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Posted: 10 years ago
😈
as for the punishment no comments from me🤓
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kya chaling 😎... kal & lashy 😆 fighting 😲
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti


Whose reaction is extreme dear? mine or Mr Lashy's?

Your interpretation of what would have happened 😆

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


Darling those lines in blue are given the most rejoicing lines award.. it's a never before and never after moment.. I didn't say they are the best in expression or intensity.. they are the stress busters.. 😆😉
and traffic light turning green is a symbolism like everything is back in place, this time for good and for better.. 😳


YES YES YES... totally understood... totally! 😳

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


yeah.. very natural, very poignant, yet poised.. inspiring words from Bhagwant.. 👏👏
that moment I felt Jalal got an extended family apart from his ammi.. once everything is back to normalcy Jalal is no less than 4th son to Jo's father..

Jalal walks into Jodha's life with hearts of love.. Jodha walks into his life with same love + an extended home.. bless them both.. lucky chaps.. 🤗


Yes dear... Jalal got another family... Jalal might become 4th son to Mr.Singh.. but 1st child to Malthi.. that's for sure! Plus, he sure knows how to work his charms with the 'female kind'
Awww loved your words dear... boootiful!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Coz i connected that video with ticklish and never said he's going to tickle her😆 and you both made it as ticklish therapy before i come to the point .. you jalebi bhai purposely diverted me😡



didnt i say shez jalebi bai good in misleading us 🤔 ... u shud have listened to ur guruji 🤓
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Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

kya chaling 😎... kal & lashy 😆 fighting 😲

what? are you enjoying this?😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
"when there is a will there is a way"
that was a masterpiece. If i am going to coma, this is one of the stories i would like to hear over and over again. so reviving,refreshing, hopeful , dreamy,euphoric it is. not even exaggerating, kasam se i loved it to the core, this chapter was so inspiring, life is so incomplete if you don't love someone or something up to this extent ! their love isn't like the usual one that's shown in movies, where heroine comes out of coma on the day of getting admitted by lover's loaded language, i don't deny miracles happen but i like the fact that in your story ja-jo's love is miraculous , and everything that transpired was pragmatic,it was really hard for jalal to stick to being positive for such long period of time, but his love kept him going, he didn't become a drunkard or hopeless fellow or didn't move on but fought against all odds, like you rightly said it's hard to converse positively with someone unresponsive. but he did, and that makes him the exceptional lover, for me he got promoted to irresistible to phenomenon.
the breakdown scene was very touchy. and jo's state miserable, i can't even picture her in that state, that was very wise of jalal that he made her hear everything she likes, did research on coma, must have been inspired by you :D it wasn't only treat for jo but for us too to reminisce all those wonderful times of them together. i love their texts a lot. hey the novel jalal read to jo is real or you made it up ?
if it's real, wanna read...
now as the stalker is gone, the huge weight have been lifted.now we can expect lots of happy moments and babies ahead i guess. *wink*. i lovvved jo's first words after coma. that made me smile like a Cheshire cat, with exposure of 32 teeth.
and i agree with varshu, that the physiotherapist was totally hitting on jalal, if you write a sequel, you can make her villainess. 😆
please write rest of the chapters in parts too.only three left now. i am terribly gonna miss it lashy, i mean it. your story is a top notch. i would miss reading and waiting for the chapters a lot.
love you loads, and take your time for the next all updates. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


I thought this video clip would help in bringing stalker out, but it didn't.. so it was bound to bring Jodha out of coma.. finally one open end closed.. now, diamond ring and shirt.. pineapple halwa, as we discussed, let's give the chance to sasuma.. 😆

by the way.. what about robbie's painting.. is it also going to resurrect? 😉

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Originally posted by: lashy


Sweetheart - you completely missed the point of that scene! It was not meant to be seen from the phyiotherapists' POV but from Jalal's POV... as to how he returned to being the old Jalal - but with Jodha now an integral 'forever' part of it... whether she was meant to wake up in 13 days 30 days or 30 years... after Bhagwant's advice, he settled into life and started taking up his routine - taking care of himself and of his ammi - because he had to if he had to keep running this marathon with Jodha... This is the new Jalal 2.0 - dashing and debonair - but in that tucked up corner of his heart - still being faithful/continuing to be in love wth her!

In future people (say some years down the line - if Jodha wouldnt have woken up) more and more people (like the physio) would have asked him the same thing [even we would - to our brother/friend/relative etc]
'Your girlfriend still in coma.. you're not planning to move on? Marry someone else? Settle down?' But, this is how he would have answered them then too...😊

As in, he is a NEW man with NEW beginnings who reconciled with fate.. took the best of what he got, decided to live life with a smile. Look at his answer 'Yes she is in a coma' he told the physio with a smile 'But she loves roses...and she would have done the same for me!' that's his attitude!

With such an attitude obviously, life was GOING TO REWARD him -like abbu had promised.. he was going to get her back...


Varshu didn't you like this reply... crazily, this reply made me more emotional than the chapter 😳
I'm going to miss Jalal after he's gone
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Sweetheart - you completely missed the point of that scene! It was not meant to be seen from the phyiotherapists' POV but from Jalal's POV... as to how he returned to being the old Jalal - but with Jodha now an integral 'forever' part of it... whether she was meant to wake up in 13 days 30 days or 30 years... after Bhagwant's advice, he settled into life and started taking up his routine - taking care of himself and of his ammi - because he had to if he had to keep running this marathon with Jodha... This is the new Jalal 2.0 - dashing and debonair - but in that tucked up corner of his heart - still being faithful/continuing to be in love wth her!

In future people (say some years down the line - if Jodha wouldnt have woken up) more and more people (like the physio) would have asked him the same thing [even we would - to our brother/friend/relative etc]
'Your girlfriend still in coma.. you're not planning to move on? Marry someone else? Settle down?' But, this is how he would have answered them then too...😊

As in, he is a NEW man with NEW beginnings who reconciled with fate.. took the best of what he got, decided to live life with a smile. Look at his answer 'Yes she is in a coma' he told the physio with a smile 'But she loves roses...and she would have done the same for me!' that's his attitude!

With such an attitude obviously, life was GOING TO REWARD him -like abbu had promised.. he was going to get her back...



hmmm ... i have read the chapter just once now ... will read it again & check what missing point u r talking about THAT particular scene ...🤓 ... @ bold agreed to ur point ... but still ... i didnt like that therapist one bit ... firstly for flirting ,,,, n then taking 2 % of the writing space in the chapter ...😡 ...


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Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni



didnt i say shez jalebi bai good in misleading us 🤔 ... u shud have listened to ur guruji 🤓


hi 😳 where were you BTW ?? everyone missed you here.

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