Adham is hell bent on carnage - and Atga is dead (RIP)!

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Friends, yesterday was again a pretty fast-paced episode that ended sadly with the death of poor Atga. It's a moment of great sadness for me because I really like the rotund guy and his deep sincerity and his utter loyalty to Jalal. I thought that we would have a gap of about at least two days this week before we see the death of Atga, but alas, the fateful event happened yesterday itself. How very sad was that, and what a hero's death he died!

And what's more, in the precap, we see Jalal with a bloodied face and hands coming down the terrace to meet Maham, who seems to have been temporarily let out of jail and is surrounded by sipahis. From the look of that precap shot, I am getting a feeling that Jalal has already had Adham killed (or maybe has killed him himself or been involved in the killing) and maybe Maham has been given permission to come out of jail to see her dead son. This I say because the expression on Jalal's face in the precap is both angry and rueful as if he trying to tell Maham "I had to do this to Adham. He left me no choice!"

The Atga death came in the third part of the episode. The episode itself seemed divided into three parts. The first part had the rather romantic interlude of Jodha and Jalal playing cat and mouse with each other. In the second part of the episode the systematic trap laid by Adham for Jalal became apparent, but as usual Adham bungled twice and failed to get his prey - Jalal. But the overall momentum towards the climax was built up. In the third part of the episode, after drinking himself into a lather all night, Adham, in the wee hours of the next morning went on a senseless rampage - or rather a wild carnage. At the end of this mindless butchering of sipahis left, right and centre, was the disgustingly macabre murder of Atga!

I've divided my analysis below also into these three parts since each of them had a different cinematic pace and quality.

The romantic beginnings of the episode

Earlier in the episode things seemed to be jovial and happy as the three Begums of Jalal served him the food they had cooked, while he was playing cat and mouse games with Jodha. He was trying to wheedle Jodha to sit beside him, spend time alone with him and give him a chance to make love to her. But Jodha was playing games with him, trying to elude him. She wouldn't sit next to him at lunch though he tried winking at her to do so. Then he finished his lunch and asked for a walk, and she cleverly got him entangled into a game of chess with Ruq. He finally finished that when he went into her hojra to nab Jodha there, when she again demurred and by then he had got the drift. This naughty queen was playfully extracting revenge for the Atifa affair!

Jalal then decided to turn the tables against her. When she finally yielded to his embrace, and decided to reciprocate his feelings of love, he said he was busy and had to go and she had to do puja and distribute the prasad, and he started walking away. She then had to beg him to stay and after they both mutually realised that their games were up, they stood together in a truce that changed into a hug, and they presumably spent the rest of the afternoon together!

I thought it was a very clever touch by the Creatives to start the episode with the romantic scenes. As romantic scenes go it was quite sweet. It was not cloyingly or achingly romantic, but I thought it was a good idea by the Creatives to show Jodha trying to elude Jalal as a playful way to "make him pay for the Atifa affair".That gave the story some continuity from the Atifa track. I also like Jalal's relentless pursuit of Jodha and then the way he tried turning the game on its head and making her chase him instead as he acted pricey. In the end all mutual games were dissolved with a hug and the scene left one with the impression that the rest of the day was spent by the couple in "tanha" and in lovemaking, as Jalal himself declared he had come to her room to display his mohabbat! So the scene must have mightily pleased all on the Forum.
Usually we would have just termed these types of scenes as lollipop scenes, being regularly rationed in small doses with every episode. But in yesterday's episode it was important to see these opening romantic scenes in contrast with what followed. This pleasant lull in the lives of Jodha and Jalal was needed to give the rest of the episode the harsh edge that it eventually produced. We needed Jalal and Jodha to be least expecting this Atga death disaster so that it would come as a total shock to them and to us. And it did!

The trap is set by Adham but he bungles twice

After the romantic scenes we first got wind of something sinister afoot when Atga got word from a suspicious-looking messenger that some bhagis wanted a secret meeting by the river in the dead of the night with Jalal. Atga prised this information out of the messenger at swordpoint and then decided he would go in Jalal's clothes rather than let Jalal risk his life. To be fair he did tell Jalal of this plan (which we were shown later in flashback) but Jalal clearly vetoed the plan! Nevertheless, at the appointed hour, Atga did go with a small set of troops to the riverside, wearing Jalal's clothes.

Meanwhile Javeeda saw Adham stashing his sword into his belt and leaving his room with his henchman Shamsuddin in the dark hours of the night. Despite her asking him pointedly as to where he was going, Adham merely cursed Jalal and set off. Alarm bells must have rung in Javeeda's head for she seems to have run behind Adham to warn Jalal.

At the riverside, Adham and his henchman waited restively for Jalal but meanwhile a frenzied Javeeda ran towards them shouting Jalal's name. The ruthless Adham threw a dagger at her to silence her. She fell with a mighty flop to the floor, severly wounded, and a callous Adham did not even care to look that way. He had meanwhile spotted Atga and his men, and thinking Atga to be Jalal he sent another dagger flying that pierced Atga's chest and pushed him also to the floor. But then the disguise of Atga became apparent, and seeing that he had made two mighty blunders in the space of three minutes, Adham rode back his horse from the spot , fleeing like a coward.

Jalal at the Palace was already in a bit of lather because the khwaja sera supplier told him he had seen Atga leaving the Palace in Jalal's clothes. Jalal immediately comprehended the situation, but by the time he could react the bodies of Javeeda and Atga arrived on stretchers needing immediate medical attention. Jalal took over the care of Atga while Jodha decided to take care of Javeeda. Hakims were pressed into service at both ends, and on his part Jalal told both Atga and JijiAnga that he was very displeased that Atga had disobeyed his orders and taken such risks on his behalf. But the ever loyal Atga swore that he wanted to die in the protection of his King. Jalal could do no more than be moved by such loyalty.

Javeeda on the other hand was unconscious and her hakim said she wouldn't speak till at least the next afternoon, so Jalal had to wait to interrogate her, for he had heard there had earlier been a fight between Adham and Javeeda - and it was most likely Javeeda knew a lot of what had happened and she too had given her life to save Jalal from something or someone!

Mansingh, Munim Khan and Aziz Koka were pressed into investigative service. But meanwhile Maham going slowly mad in her jail cell started having hallucinations of the young boy Jalal covered in blood and it looked to her like it was an omen for Adham trying to kill Jalal. She desperately wanted to send a paigam to Adham to tell him to desist from any such thing, but the jailer simply would not heed Maham's request.

All of these scenes above started building the momentum of the episode leading us to anticpate something terrible was going to culminate. The bungled attempts of Adham at the riverside seemed to show his agitation and then his bolting on his horse showed his cowardice. Jalal and Jodha tending to the wounded did give us some hope that Javeeda would live another day to tell all to Jalal - and that Atga would not die so soon, for he was wounded but not mortally.
But the real apshagun sanket came via Maham's hallucination in jail of a bleeding and desperate young boy Jalal who appeared and vanished before her eyes like a vision. Maham's desperation to curb Adham's mindless murder of Jalal and the jailguard's refusal to allow her to reach Adham in time, started really building up for the moment when Adham would become uncontrollable. I thought this part of the episode was also very well constructed by the Creatives because the situation started to escalate with Maham's frenzied screeching, and there was a feeling things were coming to a head very rapidly.

And then the absolutely unforgiveable thing happened.

Very early the next morning, the ever loyal Atga woke from his wounded state to rush to check the accounts ... for Todarmal had told him there was major fraud being perpetrated by Adham. He was thus sitting with the account books, when Adham who had been drinking the whole night decided to wait no longer to kill Jalal - and to kill Atga who always saved Jalal. He rode into the Palace with his sword at the ready, and started cutting up all the sipahis into ribbons. He marched along in his murderous mission almost till he reached Jalal's hojra where Jalal was still asleep.

Then perchance he came upon Atga in the accounts room and decided to take the diversion. He went in, blamed Atga for all the ills in his life - notably his loss of jagir, rank and status - and kicked down the already hurt Atga and slashed his sword across his stomach, further gravely wounding him. Still valiantly, Atga swore loyalty to Jalal and berated Adham even with his last breath. But unable to hear a word more, Adham then viciously stabbed Atga in the chest with a vertical blow of his sword. With a huge splatter of blood, Atga was dead!

The episode ended there, and it was a long moment before I could register that it was all over for Atga! I know he's just a screen character but I did feel as if someone close to me had died before my own eyes and I was numb and unable to take it all in. That was the effect of the silent presence of Atga in my life after watching him being a part of my days for the last 300 episodes! He was not a major character by any means, nor a loud or forceful one. But look how, despite being such a modest, soft-spoken and placid man, he had ingrained himself into my psyche as someone close to me personally! That can only speak for the quality of Atga's characterisation.
Of all the characters we have seen in this serial, one of the most consistent ones was Atga. We never ever had a crib that his character was being butchered. He remained steady to the personality he was originally shown as - and if anything, he embellished this personality with more and more good deeds for Jalal, without in any way doing something that would have been termed an aberration. In the end, we are able to remember him by a single unadulterated thought that he exemplified: unwavering loyalty!
The one thing about Atga that always struck me was his doe-eyed look in the face of someone Jalal leaned on for conducting his army affairs. For a soldier his eyes were really soft and compassionate. Even when he was supposed to be enraged and ready for gruesome war, his clear and calm eyes belied his martial get up and the rest of his body language. I've never seen a kinder-looking soldier in all my life, and it has made me wonder about soldiers in general. I've now become interested in whether all soldiers, no matter how fierce they are in words and intent are always betrayed by the conflicting gentle look in their eyes. Thanks Atga for inadvertently showing us that even for a fiery soldier, trained to kill and maim, outer demeanour is something else and inner core is something else.

Meanwhile, for those who want it, here's what all happened in the episode yesterday:

Jalal is having lunch served by his wives, but he is aching to spend time with Jodha. He winks to Jodha to sit near him. But she teases him by staying away from him saying she has to feed Rahim. Hamida meanwhile says to Jodha this idea of hers to divert Jalal's mind from his sorrow about Maham is a very good one. Jalal wants, however, to find ways to spend time alone with Jodha but she keeps eluding him.

Atga is in his room when a messenger enters saying he has a message to be given only to Jalal. Atga threatens that he should be told. The man then says two bhagis from Gwalior and Jaunpur want to make a deal by the river at night with Jalal. Atga decides to tell Jalal but go himself dressed as Jalal - - but Jalal vetoes the plan.

Meanwhile after lunch again Jalal again tries to get Jodha alone for a walk but she says she has leg pain. But she cleverly makes Ruq play chess with him and eludes him again saying "I am going to see Ammijaan". He now realises she has no leg pain and is getting back at him playfully for the Atifa issue - and he is determined not to let her win.

In her room Jodha is again surprised by Jalal who comes and hugs her from behind and says he has already played with Ruq and done all his meetings and is now totally free and she has no more bahanas to try and evade him. Jodha tries to say he must play again with Ruq when he shuts her mouth with his hand. The gesture makes them grow closer and lock their eyes, and soon Jodha yields to Jalal's persuasive ways. Then she starts leaning against him and wanting his hug and his company but he turns the tables on her.

He now starts saying he has work to do and she has to do puja and give prasad to all - and he tries to leave till she has to beg him to stay. He says "I know what games you have been playing with me and I can do the same." She yields to him again and this time without protest - and eventually they both embrace and spend time alone together.

Adham in his room with his henchman Shamsuddin takes his sword and leaves secretly at night. Javeeda sees this and senses trouble and asks him but he doesn't tell her where he is going. Javeeda runs behind him to warn Jalal for she senses Adham is gunning for Jalal to kill him. Adham and his henchman hide near the bushes near river waiting for Jalal to meet the fake bhagis (a trap they have engineered).

When Jalal doesn't appear Adham gets restless. Meanwhile Javeeda comes running towards Adham, shouting for Jalal to warn him. With a kneejerk reaction Adham throws a dagger and almost kills Javeeda. She falls at the spot, quite seriously wounded. Adham lets her lie there as he spots Jalal and his troops, and from that distance he throws another dagger at Jalal and almost kills ... but its actually Atga dressed as Jalal who has come against Jalal orders. Atga also falls to the ground and collapses from the hit on his chest.

Adham sees his twin mistakes and gets onto his horse and bolts. Meanwhile the khwaja sera supplier at the court runs to Jalal to say Atga went out in the night wearing Jalal's clothes. Jalal is very upset that Atga disobeyed his orders. Just then both Javeeda andAatga arrive back at the Palace, badly wounded on stretchers. Jodha says "I'll care for Javeeda ...Shahenshah, you go with Atga". Jalal agrees.

Jalal tells Atga and his wife he is very upset with Atga risking his life, but Atga says "I want to die saving you". Hakims attend to Atga.

Meanwhile Adham is drinking all night and cursing himself badly for bungling everything. He gets more and more ferocious by morning. He begins to look for a scapegoat for his failures to kill Jalal and his anger turns against Atga, who time and again manages to shatter his plans to get close enough to Jalal to kill him. Adham decides that Atga too must be killed.

Meanwhile Jalal goes to see Javeeda but her hakim says she will regain consciousness only after next afternoon . Ruq says that some bandhis oveheard Adham and Javeeda fighting ... so Jalal thinks Javeeda may soon be able to tell all, when she's conscious again.

Jalal instructs Mansingh, Aziz Koka and Munim Khan to spread in all directions and search for the bhagis who he thinks were behind the Atga attack. In jail Maham starts hallucinating as if small boy Jalal is covered in blood and needs her help ... she immediately fears that Adham may be plotting the death of Jalal and this was the sanket her mind was getting from this hallucination. She wants to send an urgent paigam to Adham not to kill Jalal ... but the jailer doesn't heed her request.

Next morning Atga is up early as he goes to check accounts though still unwell. Todarmal has discovered major fraud by Adham that Atga wants to go over with affine tooth comb. But by this time Adham unable to control himself wants to kill Jalal.

Adham rides into the Palace with unsheathed sword and chops all sipahis guarding the way to Jalal's hojra where Jalal is still sleeping. Adham then spots Atga working on the accounts and decides to kill Atga. He blames Atga for preventing his attempts to get close to Jalal and says Atga is responsible for the loss of his jagir, his rank and his every privilege. He kicks the already wounded Atga and slashes his sword across his stomach to wound him gravely. Still Atga speaks of great loyalty to Jalal and berates Adham in dying words. But Adham then stabs Atga through his chest with a sword, and with a great splatter of blood, Atga dies on the spot.

In the precap, Jalal is fully covered in face and hands with blood as Maham is brought face to face with him surrounded by jail sipahis. (It looks like the scene where Jalal may have killed Adham and Maham has been told about it and has come out to be shown her dead son.)

Now the fallout of Atga's death is also not pretty to contemplate. I suspect if things are going so fast, today we may well see the end of Adham also. The precap seems to suggest that.

The question in my mind is: what then can we expect to see on Thurdsay and Friday? Would the episodes on those days have more to do with the effect of Adham's death on Maham? Or would it result in her banishment? Or contrarily would Jalal actually find a corner of pity for Maham and again soften towards her (which I don't want)? We'll have to wait and see ...

Diksha tells me that maybe next week (maybe, but not sure!) there may be a small leap of 6 months to go straight to the birth of the twins, so let's wait and see if that sort of thing happens too ...

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katana thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good Analysis.😊
Small leap that too next week will be too early. They have to show MA's death too before leap. Right from the beginning of the serial, Cvs have shown MA as such a strong personality with equal importance along with the leads. We can expect some revenge from MA & Co. I don't want cvs to rush for small leap.
Cvs has shown Atga's loyalty in a nice manner.
Edited by katana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very good analysis of a rather sad episode Mansi.

It was sad for me due to two reasons . Firstly because of Atgha saab's death and secondly due to the lovable Javeda getting wounded .

I did not expect Atgha saab to die today . It kind of took me by shock . What a selfless man he was , a truly loyal father-like figure to Jalal who only had Jalal's best interest in mind and served him faithfully . It was really touching to see him praying for the well being of the shehenshah even while dying .
I was very upset watching him die today . Jalal will be heartbroken and we will witness his reaction to Adham's unforgivable act , tomorrow

Javeda , an innocent lovable character with childlike innocence laced with intelligence , look at the manner in which she showed her loyalty for Akbar . I loved the way in which she stood up against her husband by taking the knife stab meant for Jalal , on herself . I would like to see Akbar honoring her at the Diwan e khaas by acknowledging her act of loyalty . Hopefully the Creatives do not do away with the character of Javeda .

I liked the naughty Jodha today teasing and being playful with Jalal . I was actually looking forward to enjoying the banter between Jodha and Akbar and I did . However Atgha saab's death and Javeda's injury left me feeling very sad .
Edited by JAfanCharu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for a wonderful analysis Mansi.
But it was a fast paced episode.What touched me most was Javeda's death.I never expected such strength from her.Javeda always took Jodha as role model and wanted to do something heroic like her.See finally ,she actually tried to save Jo's hubby.This was not done for want for any heroic thing but just her pure conscience led her to do this.
Atgah died a hero's death.And I salute to his strong will to protect Jalal till the end.And my salute to Jiji Anga who always allowed him to give first preference to his duty.
JJ scene was good.Actually I thought, she was trying to divert his attention from his sorrow by that cat and mouse game.But yes ,she was also trying to be true queen of Akbar by asking him to spend time with others.Hope she continues this and that " Sabse Adhik prem" dailogue won't prick much .And the scene had novelty but then why it was edited?😡
Mansi,now the story will be taking different turns I suppose from Atgah death MA death.And all this long ,we will see Jo as a true wife supporting Jalal.But sad part is ,he soon will be reciprocating the same support ,during the twins' death.
Oh gosh ,what all they suffered.But still they were always together.But now on they start a different chapter in their love life ,where now they will get closer not only for intimacy but to heal each other's wounds too ,repair the broken skin too.

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Fab post mansi and love your green part.
After watching yesterday episode i was only thinking why episode was so much fact paced and also i was fearing about leap. I hope they do not take long leap a because i watch this showbecause it is the story of jodha and jalal love and not any other characters love.
Jodha and Jalal-jodha and jalal scene will be very good if it will be little bit larger and they didi not cut the scene abrubtly.
Atgha khan- RIP atgha sahab. I will really miss him so much. He was only person as father figure of jalal whon jalal trust him, share his feeling, and atgha was one of those person jispar jalaldil se viswas karta tha. Whom jalal can blindly trust. Now atgha sahab dead and it is biggest loss of jalal life and now in anger he will kill adham khan it show how he will be affect with atgha khan death. Salute to atgha sahab for his bravery and end of his life he prayed only for jalal and his safety. He shown his loyalty towards till the death.
Javeda- it was really shocking for me when they show javeda injured because even in my thinking i did not think about that. But salute to javeda the person who was totally full of enjoyment, who did not know for her intellegence, and know as foolish person showed her loyalty to empire and emperor. I liked her character so much and in one way she was the life of harem. Hope she do not die.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Mansi
Great analysis

A very fast paced episode indeed and sad to see Atga go. But we Lways know it was inevitable. Adham was never as clever as his mom and in the end he gave proof of his foolishness by going on an open Carnegie

Never expected the Javeda part. She always wanted to do something heroic and I always thought she was being silly but today it was made clear that she had the heroism in her. Sad to see her injured but is she dead??? Don't think so. They just said unconscious right????

About Maham Mansi I felt they trying to do a bit of whitewashing her character by repeatedly showing she truly loved Jalal. But what kind of love was that. They are trying to show that Maham cared for Jalal but became jealous for attention when Jodha came into the picture' . Why are they doing this I don't understand

About Precap I think Adham has been killed and Maham is there to witness it. I loved Rajat's expressions. He really gives expressions well
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Originally posted by: -Gitanjali-

Hi Mansi

Great analysis

A very fast paced episode indeed and sad to see Atga go. But we Lways know it was inevitable. Adham was never as clever as his mom and in the end he gave proof of his foolishness by going on an open Carnegie

Never expected the Javeda part. She always wanted to do something heroic and I always thought she was being silly but today it was made clear that she had the heroism in her. Sad to see her injured but is she dead??? Don't think so. They just said unconscious right????

About Maham Mansi I felt they trying to do a bit of whitewashing her character by repeatedly showing she truly loved Jalal. But what kind of love was that. They are trying to show that Maham cared for Jalal but became jealous for attention when Jodha came into the picture' . Why are they doing this I don't understand

About Precap I think Adham has been killed and Maham is there to witness it. I loved Rajat's expressions. He really gives expressions well

Great post.
Why you changed name? Nandini Raizada was fab and exciting
Edited by Rashmi81 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: katana

Good Analysis.😊

Small leap that too next week will be too early. They have to show MA's death too before leap. Right from the beginning of the serial, Cvs have shown MA as such a strong personality with equal importance along with the leads. We can expect some revenge from MA & Co. I don't want cvs to rush for small leap.
Cvs has shown Atga's loyalty in a nice manner.

I am not sure if Maham still has resources in her to mount a defence. She looks pretty broken to me already and I think she may be completely down and out after Adham's death!
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Originally posted by: Rashmi81

Great post.
Why you changed name? Nandini Raizada was fab and exciting


Was feeling like putting my real name. Though Nandini is also my real name it's my Rasi name but I wanted my real official name.

Rashmi you have written that Javeda is dead????

Is she??? Yup sure???
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Originally posted by: JAfanCharu

Very good analysis of a rather sad episode Mansi.


It was sad for me due to two reasons . Firstly because of Atgha saab's death and secondly due to the lovable Javeda getting wounded .

I did not expect Atgha saab to die today . It kind of took me by shock . What a selfless man he was , a truly loyal father-like figure to Jalal who only had Jalal's best interest in mind and served him faithfully . It was really touching to see him praying for the well being of the shehenshah even while dying .
I was very upset watching him die today . Jalal will be heartbroken and we will witness his reaction to Adham's unforgivable act , tomorrow

Javeda , an innocent lovable character with childlike innocence laced with intelligence , look at the manner in which she showed her loyalty for Akbar . I loved the way in which she stood up against her husband by taking the knife stab meant for Jalal , on herself . I would like to see Akbar honoring her at the Diwan e khaas by acknowledging her act of loyalty . Hopefully the Creatives do not do away with the character of Javeda .

I liked the naughty Jodha today teasing and being playful with Jalal . I was actually looking forward to enjoying the banter between Jodha and Akbar and I did . However Atgha saab's death and Javeda's injury left me feeling very sad .

Now that Adham is going out of the serial I guess the CVs have no more use for Javeeda also and have thus involved her being on the brink of death too. I think they may show her telling Jalal all about Adham's plots (as far as she knows) and then giving up her life also!

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