA alive with your updates on FF's & OS ... so what , if the show ended abruptly ... we can keep JA alive here in this very forum ... !!! love ya ❤️

Yes totally agree with u varrshhh😎⭐️

U spoke my ❤️ out. Love u sam🤗

Keep writing n keep updating asap.

Edited by lovergirlalina - 10 years ago

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#908

wow awesome...finally truth is out and ja is guilty...lovely describe of ja feelings...interesting precap continue soon nd do pm

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KanJmaskis

@KanJmaskis

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#909

Hey sammy dear as u know i did not read the story from starting so after reading all to 10 will give my views okk 😊

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#910

Sammy as usul wonderful chappy... 👏 I really felt bad fr jo since jalal wsnt ready 2 clr d air...bt luckily jo being jo she made her stance clear...chalo achi baat hai atlest he did go 2 his ammi and gt his doubts clrd abt whthr jodha ws wid dm or nt... 😉 best part ws Rahim cz of him jalal gt 2 knw d truth dat who ws d culprit... 👏 superb and here d culprit ws caught by jalal precap sounds interesting dat means jalal wil cum 2 knw dat adham is maham's son... 😲 grt...update soon...eager 2 knw hw d stry unfolds nxt spcly hw wil jallu manofy jo... 😉

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