20~NOT just a passionate affair~ 62 (2 pt) One day... another year!

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#541

So cute Soku podi 🤗

Quote

vinitaj27

@vinitaj27

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: Suganya.S
Impressed, he cast his awkward junior a quick look - before reverting his attention to the brother 'Jalal...' bhaiyya continued with gratitude 'Its because of decent youngsters like yourself, that families like ours are able to confidently send our sisters and daughters to colleges and offices today...'
Hiding his amusement at the irony of that last statement, Jalal nodded in acknowledgement like a 'good-lad'. Decent, eh? Thankfully; the brothers knew nothing of his 'interesting' history with their kid-sister or more importantly, the mischievous ideas he had in his mind pertaining to her!
Just then, he caught her watching him - she was deciphering those sly responses of his with a part-annoyed part-amused frown. She knew what was cooking in his mind. He knew that she knew what was cooking in his mind - but, he couldn't really help his thoughts, could he?

😉😆 😳
I was willing to do a caption pic , since a long time but couldn't get any time to think of apt scene ... ANJALI akka once asked me too , So i have kept up my word eventhough i m sorry that it is a chota sa caption 😳 !!!! Dedicated to all my DEAR BANJARAS 🤗❤️☺️

Awww! So cute. This scene remains my all time favorite one from the serial till date. Thanx!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

vinitaj27

@vinitaj27

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#543

Merry Christmas! To all my lovely friends on this forum.

Quote

Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: vinitaj27
Merry Christmas! To all my lovely friends on this forum.

To you too Vin 🤗

Quote

Deepa

@Deepasub

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: Suganya.S
Impressed, he cast his awkward junior a quick look - before reverting his attention to the brother 'Jalal...' bhaiyya continued with gratitude 'Its because of decent youngsters like yourself, that families like ours are able to confidently send our sisters and daughters to colleges and offices today...'
Hiding his amusement at the irony of that last statement, Jalal nodded in acknowledgement like a 'good-lad'. Decent, eh? Thankfully; the brothers knew nothing of his 'interesting' history with their kid-sister or more importantly, the mischievous ideas he had in his mind pertaining to her!
Just then, he caught her watching him - she was deciphering those sly responses of his with a part-annoyed part-amused frown. She knew what was cooking in his mind. He knew that she knew what was cooking in his mind - but, he couldn't really help his thoughts, could he?
😉😆 😳
I was willing to do a caption pic , since a long time but couldn't get any time to think of apt scene ... ANJALI akka once asked me too , So i have kept up my word eventhough i m sorry that it is a chota sa caption 😳 !!!! Dedicated to all my DEAR BANJARAS 🤗❤️☺️

Wow! Sugu ! You just delivered a googly. Hope u r having a good rest to become busy bee again.😆

Guess that chukku podi worked wonders. 😉😆

Quote

Deepa

@Deepasub

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#546

Hey dearies

Hope all had a relaxed or festive day.

Here another great song dedicated to friendship.

No matter what I did today, me was missing 😭my BF who is far far 😭away.

I know nothing lasts forever, and we should move on. But memories r there to cherish I guess!😊

Enjoy the song!

Dionne Warwick With Elton John, Gladys Knight & Stevie Wonder - That's What Friends Are For

And I never thought I'd feel this way
And as far as I'm concerned
I'm glad I got the chance to say
That I do believe I love you

And if I should ever go away
Well, then close your eyes and try to feel
The way we do today
And then if you can remember

Keep smilin', keep shinin'
Knowin' you can always count on me, for sure
That's what friends are for
For good times and bad times
I'll be on your side forever more
That's what friends are for

Well, you came and opened me
And now there's so much more I see
And so by the way I thank you

Whoa, and then for the times when we're apart
Well, then close your eyes and know
These words are comin' from my heart
And then if you can remember, oh

Keep smiling, keep shining
Knowing you can always count on me, for sure
That's what friends are for
In good times, in bad times
I'll be on your side forever more
Oh, that's what friends are for

Whoa?oh?oh?keep smilin', keep shinin'
Knowin' you can always count on me, for sure
That's what friends are for
For good times and bad times
I'll be on your side forever more
That's what friends are for

Keep smilin', keep shinin'
Knowin' you can always count on me, oh, for sure
'Cause I tell you that's what friends are for
For good times and for bad times
I'll be on your side forever more
That's what friends are for (That's what friends are for)

On me, for sure
That's what friends are for
Keep smilin', keep shinin'

Quote

divyavm

@divyavm

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#547

Writer-e-khaas, first, happy holidays and best wishes for the New Year!

I loved the epilogue ... I know I am a bit late to the party as I have been very busy at work and then busy with family during the holidays ... And I wanted to do full justice to my final take 10 for NJAPA Part I (I foresee future parts as I said before 😉😆)

All I can say like Rajni ... Is that though I am "late", I can try to come "latest." And I will try to pay some interest for the delay (read onto know how)

What I loved about the epilogue was the subtlety of the beautiful moments ... It felt very much like a normal day, but everything normal was special as Jodha and Jalal were together. 😳

This is broken into the three themes I love:

Theme 1: Re-living their most special wedding in flashback

(1) One of the most beautiful things I loved about this chapter was it started like any other normal day ... You did not make a huge hoopla about the wedding and spend time on the ceremonies, but rather focused on the precious memories of the wedding as viewed in a flashback by Jodha.

(2) What was the thing that caught in her hair? Again it is a surprise for us. The ring ... In the backdrop of the mehndi. You described the combination of the diamonds and mehndi beautifully. I could literally see Jodha's hand through your description with the mehndi and diamond ring.

(3) Parallel between that fateful night when they had united and this one ... It made the story come full circle as the world now witnessed Jalal putting the ring on Jodha's finger among the other festivities. It was a beautiful moment. It reminded me of how right after that night, Jodha had been in shock- that the red saree she wore for the college event was not a shaadhi ka joda and now coming full circle she now had worn her wedding dress.

(4) As Jodha looked at Jalal's tunic we re-lived along with her how he looked in his tunic, diamond studded buttons, and surma ... I could picture Jalal as a nawab myself.

(5) The bidaii ... It was a very funny detail for its contrast to the typical filmy bidaai but shows to what extent the relationship between Jalal and the Singhs had evolved. It was hilarious the way Jodha's family is completely on Jalal's side now and how amusing it is to Jodha.

Theme 2: Jodha's return to normalcy ... I loved the subtle detailing to show how Jodha had recovered.

(1) Appearance ... How natural the way you described how her tresses had reached her elbows ... How her short hair had grown along with how life had moved one for her.

(2) Physical dexterity of her hands ... She was combing her hair and putting on makeup herself ... Where just recently she was relying on her Bhaabhi for help.

(3) Working ... How subtly you showed she was working through the documents she was shuffling around. This is the detailing I love so much writer-e-khaas. It was amazing idea for Jalal to propose Jodha working for the Amal old age home. Such a Jalal thing to do and reaffirms why I love him so much. It was a great way for Jodha to do something meaningful for herself as well as others. 👏

(4) Painting ... Yes, her brushstrokes were not the exact same ... But it was such a positive picture to see Jodha's painting of Robbie's final moments in Jalal's lap back on the shelf and of course Jalal would treasure it.

(5) and the little "adjustments" they had made to make life move on were truly endearing. And perhaps the fact they didn't refer to them as compromises even more endearing. I particularly liked Jalal's idea of creating a theater at home ... It was extremely cute.

And even as things were returning to a "normal" rhythm, everything is special because Jodha-Jalal have each other.

Theme 3: And the third and last theme, was the new types of special moments between Jodha and Jalal:

(1) The new experience of Jodha getting ready while watching a sweet Jalal "innocently" sleeping

(3) Jodha's cute struggles to wake Jalal up and dealing with the fake histronics of Jalal with an equally fake anger ... I also liked how Jodha cutely chided Jalal for not taking care of his shoulder

(4) The beautiful scene of Jodha feeding Jalal her hand made masala parathas and pineapple halwa ... It was such a beautiful moment and it was lovely the way that Jalal was happier in Jodha's sense of achievement than anything else.

(4) The beautiful hug when Jalal once again realized how Jodha was meant for him only and to take care of him ... It went back to that same dialogue of him asking who will take care of him.

I know I missed the reference to that conversation the last time but this time you made it crystal clear for us. So, thank you!

I am curious whether Jalal will ever share that experience with Jodha.

(5) The final shot... Jalal and Jodha looking in the mirror, and Jalal putting sindhoor on Jodha. It was beautiful that they are now husband and wife and that feeling is sinking in.

It reminded me from this lovely mirror scene from the show during the first anniversary of Jodha and Jalal.

These little moments foreshadowed the little moments in life that would continue to be special for Jodha and Jalal. Once again, an amazing update which made the little moments in life special again. It inspired me to write a take 15 ... As there were so many little things I liked.

Thanks writer-e-khaas 🤗... Now after a break, come back with season 2! 😉 Yes, I am greedy! 😆

Edited by divyavm - 10 years ago

Quote

SUGANYA.S

@Suganya.S

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#548

Thank uuu ☺️ lashy di , vinita di , deepa di 😳

So many r missing in this thread 😭

@ deepa di : 😆😆 I m now wondering to add u in ma bee list 😉 n NO PODI ppl 😡😡

@ Divya : WOw😲😲 , Take 15👏👏 ... Yeah , Subtle moments were described so perfectly that we can never forget this ' HAPPILY EVER AFTER' COUPLE 🤗❤️

Quote

Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: Suganya.S
Thank uuu ☺️ lashy di , vinita di , deepa di 😳
So many r missing in this thread 😭

@ deepa di : 😆😆 I m now wondering to add u in ma bee list 😉 n NO PODI ppl 😡😡

@ Divya : WOw😲😲 , Take 15👏👏 ... Yeah , Subtle moments were described so perfectly that we can never forget this ' HAPPILY EVER AFTER' COUPLE 🤗❤️

Sugu🤗