15~NOT just a passionate affair~ 56 (2 PT) 7 Oct - A fitting END? - Page 29

Originally posted by: divyavm

Rashmi ji , what about glancing at my take 5 on page 2 😆

Originally posted by: Neetz

1. ohh yeah.. how did I forget that? sorry..

I want him hale and hearty soon.. can't see him like this..😭😭

Don't be sad sweetie...he'll be fine! 😭

Btw, you saw my reply to someone else about how he's taken care of others... strange you know I never inserted those bits and lines deliberately... they just happened naturally and it fit him to the T with this latest update -

'Jalal stays out so late over the weekends!' she continued 'When he doesn't pick his calls, I...'

'Why do you worry so much bahu? He's nearly 24! All boys these days like to party and have fun - Jalal is no different...' the greying man refuted - sporting a comforting smile as he did so 'What matters at the end of the day is that he's a responsible boy...he's the one beside you when your rheumatism flares up...he accompanies you on your medical appointments... he knows what he wants in life...he scores well in his exams...'

Passing over his empty plate to the servant, the old man received the dessert dish with apparent pleasure 'Once he completes his MBA I'll be more than glad to train him and hand him his father's business...then, I can happily retire from all responsibilities.'

'Anyway, could you both please pass the kheer this way too...by the way, Taaya Abbu hadn't the doctor advised you to cut down on all this - you shouldn't be having any of it in the first place!'

Another place

'Taaya..I'll do the needful don't worry...' he prompted his engrossed uncle at the other end - attempting to conclude the conversation so he could concentrate on speeding up his journey 'I'll catch up later...I'm getting late to college now...please take care of your health...bye!' he abruptly paused there. His attention had just been caught by the slow-moving silhouette of a person, some distance away. Switching off his bluetooth, he watched closely.

And ever since his breakup with Jodha, he decided to take up the office life too... his plans of wanting to travel the world were put on hold!

He lost his Outstanding achiever's certificate too...

2. Really crying. you probably don't know the extent to which this story has affected me. I am living it too IYKWIM. dunno how else to explain it. to add to it the show is also at a very very sad juncture. all this has taken a toll on me I suppose. u don't be sorry please. no no .

here 🤗 for you.

Oh no... I understand Neetz... don't worry 🤗

3. guesses about how Jo will come out of coma re. u give us the homework then forget yourself. kaash school teachers bhi aise hote.. though let me tell you I was a good student..doing my work on time..😆😆

Hee hee... yeah I read your guesses and I must say I loved the bottom three ones...

Everyone's NEARLY there.. but not THERE... so hopefully there's something to look forward to..

Originally posted by: Rashmi81

Btw ,shrads one doubt re.

I have forgot whether I read this in Jalal's description,I even rechecked the initial chapters too ,I want to know that Jalal has a mustache? If he has than plz plz in one of the upcoming chapters put a scene that he cuts his mustache Becoz Jo doesn't like it .😛

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

i think jalal is going to whisper in her ear ,she just needs to hear his voice and then kiss to wake up his sleeping beauty ,she knows he is irresistible 😳😉

Originally posted by: lashy

Hey Pallu back.. Palak paneer half way through 😎

Originally posted by: lashy

It's definitely not that simple dear.. 😆

Originally posted by: Rashmi81

Oh you have written one? Will now read it .😆

Originally posted by: divyavm

Take 5 for another riveting chapter with 56 writer-e-khaas ... it was tiring for us, but I am sure it was even more tiring for you 🤗

(1) Animal instinct: We knew that Jalal had reached the same level of extremity as Ramcharan in the end of the last chapter where we were told of the transition ... But , the beginning of 56 took this to a new level ... The hunting-prey imagery and analogies were amazing and brought it to life. If last week I liked the flower under the shoe, this week it was "like a rabid canine paralyzing a deadly insect under its claws" and then the image of the cannonball with Jalal's final ramming into the creep after he swallowed the key

Agree with you.Even I liked this.

(2) A return to senses ... How amazing your Jalal is that he came back to senses at the right moment ... What good would be avenging Jodha's pain if it would threaten the same future with her? But what an amazing ploy- he made it seem he was saving Ramcharan ... Only to have oil greased hands to drop his foe to a fitting end. And some may ask why Jalal had to go to such extremes with Ramcharan, but he had to - or else Ramcharan would have thwarted every attempt of Jalal to save Jodha.

Exactly .He was a pagal meheboob here who was mad with anger and revenge but he was not at all bewakoof to do anything which will threaten his future.And yes the ploy was amazing.This is called Tedha Jalal.

(3) Isn't it amazing how adrenaline can bring you strength ... But immediately Jalal weakened as he saw the blood. His despair at seeing Jodha was heart-wrenching ... Especially in such a moment that he had defeated their adversary. And poor guy, he kept saying how he was late. His two last actions in the living room touched me ...The following four things touched me in the end of this scene:

- One was asking Abdul to make sure that Jodha went in the first ambulance ... His presence of mind when he heard there was only one ambulance is amazing
- Second was his taking Jodha to the door ... To make sure her rescue was as quick as possible ... And the beautiful way he was connected to her and talking to her the whole time - particularly the line "You've got to be strong girl... you've got to help me out here... ok?"

- The loving kiss

- The symbolic nature of the taaveez ... and how it wanted to be a part of her now

And how ominous was the "sleep" that he was referring to ... the sleep that both Jodha and Jalal went off too .. leaving their friends hanging.

(4) Renu's practicality, guts, and presence of mind: Today Renu stood strong for me ... yes Abdul was also trying his best and pushing forward ... but I liked four things with Renu today:

- The way she objected "Why have YOU given up?" to Abdul ... but then later understood the state of Abdul

- She herself was getting pulled into grief without all the dead-ends ... but seeing Meera she herself pulled herself together and asked her to be strong for them

- Her presence of mind when she saw the blood through the bottom of the door ... and covered it ... because if the group had seen it ... all hope and perseverance may have crashed

- And then she was extremely practical and found the lock smith.

Most of the times I feel uncomfortable when Renu is around,But today she was good,

(5) And as always, my favorite parts are the way you transition scenes ... moving from Part 1 to Part 2 ... we do not know where we are ... as does Jalal not know where he is.

How beautiful is the part in blue? In the realm, between life and death ,and as you are fighting for your life, you often do see memories floating around you (I myself have shared a similar experience with me) ... you travel through time. How beautiful it was ... the image of a young boy with his father ... and the imagery was beautiful "It was God's skilled artwork on this canvas of nature." And to be honest, this scene was like a sunshine in the darkness ... before we all came into the darkness with him and transitioned to darkness and being alone ... when he woke up! Hats off for a brilliant addition to the chapter! 👏

Yaha pe toh Lashy was Like Sachin.The champion.

And then, we also wonder what is this white room he is in ... just as he is.

White rooms and people in white coats scare me.Please Shrads take them out from here soon.

And you kept us well in suspense in the second part - we didn't know who was the patient they said could not survive ... we did not know what happened to Jodha. And you brought some closure, as we knew Jalal was safe and Jodha was alive but in a coma. I am not worried Lashy that Jodha is in a coma ... after all how can she wake up from her deep slumber till she knows that her Jalal is waiting for her on the other side ... your Jalal will get her out just like the show Jalal brought Jodha back after the drinking of poison. 😳

Thanks again for a beautiful, but tiring (more for you), update writer-e-khaas 🤗

Kya Baat hain. Divi.Jhakaas take 5 .

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..

then at least include a disclaimer as long as Om Puri's...

you should know the rules by now na 😕

...wait ... 😡

Originally posted by: al_pal

i was about to make that but saw date on paneer ,it was already expired so making masala egg curry 😆,shards I need recipe for palak paneer please pm me na