FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 3 (Chap 18 page1 22/01/15) updated

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devikamahankal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#981

Tuesday or Wednesday 😭😭 ok ok

Ya but please long long update...

Can't wait to read ja - Jo interaction...

Chapter 18 se bada update OK

With lots of caring jalal, amiable jodhu,

Their naughty nok - jhok, our ever cute divi n

Jalal' s possessiveness for jodha...

How will I wait till 3 rd or 4 th now...🤔

Please thoda aur jaldi do na update

Please

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madhutanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#982

Hi Hema, Its a new reader to your FF😊... in two days i finished reading all the chapters... i could not resist my self from reading every chapter... kudos to you:.. u are an amazing writer...waiting for the update... long wait huh...

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madhutanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#983

Is there any other FF writen by you? let me know plz...

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#984

Jahnu ru going to update on tuesday .habbah :).update soon ra.im waiting

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Nancy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#985

I am SO SO SO SO SO LOOOVIN the story! 😉 ❤️ 😳 Loved the last two chapters! Obviously they were emotional.. but I loved them as they progressed for better!

Loooved when the cupids shot arrows and it hit at the right target 😉 ☺️ God! falling..touching..lip signature n all ☺️ I am already sweating..lol ! Then.. I was ROFLING when 'mujhko..pehechaanlo..mai hoon DON...tee tee tee...' rang aloud 🤣

The 'lower-ur-attitude- comment. 😲 Jo must be like.. what the! 😡 .. 🤣

So..Jalal not only got to know about JO's parents..but in the last chapter, about her bro Gautam also... and I just cried n cried! 😭 I love how he respects and salutes the strong woman Jo all the more! 😳👏

On other hand.. Jo got to know about Jalal's past... Hateee Aliya!😡😡😡 Insensitive git!😡 I am glad Jo will be softer towards Jalal as she now knows how much importance the project holds for Jalal !😳😃

I love love love all the other characters as well... Badepapa.. such an amazing man! I love how he put forward things..in a sensible and balanced way! 👏 Pedamma is such a sweet darling. Jalal's parents are amazing as well.

So yea.. u gave a hint ya!😉 Next year Saasumaa wants her bahu with her... So, Jo has to be Ja next year! Yo..cant wait for the love story to enfold!😳😉😃 ❤️

So so so sorry for late comments here... you know why!😳 and so sorry if I missed any point.! But you just need to know that I am sooo lovin the story!

Lub you so much di... 🤗 today is such a special day😳 and thank god I am commenting today only! 😆 So double celebrations... yo! 🥳

Update soonesttt !!!😃