Lashyji aka Shraddha
loved the update. Though could not read it until tonight. My phone needs to be burried and IF needs to improve loading of pages on mobiles!. And icing or rather bad icing on the cake I was locked up in an isolation chamber most of the day at work and came out only at 5pm.😲
Woah! 👏what an update madam! Surely thought it contains some personal experiences in it😳. not mine but the author's ofcourse!. I wonder who the romantic is Lashy Madam or Mr. Lashy !!!!!
Well written emotionally and pragmatically for a modern love story aka journey.
me blushing on some parts imagining... Jodha & Jallal ofcourse!😆
So Jodha is back for Jallal. Glad she feels normal and happy. Most of all they both feel content with eachother and lushly romantic & subtly sexy as couple.
Loved the part where you mentioned the finding of letter J on the mehendi patterns. I rememberd me & my cousins pranks at the yougest cousins wedding last year and freaked out the groom. 😆That's what weddings r for and big sisters he he !
What Jingbang ! that's what Jallal calls his pals. Poor guys have come on a Sunday to wish them goodluck on their way to HM.
What! Renu aka the BF of Jallal preggy🤣, now that is also NJAPA is it ? And whats happening to Adbul, Meera, MaanSingh...We need an OS on Jingbang and JJ masti after wedding.
Well did you think the above were my comments. Na, na look below for more😆:
N: It was not just a passionate affair was it? It was a nurturing friendship started off with some wackiness and ended up as an epitome of contentment and affection to the extent of length & breadth that JaJo's soul s could reach.
J: Journey of love it was of Jodha & Jallal, but along tagged the Jing bang' crowd, jovial, full of energy and masti strengthening the bond of friendship and trust. Though the journey took some untrodden paths with upheavals, the positive energy felt by the two souls pulled them through to shore.
A: Alluring were the encounters between Jodha & Jallal that every reader felt and wished happiness for them. From the incident at the corridor, the emotions poured at Robbie's demise, rehabilitation at the hospital to romantic moments on their first day after marriage, they felt for each other that their souls spoke without being spoken
P: Perplexed they were at the start of their feelings. Baffled was Jodha on their inter-faith relationship. But loyal, accomplished and accommodating was the boyfriend from the start to end. Passionate it was their relationship but still pragmatic to accommodate the impact of certain events without compromising their needs.
A: Amiable, adorable aren't they Jodha & Jallal. Jallal became the drama queen after the wedding but Jodha became the taskmaster taking care of her man to uphold her sigma formula. The only place they wanted to be was in eachother's embrace. How did it happen that their minds came together, their lips brushed each other like the lotus unfolds in the sunshine. A mere kiss said it all it was NJAPA.
Now to end it I rememberd a few lines of P.B. Shelley's poetry on love
THe mountains kiss high heaven
And the sunlight clasps the Earth
The moonbeams kiss the sea
What are all the kissing worth
If thou kiss not me? (This is dedicated to JaJo and others like them)
Thanks for this lovely story. I started reading it at a time in my life when the last of my BF in UK left for Ausland. The last year saw 3 of my close friends leave the UK as well for their kids' education. So one eventful evening myAusfrined who is still a silent member of IF and other social networks asked me to see JA serial and read IF. Thanks to her that now I have found some new friends (hopefully) here. You have brought out the silent readers from their shell to comment. Now that is not easy !. So Congrats and feel blessed.😊
A big huggie to you and other banjaras😊
Edited by Deepasub - 10 years ago
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