TH# 1 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH1 to CH3) - Page 16

Originally posted by: Rasika29

Originally posted by: sangreal

wow,
^^^^^^^finally they met^^^^^^
yes...finally the meeting...😆

jodha and jalals encounter begins with her being his captive.
is it symbolic?
This captive is gonna give him a hard time...😉

we know now jodhas first impression of ja but you did not give much emphasis to how he feels...
Abhi abhi to mile hai...soon we will see what Jalal thinks..😃

hope there will be much more interaction between them in the next chapter...
Next chapter it is...😛

i like their characterisation, jodha is brave and protective, ready to deal with the consequenses,...
Yes, Jodha is all that and that is why she will servive and at same time will get into trouble...😉

and jalals eyes have seen a lot in wars, his reputation precedes him as a fearless warrior, he stands with both feet on the ground, knows what he wants...
Oh, he is...the tales about his bravery convey everything...😊

those two make quite a pair...
of course...😳

thank you for the frequent updates...when will the next one be?
hopely soon

Once I set the layout of next chapter updates will be frequent..that is advantage of updating in parts..my readers won't have to wait for long...😃

Originally posted by: ...prithibi...

Yes i loved that surprise..dear...LOVE U 2...at first let me give u a kiss and a ti8 hug.. U nicked me prithi...aww..i loved it..i have another nick name nd thatz Riya..bhavi di calls me Riyu

Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai

atlast they met...
loved the chappy!!! wonderfully written...
Thanks Sona...😃

cont soon dear nd thanks for the pm!!!

Welcome and thanks for comment...🤗

Originally posted by: renuganesh

Hi rasika
Hello Renu and welcome here...😛

nice frequent updates loved their meeting
Thanks...😃

cont soon please pm me
Added you to PM list...

Originally posted by: khushbooparmar

Fantastic Update Rasika🤗
Thanks Khushboo...🤗

These two met like this😔 I thought Jalal will mesmerized by Jodha's beauty ...
Woh to hona hi hai...😉 Aaj nahi to kal...😆

but she is in disguise 😆...Shivani chatter box put them in trouble...
Shivani toh aise hi bolti rahegi...😆

continue soon...thanks for pm
will do...and thanks for comment...😃

Originally posted by: akdhaswara

awesome,continue soon
Thank you swara...😳

Originally posted by: Rasika29

😆 u loved your nickname...🤗 Then let us stick to it or shall I call you Riya?

Originally posted by: hely

awesome chapter...
very beautifully written...👏
Thanks Hely...🤗

jodha n shiwani is really cute how nicely they were fooling jalal
Look at those two...captured but still trying to fool him...😆

poor jalal he lost his sensibility coz of 2 girls😆
He did...😆

seems like jalal is curious to know abt jodha😉
RKG this word affect him😳
Of course...Jo affects him...😉

plz update ASAP
looking forward for next chappy😳
Thanks for reading and comment...😃

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

awesome chappy ;)
Thanks Aisha...😃

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Hi rasika
Hey Shruthi...🤗 How did I miss this comment...😲

it doesn't matter update is short or long because of frequent updating thank u keep it up dear, 👏
Thanks...😃

courageous jodha n shehjada jalal's first encounter unique one,
unique...yeah...did you like it?

in between shivani's blah blah,,, confused jalal 😕
Both sister were trying to take him for a ride...😆 but Jalal ka gussa made Shivani blurt out the truth.

protective jodha fearless warrior jalal well described characterisation,,,,A big round applause for your writing skills👏
Thanks re...that means a lot...😳

eager to read how jalal will react, that it's not rumour but jodha is registan ka gulab is true...😆

Ahhan you will see soon...in next update...😉

Originally posted by: Rasika29

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