Originally posted by: ashpat
First of all, I want to apologize one more time that I could not proofread it on time and also read ur update earlier and comment, When I came on IF today, I saw 52 unread pms. I am just glad that finally I could read ur update and as i told u in text the reasons i could not proofread this time for you. so sorry again.
Ayesha yaar don't say sorry... U have always helped me... and always supported me...
This update reminded me of few things that I have read somewhere which I will tell you when I text u.
Heheheh...🤣
Anyways, first of all, why did u give us a cliffhangher? I was so looking forward to read and u just left us hanging at the end. not fair start typing soon,pleasee
U know I love cliffhanger...As per your wish I update this one first...😆
Ok, now back to ur update. as I have said so many times before, the way you put emotions into words is very commendable and I repeat you are one of the best on IF JA who can do this effortlessly. One has never have to guess the chararacter's feelings and no I am not pulling ur leg as u mentioned in one of your reply to my comments.
I know you always says what you really feel... that is the reason I love your comment... U R very true... but you know my problem is I don't know how to react to praise... Or not enough confident on myself.
I am telling what I feel.
I know you wont say unless you feel...
Jalal's feelings were shown nicely and loved how u showed radha's conflicting feelings and then bringing her back to reality that she is jodha.
Yap actually both of them are kind of confuse and lost
Jalal stopping radha with different ways and finally succeeding was done nicely too.
Jalal is little devil here😆
It is always great to see Rahim and radha's bonding. Salima was touched seeing radh'as purity and shocked after hearing all about her from HB.
I love to write about Rahim and Radha... and Salima part is my fav...
Entire letter exchanging between jalal and radha was diifferent and was suprised to c it, too.
See Ayesha that is why I love ur comment... U always very honest in you opinion...
I was so happy to c the way Radha replied to ruq- just loved it, I know ruq has right on jalal but did not like to c their kiss and all that when he went to her khema but was feeling nice to c he was uncomfortable.
Hehe I knew three people for sure will kill me for Ruk and Jalal kiss... Varsha, Preet and YOu...hehehe but I wanted to give Jalal reason to run away from Radha😆
I was shocked to c jalal not stopping at radha's khema considering how he felt three days ago. not only radha but even jalal is in dilemma regarding his dil.
Jalal is way far confused... His shenshahi ego is too big... he still thinks he is just obessed...once she become his...he will be over...
update soon, plzz thanks for pm. muahhh
Aww... Love U and sorry for late reply
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