AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 5- Chap 18-20 - Page 48

Originally posted by: Meenakshi731

Hai, my name Meenakshi. I am new to forum . i really loved your story.eagerly waiting for chapter 20

Originally posted by: abhi786

PP lovely update, your are back with Bang after 2 months...👏

Sukr hai ki we got update for DESIRE 🤗

Riddima helped the guy only for her anger on JO also for money.. How could she such a stupid selfish forced JO towards danger...

Jalaal got the info on JO attack lately but even then he tried his best.. Poor JO couldn't able to even understand that danger after her that she is being attacked...Jalaal is so much panicked there not knowing what is happening to JO, especially on hearing bullets, still not able to hear JO voice...

But i feel Jo may be safe and will reach to Mumbai, not being kidnap may be Abdul will come in the right time or HIS MEN save Jo from the enemies...

How could you stop the story in that cliffhanger making US waiting for next update desperately 😉 You naughty girl ..😆 Waiting for update eagerly JO kidnapped or not, but your are just unpredictable writer like Jallu 😉

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

are pagal pehle Rico ke mummy papa ka toh sulha hone de...😆

Kamini Ridhima 😡

Kya sahi pehchana Jalal ko 😆

are UPDATE me kya rakha ai..teaser pad😆

Originally posted by: lovergirlalina

Sorry for d late comment bhoolgai thi. 😛😳

Wow awesome update 👏👏⭐️

Loved it totally 👍🏼

Kya likhti h tu MashaAllah. 👏👏

Jitna lajawab likhti h utnii hi lazy bhi h tu update krne mein 😡😳

Coming to d update I felt ridhima was smart d way she was enquiring him but I was wrong sali agai na apni aukaat per 😡 kuch paiso k liyeh bikgai😈. Bikaoo kahi ki. Log paiso k liyeh kya kya krjate h😛😕😳

meherbaani krke yeh wk mein krdena update.😳

My most favorite scene was where "she clutched her mobile to her heart n still he was on d line"

Haaayyee kya scene tha 😎🤗

Loved it a lot ❤️👍🏼

Goli bhi chaladhi tune DHISHKIYYYOOUUNN 😆

abhi jalal baavla hogaya daudta bhaagta abhi udhkar ayega uski jaan k paas. 😉

Kitna tadpayegi jalal ko varshu tujhe chodhegi nhi 😆uske jalal ko itna restless krrahi h tu. 😆😛

Though it was a small update but loved reading it.😃👏 Now m eagerly waiting for nxt chap

Pls update b4 dis wk. 😳

Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

😃
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Originally posted by: Arieltabi

TEASER par chuki hu. kam se kam 10 times.😳 Ab update de.😡

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...

and your another ff?

Originally posted by: fairy216

hey PP today after seeing ur comment i feel like 😭😭😭 don't misunderstood 😆😆 these tears are d symbol of my pleasure jo phut phut ke nikal raha hai 🤣 Since d day i joined IF I was waiting 4 ur reply and finally d day is arrived. I m 222222 much happy to receive the comment of my first IF buddy, the first one who send me PM, the first one who liked my post, my only reason to join IF & also to register my presence first time ever anywhere on virtual world (but u couldn't become the one who replied me first 😡 wouldn't comment on it 🤬)
u know sometimes something in ur life comes to u sheer by chance not by choice as destiny decides it 4 u. Meeting with ur desire was an accident. u may call it the case of love at first sight 😆 Just like your Jalal when he first time met with Jodha😉 😆😆Last year i was searching a topic on net that has the word desire, & i opened a lot of pages of different sites, in this process i also opened ur thread. When i laid my eyes on it's first chapter i was just spell bound, simply mesmerized😛 couldn't take my eyes off from it just remember Jajo scene Chapter 7😎 😆😆😆 oh mine!mine!mine! can't tell u how i felt at that time 😆😆😆 if want to know ask ur Jalal as his and mine situation were alike 😎 😆😆😆I couldn't move from chair. Just wondered how could one be so brilliant and exceptional 👏😳 The realistic portrayal of emotions⭐️ the daring attitude of that villain (Jalal) 😆😆 so loving motherly affection 😛 and how can I forget my Rico 😳 I know u must be laughing 😆 but seriously everything in it a class 👏👏 Reading desire is a treat itself. I really thanks & applaud you 4 writing it. Except than my syllabus books i never took any interest in other work 😆😆 but u have changed my mentality : )
The moment when u decided not to continue further I felt like someone brutally crushed my heart into pieces. 😭😭 At that time u very much disappointed me 😡 u just snatches my sleep 😭😭😆😆 You ask what is our cooperation?? 😲Shayad kabhi nahi batati but listen now, everyday in my prayer i asked from my best buddy in the world my "Kanha" to put some senses in your mind and please get us back you. u know i hardly ask anything from Krishna since i believe God has gifted us everything in life & it's up to us how v can make best use of them but u made me ask everyday from him to show u path to never give up writing. ur talent shouldn't b utilized only in office😆😆 As a writer u r incredible 👏and i m a die hard of ur writing😳 u should write a novel, don't laugh i know u must be doing 😆 4 inspiration look at Arvind Adiga, a journalist turned novelist, a Booker awardee. v all would be glad to c u at that place👍🏼 Already u have earned so many fan followings so why wait 4 😆 just get set and go 😆😆

coming to my previous post (to be contd. session 😆😆) I would like to suggest some points only as a fan, only if u find them worthy then zara gaur pharma lena 🤣in next chappy jo ko bhej dena uske saural, more near to her Jalal 😆😆 i personally wants ki uski do char haddian aur tut jaye 🤣🤣 chill 😆 to save his jaan 😎 image the scene when she will be furnishing her wifely duties😉 since ja will be bedridden 😆 Rico insisting jajo to stay in his room, jo feeding ja with her own hands, helping him out in his dressing, bathing 😆😆 and further u know well 😉 jo doing pooja with her wet curely hair falling on her forehead and offering aarti & prasad to him and also please show a rain scene 😆😆 JA mein to nahi dikhate😕 but at least show it here 😳 & in bg song (male version😆😆) is playing, "Thoda sa pyaar hua hai thoda hai baaki, hum to dil de hi chuke hain, bus teri haan hai baaki, " but i know he is Jalal instead he will sing to scare our jo "tu mere samne main tere samne tujhe dekhu ki pyaar karu," and again jo will run off 🤣🤣 I can't think more than that😆😆

Make him realize love is earned not snatched. Though he is changing but a lot of improvement is yet to be done 😛

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

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Originally posted by: dodoneha

really liked d update😃... ur writing really rocks😊... hope dis fiasco brings jo to jalal nd rico in mumbai😛... i forsee a obessed jalal in action in near future😉... pls give us d next update soon😳...