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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOWE..!!!! What an amazing chappy...!!! Marshi ..! Oops main tera naam bhul gayi...!!!! But chappy was amazing..!! Oh wah jodh ne adham ko mukka mara..!! Uff kya mukka tha..!! Yaaa she is beautiful..!! O my jalal lattu ho gya ..!! Phli nazar mein kaisa jadu kar diya..!! Tera ban betha hai mera jiya..!!!! OOO LA LA LA ALA!!! I ma flat over ur update..!!! Dhinka chika..!!! Sooo coool...!! Sooo amazing...!!! I loved it and wanna read more and more...!!! Thanks for the pm..!! Muaah to u..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess_saumya

WOWE..!!!! What an amazing chappy...!!! Marshi ..! Oops main tera naam bhul gayi...!!!! But chappy was amazing..!! Oh wah jodh ne adham ko mukka mara..!! Uff kya mukka tha..!! Yaaa she is beautiful..!! O my jalal lattu ho gya ..!! Phli nazar mein kaisa jadu kar diya..!! Tera ban betha hai mera jiya..!!!! OOO LA LA LA ALA!!! I ma flat over ur update..!!! Dhinka chika..!!! Sooo coool...!! Sooo amazing...!!! I loved it and wanna read more and more...!!! Thanks for the pm..!! Muaah to u..!!!

thanks saumya waise no need to call me anshita only call me arshi as u call love u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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anshi soyi ni avi tak...??? Kya baat..,???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome chapi dear continue soon & do pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Res Res..😆

Mast prologue tha yaar👏👏👏
ISI and RAW.. reminds me of Ek Tha Tiger.. but that was different..😉😆
Can't wait for the chappy 1!!😳
Congo on your new story sweet heart!🤗
Unres.. (finally..😆)
Yaar👏
I am speechless.. you've displayed her emotions wonderfully..😳
Her reaction to her hubby's death.. aur phir uska junoon...
Wo mohabbat hi kya jisme deewangi naa ho junoon na ho.. waah!👏👏
You're a ⭐️!
And.. agrima singh.. you watch DABH???😳
Khair.. lets return to the chappy😆😉
Their flashback's were wonderfully penned down...😳
wooho! Jo punched Adham! Balle Balle!
Jalal to uspe lattu ho gaya😆
Can't wait to read more yaar!😳
Love you Anshita my sweetheart!🤗❤️

thanks anu bas trying hard and glad u loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry for such a late reply , I didn't really see u pm till now
But lemme just say it's awesome yar!!! Awww my poor jalal died😭
Can't wait for the next one!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing...
Jo punch adham...
Jalal ko lagta tha ki jo uske piche lattu hojagi par ye toh ulta ho gaya...
Jalal must be alive n jo ill find him...
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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At the boxing ring

Jalal enters in his boxers and a vest sweat dripping all girls started drooling over him and he waving his hands but a pinsrop silence happened as a lady in short pants and aedium vest came in to the arena u guessed it righ it was jo mostly in boxing outifit girls look harsh but she was looking hell sexy jalal thought my competitor is so distracting it will be hard to win.all the boys could not take their eyes from jo but she ignored them and went inside the ring.

Agrima singh announced the match to be started they were excited but not for jalal as they have seen him fighting but jo as they heard she is a very good fighter then the match started jalal made amove but jo maade aawesome defene then jo did aa move and jalal did a awesome defense this went on like this all thought that they are equally capable by watching them fighting now jalal thought something and smiled evily this time when jo made a move got hold of her hand made it back wards and whispered in her ears u fight too good jo smiles and tell u again started flirting leave hand continue the match jalal made suchaa move that now jo was too close to him jalal was enjoying jo,s closeness and jo wasditracted from the match seein g the opportunity jalal made a move and she fell down as she fell she came back to hers senses and realised she lost jalal looked at her smirking miss singh announced jalal wn every body left leaving jajo alone

Jo pov

How could i distaract when he made a move i was lost admiring his physique he is juat leave it but there is something in him that attrcts me .

Jalal gave jo his hand to get up but our jodha is jodha she stood up by ownand told jalal congaratulations u won but by cheating jalal spoke i did nit do any thing u were also enjoying my closeness jo was angry on herself as she was caught offguard she was really enraged and left.

Jalal tell s himself she is very different now u miss jodha singh rajput have to fall for me hottie.

Next day

Sammer -jalal woh agayi dekh yaar aaj to iska husn katal karne ko daud raha hai dekh ladkon ne taankna shuru kardiya

Jalal-stillfacing sammer tu kiski baat kar raha hai

Sam-jodha dekh zara

Jalal turned and he was stiffened jo was wearing a black short frock backless.

She was looking awesome jalal went near her

Ja- hey hi

Jo -hi ab kya chahiye tumhe

Ja- tumhenahi lagta hum apneapas ke differences dur karke achche dost ban sakte hai

Jo- mujhe tumse dosti karne mein koi problem nahi hai but if u stop flirting with me

Ja-ok i will not but u know what mene peheli baar kisi ladki ke saath flirt kiya tha kyunki mere paas ladkiyan khud chalke aati hai

Jo- woh to kal mene dekh liya tha jab ladkiyan tumhe kese ghure jaa rahi thi.said jo laughing

Ja - ya they are made for me waise if ur arefree

Jo- sure

At the canteen

Jo-so tum humayun uncle ke bete ho

Jalal-ya but how do u know jo- bcoz i am bharmal singh,s daughter

Ja- tum bharmal uncle ki beti ho par mein to tumhare ghar aate reheta hum mene tumhe kabhie nahi dekha

Jo- woh isiliye bcoz i was in us pichle mahine hi india waapas aayi .

Sameer came and told jalal hey dude tuh yahan hai aur mein tuhje puri college mein dhund raha hun

Ja- sorry yaar waise meet jodha

Jo -hi sameer

Sam- hand shake karunga toh mukka toh nahi padega na

Jo-laughing aise kyun kehe rahe ho

Sam- woh kal adham ko punch ke baad

Jo- oh that he deserves it

Joja and same talkeda lot and they found many things common in each other just then jo,s phone rang and her mom has called her so she left.

Sam- jalal u are just flirting with her or some thing else like love at first sight

j- aisa kuchch nahi i like her personality and we are frnds aurr woh bharmal uncle ki beti hai uski help karna mera duty banta hai na waise i am getting lateaaj ghar pe dad ke success party hai tu aaraha hai na

sam - yes jo bhi hodi shayad

ja- ya

and they left .

present

jo has reached afghanistan tomorrow she will start her mission.

precap-joja cute nokjhoks jo and humayun bonding and jajo ball dance and anew entry.

Chappy dedicated to ruthshalini as she gaveme some idea for the boxing fight and thanks for reading this crap.

chappy 2

Edited by marshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
res😉
unres
OMG OMG arshi jaan awesome blossom chapter darling👏👏
but next time write of 10 -18 pg darling🤣
totally loved it 😳👏\
really ur a very very good writer👏
yeeep me first 😉
Awww u wrote chapter for me😳😳thank u so much
nd i'll always help u
nd dare u to say this ff crap😡😡
Edited by -RuthShalini- - 11 years ago

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