Akdha SS FeeLingS!!!!! #3 ||CLOSED|| new link added - Page 15

Originally posted by: Jas2204

What an awesome and fun update. you liked it???? I was laughing all the way reading this. heheh!! sachii??😆 You have a great sense of humor. really?? 😲Love Mirza's one liners. 😊. oh thanks🤗

I feel bit afraid for Jodha because she has started to develop feeling for jalal. I hope he is not going to be cruel to her.yea!! i hope this too😆 She is way too young to handle any of this in a mature way. Don't want to see her spirit broken. yup!! she is too innocent to think about the outcome of her new developed feeling🤔

Originally posted by: rima4ever

continue soon

Originally posted by: marshi

Awesome update

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome.. Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: Kutty58

Thanks for the PM... Cotton is such a cute pie. yea!! he is😆.. Hope he gets jalal's acceptance soon... 😆 it depends on jalal😆

As I don't understand Hindi... Dono what the song is all about... But it sure looks kinda funny...the song is just reflecting their annoyance and frustration regarding studies😆

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Aisha Aisha Aisha!!!😲😲 waited so long for your comment!!!

What a chapter it was!!👏👏 Awesome! Dhamakedaar.. aur ruk main naya word dhund ke laata hun😆awe-inspiring.. purrfect chapter for me. oh gawd!! naya word!!!😆..😳 You remember how you used to say: a chapter is perfect when it contains 3 things..- feelings, emotions and and and yup comedy (yaad hai na?😆) not comedy but fun😆 Tere har chapter mein emotions and comedy hote hain.. aur is mein to feelings bhi thi! Jodha ki feelings.. wo nayi waali😉🤣 *teasing smile* arre iska naam he feelings is liye toh rakha hai🤣

So it was a purrrfect chapter! Hats off to your skills my friend!👏👏 (main sacchi mein hat nahi utarungi😆) dagabaaz😲 Now coming to the chapter. cotton cotton cotton.. I just love this cutie pie!🤗 (Ye hug cotton ke liye tha😆) haawww😲He's too cute..😳 ab mujhe zyada yaad nahi hain... jitna yaad hain utna likhta hun...😃 itni jaldi bhool gyi🥺

1. Jalal and Cotton encounter inthe bedroom- Yaar Jalal kitna chidta hain iss pyare se cotton se.. not good.. cotton to itna pyaara hain.. ad his actions also are bery bery adorable.. kitna search kiya maine!! cats ke baare mei😆

2. Gym waala scene- Aiiyyo cotton climbed on the treadmill... Too good!👏👏😆 I LOVED that scene...😳 Phir comes our awesome Jodha.. KODAK moment🤣 This girl.. I wonder if there's someone like her in this whole wide world.. but then your mind hits my name..pata nahi kyun?🤣 youuu!! anuuu!!😡 but koi ni i will take it as a compliment😆

3. Breakfast mein trouble! Bataao, bacchon ko breakfast bhi thik se nahi kar diya.. yahaan bhi exams ki baat aa gayi.. ab kitna padhein ye nanhi si jaan... aiyyo Jodha.. beta zyada mat padhan.. sehat ke liye accha nahi hota🤣 mere exams the toh jodha ke bhi hone chahiye🤣

4. Drooling and Drooling!- Beta sharmane ki koi baat nahi hain.. he's all yours! tera hi to pati hain..😳🤣 usko sharam nhi aati😆

5. School mein gadbad- Ye bacchi kahin chain se nahi reh sakti kya?😲 Wahaan Jalal iski breath ko irregular kar deta hain aur yahaan iske zabardasti ke dost...😡🤣 but I loved the Made up story.. Jalal... despo.. too good 🤣 heheh!! kuch zyada he boasting ho gyi🤣

5. Pair fisla- Bechaari Jodha.. abhi unn shaitaanon se bachi thi ki pair fisal gaya.. aiyyo Aisha not good hun... bechaari ko tang karti rehti hain😡

kisi ne yeh nhi dekha ki muscle pull ke karan voh apni false love story ko proof de paayi😆

6. Worried Jalal- Kisiko kisiki chinta ho rahi thi?😲 Kahin wo kisiko Jalal aur kisiki Jodha to nahi??😲 ohh gawd!! but jalal tabhi bhi nahi maanta😡

7. Medical room- "Who the hell made you a doctor??... I'll file a case against you.." Shant ho jaa mere angry young man🤣 her baat mei gussaa!! uff oh!! jalal

8. Classmates ko laga 440 watts ka jhatka!😲- Jodha Jalal saath saath? 😲Kaise?😲 majboorii😆

9. I'm the Sultan Of Facebookistan... Waah Waah👏👏🤣 kyaaa waah?😆

10. The two wishes- ''A day with you Mr. Khan.." Aiyyyo Jodha you're falling for him😲😳 kuch toh hua hai kuch ho gya hai🤣

11. I'm angry on you Jalal- Ye Ruks kahan se tapak padi?😡 Janta Jawaab chahti hain Aisha madam😡Aur janta nahi to main to jawaab chahti hi hun😡 arre!! bechari fir itni jaldi chali bhi toh gyi😆

12. Aur wo gaana.. how I loved it!!!👏👏🤣Kya modifications kiye the yaarr... loved it!❤️ ye sab mere dosto ki harqate hai, mai bass idher aake unhe apne hisaab se post ker deti hu🤣Jalal to hil gaya hoga ye gaana sunkar...kuch kuch aisa: mai zarur shock ho gyi hu😲

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All in all it was a full package update for me!😳 you're an amazing writer Miss. Aisha Sharma.. keep it up!👏😃 haaye!! mera naam😆 btw yeh toh keh do it was a long chap, maine apne purane records tod diye, 8573 words😎

Originally posted by: yurimehta11

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