Tujh Bin Jiya Jaye Kaise ss updated chappy 20 on pg 67 on 6/09/15 - Page 6

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CHAPTER-5

Jalal was making his horse run faster than ever. When he gets lost in the past. His most precious moments of his beloved.

Flashback

Jalal and Jodha were sleeping together. Its morning Jalal and Jodha both get up. Both are sitting on the bed. Jalal was suppose to go for his work. Jodha-Shehanshsh mat jayeia. Jalal-Humari Begum ka hukum sarako par. Meanwhile a solider comes both jalal and jodha are shocked Jalal-Tumhari yeh majal. Solider-Gustaki muaff shehanshah Todarmarl sahb apse kuch jarori maslat pe bat karna chate hain. Jalal-Tum jao hum ate. After some time of discussion he comes back. While coming in he looks into Jodha's eager eyes which were getting impatient to see him again. Jodha is extremely happy to see her, but to her disappointment jalal says- Jodha begum hume kisi jarori masle se jana. To which she agrees but he could see her disappointment. He goes sits on the bed and kisses on her forehead- Hum jaldi hi ayenge. Jodha holds his hands and says-Shehanshah hum apse bahut prem karte. Jalal- Jodha Begum chaie yeh jahan khatam kyon na ho jaye. Aap ke liye humari mohabbat kabhi khatam nahi hogi. Aap ke bina jalal ka yeh dil dhakna band ho jayegi. Jodha gets up from the bed and hugs him tightly and says-Hum apse apni jaan se bhi jayada prem karte hain. Aap jis din hume chod denge hum mar... before she could speak further jalal breaks the hug and crushes his lips on hers after sometime passionate kissing. Jalal says -yeh alfaj kabhi bhi apni jaban se mat nikalne ka sochna bhi mat. Hum ji nahi payenge. Jodha is so moved by his words that her eyes are filled with tears. And she again embraces him tightly than she ever did.

Flashback ends

Jalal- Ap ki mohabbat humare liye kitni pak hai. Apne kabhi apki mohabbat ke badle me kuch nahi manga. Apki is pak mohabbat ne hum khushi ke sivai aur kuch nahi diya. Aur ek taraf humari mohabbat mai apko sirf dukh diya . Apne hume chot na paunchane ke liye kya kuch nahi kiya Badi ammi jo farman galat padha tha uske bare mai bhi nahi batya. Kyunki ap humse beinthehaa aur bepanaha mohabbat karti hain. Jodha aap hume ek bare mil jaye phir hum vada karte hain hum apko zindagi bhar nahi chodenge.

Jodha is pacing fastly through a village as she is felling very weak and dizzy. When she hears a woman crying- koi humare bache ko bacho. What she saw was shocked her the hut was on fire and a child stuck there. She saw that nobody was ready to help her. When she saw that kid crying through the window she remembered her kids their death. How their death had broken her completely. She could not allow any other woman to bear that pain. She knew that she had all the necessary time to die, but that child did not have the time to live. She was determined to save the kid at the any cost. Even at the cost of her life. She snatches a shawl from a man and runs inside wrapping herself with the shawl. She heard people saying- Baisa andar mat jayeai ap ko chot paunch sakti hai. She acted like she was deaf by ignoring everybody present there. She goes and picks the child and sees the entrance is on fire. She thinks what do. She only sees one way to escape through the window but it had wooden bars. She sees a axe and keeps the kid on the bed. She picks the axe and cuts the wooden bar and picks the kid and gives the kid to his mother. She knows she is stuck, but, she is not at all remorseful. She is happy that she will die after giving somebody peace. But the people manage somehow to take her out through the window. People were awestruck by her intelligence, bravery and selflessness. She had got many minor burns her skin was burning . She thanks them and then plans to move to her destination to the cliff nearby to meet with eternity, but, she was stopped by the child s mother . She says- Baisa dhanywad apne humare putr ko bachya. Apne jo mere liye kiya uske liye mai sadve abahri rahenge. Aye mai apko lep laga deti hun. Jodha- Nahi dhanywad hum jane hai. Vaise bhi abhar jatane ki koi awasaktha nahi Kyunki ek maa ka dukh ek maa hi samjh sakti hai. She goes away leaving the woman confused and all the men ashamed. Jalal was desperately find jodha like a teenage lover. Every moment was gripping him with extreme fear of losing her. He felt like dying but somewhere hope kept him alive. The hope of finding her. He reaches the village where jodha was there a few moments before. He sees people trying to extinguish the fire coming out from a hut and asks the matter. A man tells him all the details of what happened earlier how a woman saved the child. Jalal asks for the description of the woman. After hearing the description he is damn sure that it was no other than jodha. He knows that there is a cliff nearby. He makes his horse run fast . After this incident he understood the depth of her love for their children. In the meanwhile Jodha is at edge of the cliff. Until jalal reaches near the edge of the cliff, it was too late. She jumps of infront of his very eyes.

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beautiful written yrr

love this updates flashback awww
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