Tujh Bin Jiya Jaye Kaise ss updated chappy 20 on pg 67 on 6/09/15 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...prithibi...

Yrr...jodha is *sobs* dead...nw how will it b all ri8??at the end matlab???ye ff khatm ke waqt??ya next *sobs*chappy ke end ke waqt???u r very suspicious creating.,i m getting excited*sobs* sad nd anxious...i m nt getting a clue...i think jodha zinda ho jayega...*sobs* dnt say that u will die..i m hurt by ur that sentence..u silly girl u wont die so easily..i wont let that happen...kya pata joja ka rebirth ho chuka hain...kya pata wo main hoon ya tum ya aur koi..bt i m related to akbar frm my birth...i always get excited by the name of mughals spcly akbar..frm my childhood...nd i knw the name of jodha frm the serial...i knw the name MUZ as Heer kunwar...

Aabhi pata chal gaye ga hw everything will be alright. Oh! dear sorry i won't die. just updating the next chappy.
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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER- 8

Jalal picks up her gently and runs like never before towards the palace. Everybody is shocked to see jodha in such a worse condition. Jalal did not take jodha to her room, but he took her to his room. As her room was a bit more farer than his room. He could not afford losing time. As each and every passing moment was weighing heavy on her life. The best Hakima's reached in his room for her treatment. They requested jalal to go out. He wanted to stay and he was ready to protest, but he did not protest because he knew protesting would eventually lead to the waste time. Which he was already short of. The Hakima's began her treatment. Jalal was impatiently pacing outside of his room waiting for some good news. He was guilty that if he had not blamed her for the death of their kids , she would not have taken such a drastic step of suiciding. If she had not attempted to suicide. They would not have been present in the jungle and she would have been safe. He cursed himself. He remembers jodha's last words before fainting that he was not to be blamed for her situation . But he was to be blamed. His inner turmoil was making him mad. When Hamida bano, Salima and Rukaiya comes. Hamida and salima were shocked to see jalal's blood stained jama(the upper kurta he wears i'm not sure what is it called),but somebody present there was extremely happy that was none other than Rukaiya. She ran to jalal and saw a cut on his arms ans she began her melodrama- Jalal apke ke kandhe par chot lagi . Chalo mere sath mai maram laga deti hon. She holds his hand and literally tries to drag him. Jalal is disgusted with her behaviour, he jerks her hand and says- Hum jodha ko chod ke kahi nahi jayenge. Rukaiya gets anger- Subha tak to tum jodha begum ko talak dene ki bat kar rahe the ab kahan se tumhari mohabbat jag gaye. Jalal replies in anger- Tumhare he karan humne jodha ko ek laparwai maa mana tha. Tumhe mere gusse ki chingari ko aag mai badlna ache se ata hai. Nahi tum hume bhadkati aur nahi yeh sab kuch hota. Is pure fasat ki jad tum hi ho. Aab jao yahan se. Is se pehle hum apne ape se bahar ho jaye. Rukaiya ran to her room she could not bear the insult. She says- Jodha Begum humari toh allah tala se yehi dua hai ki tum aj mar jao. Agar tum nahi mari, toh hum Tumhe mar denge. She swore that she would avenge her insult by Jodha's death and she will not sit in peace until she dies. After Rukaiya's departure how his kids died and how jodha was framed. They both are equally shocked. When, Outside a dasi comes to get some necessary equipment for jodha's treatment. She is stopped by jalal, he asks- Aab jodha kaisi hai. Dasi- Shehanshah unki halat bahut najok . Pehele se hi unki tabiyat najook thi. Unka bachna na mumkin hai. Ab toh kuda hi koi karishma kar sakta hai.

Jalal ran inside and sat besides jodha holding her hands. When a hakima said shehanshah...she could not speak further as jalal spoke- Khabardar hume kisi ne jane ko bola. Nobody dared to say a word. Suddenly jodha began finding difficulty to breath. She was could not breath anymore. She took a deep breath and became silent. The silence made each and everyone fearful a Hakima comes and checks her pulse and says- Hume muaff kar dijiye shehanshah ab Jodha Begum is duniya mai nahi rahi. Jalal had already faced a lot in a day this was more than enough for him he faints holding jodha's hands.

Dreamstate

Jodha is walking slowly towards the door of death. Her heart was filled with guilt and pain . Guilt that she had promised jalal that she will stay with him till eternity and pain because she knew that right know what he was right know going through. Her eyed were filled with tears , that is when somebody holds her hand. To her surprise she turns backs and finds jalal. She says- Shehanshah ap yahan. Aap ko yahan nahi ana chayie. Aap lot jayeia. Aap upar bahut sari jimmewari hai and with this she began crying. Jalal(crying)- Hum kahin nahi jayenge. Ap ki lautna hoga jodha humare liye. Tumne hum se vada kiya tha ki yum hume chod kar nahi jayogi. Phir ab kya ho gaya. Jodha- Shehanshah hum mante hai ki humne apko vachan diya tha ki hum apko chod kar nahi jayenge. Lekin niyati ke samne hum Majbor hai. Hum sadve apse prem karte rahenge shehanshah. Hum ap ka yaha intazar karenge. Aab humme jana hai. She tries freeing her hand, but fails to.

Jalal- Shehanshah Jalaludin Mohammad Akbar apni takder khud likhta hai. Aur humare takder main tum thi, tum ho, aur huesha rahogi. Tumhe hume se koi alag nahi kar sakta nahi tumhare kanha aur nahi Allah. Tum bahut ziddi ho. Is bar tumhare zid hume chod kar jane ki hai . Har bar hum tumhare zid ke samne zhuk jate hain . Par is bar nahi. He hugs her tightly. She also hugs her back.

Dreamstate over

Suddenly again jodha begins breathing. Jalal gets up from the unconscious world and says- Jodha. The hakima says its miracle that she is alive. Jalal's happiness knew no bounds. He takes jodha's hand and kisses it gently.

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Edited by anabella - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Both chappy are awesome dear
U are awesome yaar
Loved it
Nxt update kab milega
By the way am anshita be free to ask help
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: marshi

Both chappy are awesome dear
U are awesome yaar
Loved it
Nxt update kab milega
By the way am anshita be free to ask help
Loved it

Thanks Anshita. Thanks for the offer.😊 I'll surely ask you help when i need.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jodha survived👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 continue soon & do pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nxt update when and can i call u ana
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res!update de diya,..thanx fr the pm..Let me read the chappy !!then gonna unres nd cmnt..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just finished reading the chappy..great yrr!LOVE CAN CONQUER ALL!!!really even death..nd ruqs that huqqah begum..urgh...nw she will try to kill her!!!aahan aahan aahan *sobs*!!!i really got tear in my eyes...nd our jajo...so dreamy so lovable...thanks for the pm Ana dearu!!!update soonish!!when will u update again???actually na adaat ho gaya hain..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: marshi

Nxt update when and can i call u ana

You can call me, but i don't own a phone. I use my dad's phone. I don't when i'll update I haven't began writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...prithibi...

Just finished reading the chappy..great yrr!LOVE CAN CONQUER ALL!!!really even death..nd ruqs that huqqah begum..urgh...nw she will try to kill her!!!aahan aahan aahan *sobs*!!!i really got tear in my eyes...nd our jajo...so dreamy so lovable...thanks for the pm Ana dearu!!!update soonish!!when will u update again???actually na adaat ho gaya hain..

Thanks for the cmnt. I don't know when i''l update sorry. I have to begin writing. I'll try to update by tomorrow

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