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Posted: 10 years ago
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Where to start ,let's start from the beginning
We always knew vishal bhaiyya and bhabi are team jalal but daddy joined the group first in the left out lot ,we all know plight of jodha's father ,he is eternally grateful to jalal but deep inside he is now proude of his daughter's choice though time is not yet right to say it .
Mother knows her baby very well,mother knows what her child want since birth with out saying any word.
So, maybe that's what this 'coma' was all about. A drama. Another 'silent fit' from her ziddi laadli, who was so used to getting her way. After all, every other loved one had communicated with her - in turns - over the past couple of days. But, she hadn't responded. Maybe because she was throwing a tantrum to show her displeasure at everyone and everything keeping her away from this boy of her choice! Maybe she just wanted to meet HIM
This para showed that ,all her hopes are on jalal now and she is wiling to do whatever it takes to wake up her baby.
In this whole period jalal showed immense strength and his presence of mind ,the research he did ,we do that when we really love someone selflessly .
Still he broke down at the very sight of his fiery girl ,it was bound to happened ,I knew it picture is not going to be pleasant one still I was as helpless as jalal .


'NO! I need to do this now!' he huffed in a very un-Jalal like manner, the agitation rendering him almost short of air 'I'm not mad! Why do you think I'm trying so frantically to get her out of this state ASAP? Kyunki, all research I've read has proved that the best chances to revive a coma patient is within the first four-five weeks... after that... her probabilities of slipping into a permanent vegetative state are MUCH HIGHER
My heart sank at this moment ,can't even imagine what jalal must be going through ,keeping this inside must have been killing him but he had to to be brave for others and jalal did just that but his breaking point come soon when he tried frantically with video and keep on checking her for response,I just could see that scene ,feel it ,I was cring with jalal .
Then
'For what? For trying?' bade bhaiyya quipped 'Strange, isn't it? Grown men like us... reduced to tears because of people we care about...' he paused, before inserting a significant adjective there 'Grown STRONG men like us...'
Men like us ,finally bade bhaiyya said it so now jalal is his man .the advice he gave him that pat on shoulder ,I am sure jo is on 9 th cloud ,I was .
Finally

'Jo!' he gasped under his breath the moment a massive burden had just been knocked off his shoulders 'Tujhe tho...' he sniggered in disbelief, as he spoke his first words to a 'conscious' Jodha Singh 'Is that really what you told the nurses? Your first words? That you had to wake up because you want to celebrate your 63rd birthday?'

'To celebrate it with you' she mouthed a correction. And made it a point to beam, though exhausted.

His jo was back where she belonged to her jalal.

Shards I have no words to express my gratitude ,my happiness ,,you are a gem ,you have no idea how talented you are ,you make your reader feel ,go on a journey and this this time from last chapter it has been roller coaster ride for me ,so many up and down and finally such a sweet present. I have never been so emotional at list while reading any novel but you made me feel every thing what our jalal ,jodha and what whole family was feeling .

I was suppose to take nap after reading this chappy but whole thing was on repeat on my head ,I was thinking about every ones emotions ,I was feeling jalal and loved bade bhaiyya today.

Love you shards ,just one koshin how jo wake up since I see none of our theories came true 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: SARA4444


😲 uv di maar degi 😆

edited 😆

We are all so scared of her 😆
Physiotherapist tho gayee
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..


what a question? 😭... 😭...pothum! ... I am leaving.

...lucky I have such late church 😆


And the drama continues... 😆
So, Divi cookie monster! Decided
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy


And the drama continues... 😆
So, Divi cookie monster! Decided



Sorry Lashy for hogging your thread with the drama ... but it was fun 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: lashy

Oy... 😆 you know what happened to other thread... I was yet to reserve for part 2 aur tumne reply kiyaa naa.. tho ghar shift karnaa padaa... hee hee

Btw you took two hours. 😲 Is that a good thing or a bad thing re *thinking* hee hee...
And why wouldn't be relieved? I told you na... happy ending!
Love you MOREEE 🤗

good thing ,when you love something you keep on licking your fingers 😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy


And the drama continues... 😆
So, Divi cookie monster! Decided


hmmm looks like even if we are in a car...or getting dressed...or whatever ... we have started a high trp drama ... worldwide.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Anusha..


hmmm looks like even if we are in a car...or getting dressed...or whatever ... we have started a high trp drama ... worldwide.



BTW Chitti which question did you have issue with ... there were two questions in my post 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyavm



BTW Chitti which question did you have issue with ... there were two questions in my post 😆


'I will always be your Magal right'


If I start on this ... Lashy will have to write another parallel FF... and then Banjaras will hunt me down and crush me into a pulp for 1) turning Divy into a class A DRama Queen 2) Doing drama in this thread 3) Dragging their precious writer into a side show.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: al_pal

Love you shards ,just one koshin how jo wake up since I see none of our theories came true 😆

Now now... my DEAREST DEAREST tomboy... no aansoon 'imagine hugs!'😳
I'll come back to your reply in detail...but first this!

Wait a sec - you asking how she woke up?
She woke up because of Jalal's repeated never-giving-up efforts re...

See - once he's reconciled with 'life' and its unpredictability after bhaiyya's sermon, he picked up the pieces and started living life on more normal terms. But Jodha was always there.. part of his everyday routine too...
So he kept up with office work, police chakkar, phyio appointments, ammi etc...
and also this (we get to read about his new routine - in the physio's clinic) means he goes to her everyday... spends an hour with her... talks to her... plays her the clip...

Just enough time. To get to the hospital for his 5:30 - 6:30 pm daily catch-up session. To chat with Jo about his day. Play her their favourit-est video clip.

It was that video clip that helped her come out it..
that's why her first lines - the ones she wakes up telling the nurses - are the lines from the clip na

'I want to celebrate my 63rd birthday! (with Jalal)'
😳
Only, it didn't happen overnight.. or a week... took a month... but it was 'healing' not 'magic' remember!

P.S. also the whole thing becomes a circle/cycle... Jalal was about to delete that video clip during that break up - which he didn't... turns out that birthday clip was her 'favouritest' sentiment in the whole wide world! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: divyavm



Sorry Lashy for hogging your thread with the drama ... but it was fun 😆


Don't sorry me 😡

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..


'I will always be your Magal right'


If I start on this ... Lashy will have to write another parallel FF... and then Banjaras will hunt me down and crush me into a pulp for 1) turning Divy into a class A DRama Queen 2) Doing drama in this thread 3) Dragging their precious writer into a side show.


Hai hai... how dreamy!

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