jj muhabbat ki dewaani part 6 pg 16

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jj ff-muhabbat ki dewaani<font size="4">prolouge </font>
woh mohabbat hi kya jisme dewaangi aur junoon na ho mein aarahi meri pyaar ki ha ek khoon ka badla lene flashback.
She stood numb she could not believe what her ears had heard he is dead. I will not leave the isi agents who had killed him killed jodha.s jalal.sir jalal sacrificed his life to bring back the information but was unsuccesful i want to recontinue this mission i will go to afghanistan and bring back the information from isi .sir plz u can.t refuse me bcoz after jalal in the whole team of raw i am capable of this plz give me the orders .
Guys started a new ff if u like the concept plz do like and comment.
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I am first !!!!!!Yippee!!!!
Continue soon dear!!!!!!😳 😳
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wowowowow😳
awesome blossom😳
do continue soon😳
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Chappy 1

A petite figure standing at the edge of the ship looking into the sea she is as beautiful as rose whover seen her falls for her .a smile which could make her look more gorgeous is missing .a drop of tear let down her eye she fastly wiped it as she did not wanted anybody spot her like this weak she is a very strong women and not at this stage where her mission is waiting for her the revenge to kill her beloved . she told himself no jodha u will not cry its time to make them cry everybody tell me i am madly in love with him par woh mohabbat hi kya jismein dewaangi aur junoon na ho jodha singh rajput it's hight time to show what can a brave rajput do that also who have prithviraj chauhan's blood running her veins .i will take revenge from the isi to kill my jalal jodha's jalal har ek khoon ka badla khoon hoga aur mere desh ko tabah karne wale tumhe agar mene tabha nahi kar diya to mein jalal ki biwi nahi now jodha singh rajput muhammad will show what is to mess with her .

Flashback

She stood numb she could not believe he is dead jalal is dead they killed him . iwill not leave them told an enraged jodha and rushe into sameer's cabin .sameer i want to recontinue this mission .

Sameer-but u know na jalal the best cop of raw ur hubby could not succeed it how willu.

Jo- i will and i can u know very well in the whole raw after jalal i am the only cop who is capable of doing this plz let me go plz i want to seek revenge.

Sam- okmbut its too dangerous be careful i will make ur going arrangeents u will be introduced there as their new isi super cop u have to bring the blueprints back before the russian scientist who will come after 2 months to make and launch the missile at india.best of luck.

Present

In the ship , jodha sitting in her room recalling her first meeting with jalal.and every moment with her.

Fb

First day at raw super cop college a girl in black denims and white royal blouse enters the college wearing black sunglasses she is so beautiful that every boy is taring at her and girls getting jealous in the garden area

Sam- jalal she is too gorgeous dude just one look omg yaar

Jalal- yaar tu cop banne wala hai actor i have no interest kyunki baakion ki tarah woh bhi mere hi paas anewali said jalal smirking .

Sam-yaar adham aur uske bich panga ho gya lets see and ja and sam went near the college gate.

Jo- hey u hold ur tounge moron i hate flirting and play boys like u.

Adham- come on tum to itni nazook ho tumse ye training nahi hoga haaan agar meri gf ban jao toh i can make u agood cop i a one of the trustee son.

Jo -u dont know who iam so plz- adham caught her hand anda tight punch on his face by jo and he fell on the ground jo spoke u know what i am a black belt in martial arts dont u dare to mess with m and yes i am jodha singh rajput one of the main two trustee bharmal singh's daughter .got it jo left.but she was unaware that a pair ayes was watching her so intensly.

Jalal pov

I saw the girl and i stopped breathing ya she was heavenly gorgeous no one is matchable of her beauty and the spark in her eyes was atrracting me to her and she gave atight punch so hard to adham being agirl unbelievable there is something in her said jalal to himself.

Sam - yaar yeh to pataka nikli isse door rehena padega right jalal but jalal was lost in her own dream land.

Practice ground

Top chief of raw agrima singh announces i am announcing the name of two students who have a amazing record of their capabilities and can become good cops and they have something in common they are the children of 2 main trustee of our college yes the first is jalaluddin muhammad and jalal goes to the arena all girls were drooling over him and the officer singh announces and the other is jodha singh rajput as jo enters the arena jalal could not take his eye off her all the students were speechless bcoz a girl is going to compete with jalal let see who wins .

Officer singh speaks so we will have 4 rounds which will decide the squad leader of the year at first boxing round, then shooting .then atreasure hunt, and at last a marathon.so the first round will be held in today night wish u all the best to both .

Ja-i think u should backout ur name aaj tak mujhse boxing mein koi nahi jeeta hai and u are too soft.

Jo- thanks for ur concern mister whatever and stop flirting with me

And we will se whoz better said jo and left

Jalal- u will fall for me.

Precap-hot boxing fight between joja.

Chappy 1thanks for reading this crap
Edited by marshi - 11 years ago
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me too res😳
unres
OMG OMG OMG 👏👏👏
what a magically chapter👏
awesome blossm darling
arshi a very very big tight hug to u darling🤗
ur awesome darling
I'm speechless
update soon darling🤣
Edited by -RuthShalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome
Plz plz continue
Plz pm me
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Res Res..😆
Mast prologue tha yaar👏👏👏
ISI and RAW.. reminds me of Ek Tha Tiger.. but that was different..😉😆
Can't wait for the chappy 1!!😳
Congo on your new story sweet heart!🤗
Unres.. (finally..😆)
Yaar👏
I am speechless.. you've displayed her emotions wonderfully..😳
Her reaction to her hubby's death.. aur phir uska junoon...
Wo mohabbat hi kya jisme deewangi naa ho junoon na ho.. waah!👏👏
You're a ⭐️!
And.. agrima singh.. you watch DABH???😳
Khair.. lets return to the chappy😆😉
Their flashback's were wonderfully penned down...😳
wooho! Jo punched Adham! Balle Balle!
Jalal to uspe lattu ho gaya😆
Can't wait to read more yaar!😳
Love you Anshita my sweetheart!🤗❤️
Edited by Anushka8722 - 11 years ago
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Yaar actualy yeh ff idea mujhe ek thaa tiger aur meri akki ki film holiday se mila.
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Jalaluddin muhammad-mughal is the best cop in the team raw and loves her jaan jo very much rich,handsome,dashing and attitude afighter who had never came unsuccessful from any mission .but a mission not only for country to test his love will he succeed?

Jodha singh rajput- rajput by blood hot sexy beautiful cute bubbly butattitude serious and loves jalal more than her life .a good fighter awesome super cop .but will she succeed in taking the revenge from isi for killing jalal?

Sameer- bff of both jo and jalal boss of raw after the death of jalal always supports jo and helped jalal in getting his love but is he truly like this?

Abdul-isi agent but a very good frnd of jalal in afghanistan will he help jo?

These are the main characters but some more to be introduced when time comes plz do hit likes and comment appreciation and objection everything is welcome.

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sorry guys forgot to tell this character sketch is dedicated to my jaan my frnd saumya love u sweety

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