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Posted: 10 years ago

#681

Super update

It is lovely to see caring and jealous jalal

Is there any Mystery around arohi death

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surabhi chandgothia

@chandgothia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#682

Good job ...write up was amazing...hope to see the next part soon...

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Sofia Liverpool

@._.Bubbles._.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#683

OMG awesome update Love it sooo much

Jalal break down with jodha

I hv to say u had me of my seat it was the best ever really love it 😊😳❤️

Will be waiting for the next update

BTW thanks for d pm

#with_love_bubbles ❤️

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swatiluthra

@swatiluthra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#684

Hayeee this angry jalal is sooo good mrs. Tokas 😛 😆 .
Felt sad for jalal past , but wonder how arohi died 😭 .
Loved how both made up to each other after that blunder in the morning . Kitne passionate hai dono 😳 😆 .
So finally surya Neh ghar mein entry maar li, aab jalal ho ga jealous 😆 , aur Jodha ka toh pura benefit hai isme 😉 😆

Aabhi jaldi jaldi agla ch Bhi update kardo mrs. Tokas.
Really wanna know how arohi died n of course wanna c more romantic scenes of JJ . 😭

N thanks for the pm dear. 😛

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nankulkarni

@nankulkarni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#685

beautiful
but why suryabhan came?
update soon 😃

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Akanksha Sinha

@AkankshaENRIQUE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#686

RES...😉

WILL COMMENT SOON...😉

UNRESSING DONE...😳

Edited by AkankshaJA - 10 years ago

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_akdha.forever_

@_akdha.forever_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#687

ohhh i love long updates...thanks pari for giving one😛

i cherished reading it slowly,taking time...😉

and it was wonderful..👏

jo's emotion after knowing about his past...she was shattered but how relieved she must be knowing that jalal is only hers now...she is the one family he has!!!

and this letter..who wrote it...has it got to do anything with jalal's ex-gf arohi...

aur ye suryabhan...at that hour of night

some connection seems to be there between all these😲😲

jalal's jealousy will be worthwhile to watch😆😉

do update soon dear😊