AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 4 - Chap 17(11 Oct)

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: spvd
part 14
nice part...
poor Jodha...
and Jalal he wants her the most...
but Jodha still wont forgive him...
will they have a happily ever after?
cont soon dear...

happily ever after toh bohot door hai...pehle shadi toh ho😆

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: hely
awesome chappy😳
bt jalal he will never change..😡
he lied again to jodha
how could jodha blv him..😕

hey my darling how are u🤗

its not lie...its TRICK😆...the art of manipulation😆

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

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Yeah i also have the same doubt. where is our smart Rico? Is he sleeping?😕

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Superb update! Its truly a pleasure to read your updates prianka, this is the only writeup i have read from you but i am sure you would do wonders with anything you write down. The story, plot is so intriguing that i really wish sometimes to keep on reading but alas it has to end somewhere lol i loved this one too, no surprises. Jodha and rico's meet was so touchy, poor mother she cried her heart out, very well written! Then coming to the best part was jodha going and saying thankyou to jalal, then their whole conversation was super! Straight from jalal deciding to take rico with him to jodha trying to trust him, but his intentions are different and i guess it will change their lives now. I am so thrilled for the next updates! Update sooon :))
Fabulous update!

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Superb update! Its truly a pleasure to read your updates prianka, this is the only writeup i have read from you but i am sure you would do wonders with anything you write down.
chal pagal...kuch bhi😆...there are many ppl in this forum who are excllnt writer...😳kuch toh mashallah👏 bas i cant get enough time to read on...😭...miss those stories

The story, plot is so intriguing that i really wish sometimes to keep on reading but alas it has to end somewhere
so true...it has to end somewhere🥱

lol i loved this one too, no surprises.
🤗

Jodha and rico's meet was so touchy, poor mother she cried her heart out, very well written! Then coming to the best part was jodha going and saying thankyou to jalal, then their whole conversation was super! Straight from jalal deciding to take rico with him to jodha trying to trust him, but his intentions are different and i guess it will change their lives now. I am so thrilled for the next updates! Update sooon :))
hmm...am still to work out how things wll turn out in future

Fabulous update!
thanks surbhi