My little bride-Chapter 7

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Ten year old Jodha who hardly understood the meaning of marriage was all set to be married to 16 year old Jalal.His little bride who sat on the mandap sucking her small fingers was all set to fall asleep.Jalal hated every moment of this wedding but what was he to do he couldnt protest against his family who still believed that getting children married at a tender age helps children to be focused n well behaved in life...Who never cared for wat the child wishes for for they believe an obident child never go against their parents.
Okay frnz plz do give me ur honest feedback should I continue my story or not.

Chapter 1-page 2
Chapter 2-page 3
Chapter 3-page 6
Chapter 4-page 9
Chapter 5-page 11
Chapter 6-page 15
Chapter 7-page 18
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hmmm... different concept..
looking for more!
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Nice start it's different
Plz plz continue soon
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it is awesome yrr!!!👏👏
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different than other & interesting concept continue soon & do pm

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Lovely ... continue dear 👍🏼
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Thank u all for ur comments really meant alo
Chapter 1

Jodha had no idea what was happening her mother would always tell her fairy tales and even today when she came to her room to get her ready had told her that she would be playing a fairy tale game with her and if she would agree with everything her mother would give her sweets and everyone in the house knew how much she loved sweets so she sat in the mandap quietly being all obident looking at her mother time and again if she was playing the game fair enough but then her mother hadnt told her a big boy was also joining the game though she didnt like this big boy coming between the game yet she kept quite thinking if she does something her game might get ruined and she wouldnt get her sweets as her mom promised.So she quietly let everything happen and before she knew it she was asleep.

Jalal couldnt believe he was in class 11 and here he is sitting in a mandap getting married what would his friends say if they found out about his marriage how was he going to explain it to anyone.The only person he had told about this marriage was his best friend Abdul who first thought it was a prank but when realised it was no joke he had no wise words to give to his bestfriend and now he sat next to him all quiet .How was he ever going to explain to anyone that he was married and that too to a 10 year old child.When his parents had called him back home from hostel he hadnt expected this but what was he to do looking at his side he felt pity for the poor child did she even know what was happening was she even aware of her life but then what about his life.Just because a neighbour saw him kissing Rukaiya he was punished and that to a punishment for life long.How hard had he tried to explain his grandparents and parents that it was not a big deal and he was grownup and this is how he got punished for being all grownup marrying a little girl who still sucked her thumb.But Jalal couldnt help notice a spark in the little girl though she looked like an innocent creature he somehow had a feeling she will be a very tough nut to crack for his family and somehow he was happy.He was sure this little one would cause so much drama in the family that his whole family will be the first one to throw her out...But poor Jalal had no idea this little girl would soon grow up to be the reason for him to breathe.

Jodha got up with a big scream she was extremely terrified she was scared by this unknown place but then she saw a familiar face her salima didi.Salima.got up as soon as she heard Jodha cry.She was Jodhas big sister as well as Jalal big brothers wife.She was the one who help fixed Jodha and Jalals wedding.She knew Jodha was small and would not unserstand all this so her loving husband and told her to be with Jodha till she gets comfortable in the house.But Jodha had alot of question in her mind.Masa and Bapusa had said she was playing a game and she needed to play it with her heart she should be obident and a good girl but they hadnt told her about Salima didi being part of the game and she would have to play the game with her so that meant she would.have to share her sweets also and that made Jodha unhappy so she quietly sat in the bed thinking her Masa and Bapusa must be in another room.Tomorrow they would declare her winner for she did as told.Hugging her salima didi she asked innocently didi I will give you my share but a little less then what I get okay.Salima was really confused when she was about to question her Jodha told her the entire story beforehand making it all clear.Salima couldnt help but smile at her little sister at her innocence but she wasnt the only one smiling Jalal.who had heard Jodha scream couldnt help but come and look.for her.He didnt know why but he felt a strange pull towards his little bride.And after her explanation he couldnt help but chuckle at his bride.Well one thing was for sure his little bride would never let him get bored.
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awesome blossm chapter👏👏
poor joja😭😆
update soon dear
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yes continue plz..
its a different story...
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woow nice story ... but this storyline resembles to aisha's SS called feelings ... anyways letsee how you unfold the story with your own version ...👍🏼

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