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Originally posted by: cosmosandme
"when there is a will there is a way"that was a masterpiece. If i am going to coma, this is one of the stories i would like to hear over and over again. so reviving,refreshing, hopeful , dreamy,euphoric it is. not even exaggerating, kasam se i loved it to the core, this chapter was so inspiring, life is so incomplete if you don't love someone or something up to this extent ! their love isn't like the usual one that's shown in movies, where heroine comes out of coma on the day of getting admitted by lover's loaded language, i don't deny miracles happen but i like the fact that in your story ja-jo's love is miraculous , and everything that transpired was pragmatic,it was really hard for jalal to stick to being positive for such long period of time, but his love kept him going, he didn't become a drunkard or hopeless fellow or didn't move on but fought against all odds, like you rightly said it's hard to converse positively with someone unresponsive. but he did, and that makes him the exceptional lover, for me he got promoted to irresistible to phenomenon.the breakdown scene was very touchy. and jo's state miserable, i can't even picture her in that state, that was very wise of jalal that he made her hear everything she likes, did research on coma, must have been inspired by you :D it wasn't only treat for jo but for us too to reminisce all those wonderful times of them together. i love their texts a lot. hey the novel jalal read to jo is real or you made it up ?if it's real, wanna read...now as the stalker is gone, the huge weight have been lifted.now we can expect lots of happy moments and babies ahead i guess. *wink*. i lovvved jo's first words after coma. that made me smile like a Cheshire cat, with exposure of 32 teeth.and i agree with varshu, that the physiotherapist was totally hitting on jalal, if you write a sequel, you can make her villainess. 😆please write rest of the chapters in parts too.only three left now. i am terribly gonna miss it lashy, i mean it. your story is a top notch. i would miss reading and waiting for the chapters a lot.love you loads, and take your time for the next all updates. 😉
OMG... this chapter has brought out the poet in so many *dreamy emo*
[Cough *Kal* cough still waiting for at least a line... from you... ivvlo kovum podhum ma - ok fine you were right...]
Lemme just dream on with your reply for a few times before I get back to thinking of how to reply to it!
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