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Awesome amazing prologue

Nice write up
amazing prologue but why sad one

Awww di!!! Prologue was too unique!!! Luvvd it!!

Congrats saumya ... N this definitely seems interesting plot ... You should continue my dear 😛

Originally posted by: pinky27

I luvd ur prologue❤️ Guess it same as The Walk To Remember by Nicholas Sparks. But plsss im requesting u don't make it a sad ending lyk d book coz i hve read it n started crying really heavily so plsss end ko change kardena...

Think it has ur sister's humble request 😊😊

Luv u ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

The prologue really moved me , specially at the passage where Rajat Carter recalled emotionally the period of his youth , at 20 and when he revealed that he is 57 now but still he remembers what happened at his 20 , the physical changement mentall created by by him due to the environment and place around him and this line of him "I WILL MAKE SURE NOT TO LET ANYTHING OUT" , the promise to cont us everything , the concept of the story looks obscur , sober and obviously sad but I am not against it , the prologue really insisted me to look forward to your story , carry on my Samosa and do pm me , I really like this dark , melancholy and gloomy concept 👍🏼🤗❤️

wow, its awesome prologue👍🏼

but its sad one...😕

continue soon and pm me please😉

Originally posted by: niveasree

wow, its awesome prologue👍🏼

but its sad one...😕

continue soon and pm me please😉

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CHAPTER : 1

Main plot : Beaufort.

In 1958 , beaufort , North carolina , like many other small places in the country. In summer this place get hell hot as if some person got out just to get letter from letter box feel like to get a shower again. Its night time here.All are sleeping and are in their dream lands except few idiots.

Near a sacred place near a pool having a dive board over and dive board is about 11 feet from the pool water. Their comes a group of boys and girls.

First car comes and their comes Sharif potter with his girlfriend Belinda(new character). Belinda is just a girlfriend of Sharif. There is no love story about them just they are attracted towards each other . As soon they get out of car they started kissing each other madly.Then comes 2nd car of Abdul and Lavina. And next car is of guess guess who!!!

Ooo its of none other than Rajat Carter... Car parked and their he comes the dashing , smart , cool , heart throbe guy of girls.Each and every girl of high school die just for his one glimpse.But he never is that interested in anyone.

Rajat " Hey guyss whats up?? Sharif in middle of kiss session " hey Rajat ". Belinda as she felt disturbed in ahm ahm " U all r chicken shits " . Sharif roared " hey dont speak that u shit. Dont say that again to my buddies u got it." Abdul " Hey Rajat . Its too cool man tonight feeling cold." Lavina in a flirty tone looking at Rajat " what about going to a club and doing some shakey moveswill make us hot!!" Abdul going closer to Lavina saying " why not ya lets go na baby" Lavina slightly pushing him but not force fully " Hey I was not asking u Abdul the flirt." Rajat got what she wanna say giving an angry glare " You know lavina I dont dance." Sharif with an evil smile " Guyss where is MAC ?? OO my guyss he wll be the last one and u know who will be last will have to do what we planned na!!"

FLASHBACK :

I n afternoon around 12 pm in the high school canteen these all friends were sitting on a round table and planning for some outing and doing something crazy!

soo they thought they will go to that pool area behind our school area and who will reach last will have to do something told by others. Like a dare work!!They all agreed.

FLASHBACK ENDS.

Mac is a good friend of Rajat and he is just not a spoilt brat but he find Rajat different from rest persons in the group. He trusts Rajat.

Now as soon as sharif asked about mac another car came and thier comes Mac. Mac again greeted all and they told him as per the game that he has to do something .

Mac asked in somewhat disinteresting and fearful tone "what I have to do ?" Rajat told " take it easy man ull surely do it. U just have to jump from that board in the freezingly cold pool." Mac frightenedly " what do u even how cold that water would be !! It is damn cold man!!" Rajat assured him that " To accompany him he will also jump with him. Now is it fine." Mac somewhat told okk he will do. Its tooo cold in beaufort at night and hot & cold in day time. They all were wearing winter clothes. As they walked till the pool side Belinda & Lavina were holding hands and Lavina was glancing at Rajat every now and then but Rajat was busy going with Mac and telling him to relax and saying" lets fly high na." As they reached Sharif said " OKK guyss here we go . So Mac and Rajat will go upstairs and will jump from there" pointing towards the board place that was too high that if a person jump na he may die too. Mac in same tone frightened " done ". Rajat with smirk " come Mac ." Then they both went up there. Abdul shouting " Go Up man . go go. Do it " Lavina " whoo Rajat . Muahhh (giving flying kiss)" . As Mac and Rajat reached up rajat threw his jacket and his jeans and he was left with boxers and under half sleeves shirt. Mac too was off with his jacket and he was having trousers and undershirt. They both were rubbing their hands and arms as it was cold. Down all were boosting them up. Then Rajat told mac " After counting 3 we both will jump ohk." Mac " okk Done." Then Rajat counted " 1, 2 , 3 Jump " . And what happened was as listening to jump Mac jumped but Rajat didnt jump. He was just standing up and was watching Mac and laughing. That was the reason for his smirk. Mac was their in water and all were laughing but Mac didint knew how to swim and he dint came up for 2 mints and all were frightened like hell slowly Mac was coming up. Then Rajat jumped in order to save Mac as it might be that Mac died. He took hold of Mac in water and started coming towards shore. Lavina gave him stic to hold it. And soon they heard of a police man voice and all got damn frightened. Al started running towards their respective cars . Rajat soon got out of water with Mac and left Mac on the shore and all went in their cars Rjat was going to sit in car. H sat and drived rashly and was moving his car here and there as police was behind him and he got injured too after the jump thier was blood oozing out from his forehead. He was trying that somehow he get saved but fate was not on his side and his car got bumped into 2 small heavy tankers of oil placed in the middle of road. And he Got basted that is captured by the police. During his accident he got his left foot badly injured , minor injuries on forehead too. He was taken to the Poilice station and Mac was taken to the hospital nearby.

Precap : Rajat sees pari. cool na!!!!!!

OKKK Guyss that was my first chapter. I dont know if it is short or what. I can only write this much.

And guyss if u feel u dont like my story please tell me as its my first and I have never written anything. PLease tell ur views and please like it and comment.

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love u all. 🤗

saumya