AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 4 - Chap 17(11 Oct)

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abhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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PP wonderful chapter.. So finally JJ got married and Richo got the know about Jalaal is his Dad... So jalaal is taking away richo with him while JO is not coming with him to mumbai..

I still didn't understand then Why JO married Jalaal ? Why Jalaal taking away richo with him alone? Jalaal only told JO her life will be same as before, then richo is not with her ?

Poor JO how much miserable she will be feeling without richo as she is living only for richo till now..

I liked the chapter as it is realistic, JO even though loves Richo, but her hate for Jalaal is much more, she can't bear him.. Now Jalaal will understand the responsibility as a father new feelings as a while both Richo & jalaal will feel and miss JO more...

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#572

part 15
awesome dear...
excellent...
so painful...
poor Jodha...
how is she gonna survive?
and Jalal is sure one day she has to come to him...
but till then how will these 3 survive?
Abdul know Jalal cant be without Jodha...
and Rico the baby reacted so much...
poor him...
only he can make Jodha to stay with them...
and hope he will be safe with Jalal keeping in mind the group he has with him back at his place...
Jodha is shattered...
cont soon dear...

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Priyanka what a emotional chapter!!!👏👏👏

My heart is weeping...Surely for Jodha and Ricco but not sure about Jalal... Somehow he gain a little sympathy in this chapter but I hate him much more than before... How could he be so selfish... How can he can punish his son and Jodha.. he is really cruel selfish, manipulative and heartless in this chapter. His heart is weeping...he is feeling pain of her heart but then why he is giving extreme pain... I am a mother so probably I am feeling this emotion strongly... I would kill if any one dare to even think take my daughter away from me, in no situation I will agree too... I rather die than stay away from her... and you have penned down perfectly what Jodha is going through... her inner turmoil is really painful to read... I am surprise to see Jalal heart didn't melt seeing even Ricco's tears... both of them are wrong lieing to little kid... Why ? Jalal played really villain in last two episode... to get her he snatch everything from her... He don't deserve Jodha... No way... he has planned everything from beginning till now... including forcing her... getting married... taking her heart away from her... so she bend down... This is no way love... Love is sacrifice which Jodha did for Ricco... Love is trust... I don't think he ever loved her... I think title of the story really suite ... it's desire... even when she was packing up he desire for her in this situation... her heart is completely torn in that time he desire to touch her... seriously it strongly shows he doesn't care for what she is going through compare to his lustful desire for her... I hope soon Jodha move with him... but I am worried seeing his desire in room... if she moves with him he will force on her every day... seems like he don't have control when she is near...his phyco mind goes wild seeing her near... and don't know what will happen... may be she stays in same city...and meet him and Ricco in public place...

U R wonderful super star writer... U writing is so powerful can impact on any one easily. Please continue soon... Can't wait to see how you unfold this story... 👏👏👏

I vent out my anger and completely forget to mention about best part of the FF... Which I really loved it... Ohhh... I loved how Ricco reacted...his anger... his confusion... and first time ever when he said DAD... I DON'T KNOW how to describe what I was feeling... can't find word for it... and I felt happy for Jalal and Ricco both... Entire part mind blowing... Love U Priyanka for wonderful story...

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: shahbhavini
Priyanka what a emotional chapter!!!👏👏👏

Jalal played really villain in last two episode... to get her he snatch everything from her... He don't deserve Jodha... No way... he has planned everything from beginning till now... including forcing her... getting married... taking her heart away from her... so she bend down... This is no way love... Love is sacrifice which Jodha did for Ricco... Love is trust... I don't think he ever loved her... I think title of the story really suite ... it's desire... even when she was packing up he desire for her in this situation... her heart is completely torn in that time he desire to touch her... seriously it strongly shows he doesn't care for what she is going through compare to his lustful desire for her...
>> Hey Bhavii.. I contradict you here.. had it been pure desire his feelings for would have waned off long before.. he'd not have searched for her for 5 years, he'd not have yearned to possess her.. he loves her so much and he is deprived of the right to exhibit it.. his desire to touch her is to comfort her, console her, show how much he loves her.. he isn't any saint to refrain himself from physical intimacy and get on with platonic love.. he wants to touch her out of love and that's what any man madly in love does.. don't you agree?
I hope soon Jodha move with him... but I am worried seeing his desire in room... if she moves with him he will force on her every day...
seems like he don't have control when she is near...his phyco mind goes wild seeing her near...
>> He goes wild seeing her, but now he know how disastrous it can be if he touches her without her permission.. so I trust he'll be composed 😉
and don't know what will happen... may be she stays in same city...and meet him and Ricco in public place...

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#575

Prianka i would love to take classes from you, kaiseee??? Aakhir kaisee itni awsomeness laa sakti ho tum ek update mei! Yeh toh talent ki limits paar karne waali baat ho gayi matlab, waise ek baat batao, yeh tumhara jalal chaahta kya hai 😆 business kaise chalta hai isskaa! Hahaha ohh i forgot he has abdul ;) XD
Poor jodha, what she must be feeling gosh jalal what games he is playing, i guess he is coming in contact with his own feelings now, like how he felt when rico hugged hum, loved that scene where jalal realized how it feels to calm his own kid and on the other side he runs a whole empire which in comparison feels so easy to him now.
He is way too addicted to jodha man, he should actually practice control...the way he came closer to her unaware of his own proximity, that was an intense scene. Then jodha bidding bye to rico, it was so heartbreaking man, the way she held herself...just for the sake of her kid, only a mother can do such sacrifices. And then i don't know if you can say this is my positivity or over thinking but i really liked this very next scene when jalal blurts out an invitation to mumbai, he knew she would thrash him but he again said he can provide her a job, though she was perfectly right but i sensed a deep concern in jalal's voice for jodha, this time he didn't think before speaking, he genuinely spoke what he felt and this update really welcomed a half new jalal but the old one is still darkish! Really want to read further now!
Update soon :)
Needless to say an outstanding update, high on emotions 👍🏼