TH# 1 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH1 to CH3) - Page 9

Originally posted by: sangreal

i liked this update very much, allthough your going slow tempo
Thanks dear...😛. Both Ja-Jo deserve separate parts for their intro...thats why slow...😊

cant wait for them to meet, and with your description of them this meeting will be like... an eruption, an explosion ...

Aha...now I am getting tensed about their meeting...😆 everyone is waiting for this only...

cant help you with the names, dont know your language well
oh, it is totally fine...I got many suggestions...that much is enough for now...😃

dont let us wait here too long, ok? thank you, thank you
Already updated part 3...as I said writing in parts helps updating faster...

please pm me when your update.
Have added you in list...and thanks for comment...😃

Originally posted by: abhi786

Rasika good update .
Thanks Abhi...😛

JO ka dhamaka entry fighting with Bhagawantdas and even defeated him...Raja bharmal was very proud of his JO...
Yeah...me too love this Jo...she is darling...

Jo win by cheating BD, her complain is so cute BD is so big while she is small before him 😆
She knows how to win and convince others...😉

From whom JO is taking training (Sujamal/ or some other) 😉
in Part 3 I have added FB about her training...Do let me know how it turned out...1st time I am writing a sword fight scene...
her trainer will be mostly invisible in this story...let us see how it turns out. Haven't thought much about it...

so Jo marriage is already fixed with (suryabhan) 😉
Marriage is fixed but dulhe ka naam nahi decide hua...help karo...😆 kuch nahi mila to suryabhan he rakh doongi...

I still miss Bagawan das in the show.. Where is Sujamala ? already go against Bharmal ?
Yeah. All Jo brothers have disappeared from the show...
Sujamal is already a traitor here..

Originally posted by: akdhaswara

awesome

continue soon

Originally posted by: NikkiReed

Nice story line... Pls pm me when u update..

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

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