6~*NOT just a passionate affair ~*Pt 45 -Wake up Jalal! - Page 116

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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all, sorry for commenting so late. I've been busy yaar. But I m happy ke thread complete hone se pehle main comment kar payi.😆 So coming to part 44 first...I m very sad that in all this drama Jalal is spoiling his two years hard work by being so careless abt his exams. But can't blame him. His life is going away from him, how can he behave normally. But I m sure even if he scored less in this sem., his aggregate will be high.😃 Loved Renu-Jo confrontation. I m happy that Jo didn't tell everything to Meera abt her plan. Smart girl!👏 Jo's taking Vishal bhaiya's help is a big twist in the story. Hope Vishal understands Jo & later on convinces his family abt Jo-Ja relation. But how can Jo act so strong & calm every time. Plz show her emotional side also that how she's feeling to see Jalal's miserable condition.

Now part 45. Its opening para.... As I started reading, I got scared for a moment that Jalal is with another girl.😲😆 But then I came into my senses when I read Ms. Singh.😳 Jalal having a dream of his 2nd reunion with Jo...Its just beautiful yaar. And what a symbolism...Jodha telling indirectly that she's going away from him just for some time and there's a strong reason behind it. Se'll come back to him eventually...and in the end she asked him to wake up...wonderful Shraddha.👏 They are soul mates in true sense. Ek ne apne dil ki baat dusre tak pahuncha hi di.😳 I just hope Jalal gets the hint and he got I feel when he heard the same words from Renu which Jo uttered once. You beautifully described Jalal's pitiable condition in this chapter. Jalal-Abdul-Renu scene was very emotional. He's lucky to have such friends in his life but I still doubt on Abdul.🤔

Can't see Jo-Ja separation any more,😭 plz reunite them. BTW, India ane pe pehle update dogi na?😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loool I guess cos thread is overflowing...
I'll open new thread tomorrow 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AbHer_neha

First of all, sorry for commenting so late. I've been busy yaar. But I m happy ke thread complete hone se pehle main comment kar payi.😆
🤗 Tis ok...

So coming to part 44 first...I m very sad that in all this drama Jalal is spoiling his two years hard work by being so careless abt his exams. But can't blame him. His life is going away from him, how can he behave normally. But I m sure even if he scored less in this sem., his aggregate will be high.😃
He isn't being just careless about his exams... he has no care for anything else in this world actually!

Loved Renu-Jo confrontation. I m happy that Jo didn't tell everything to Meera abt her plan. Smart girl!👏 Jo's taking Vishal bhaiya's help is a big twist in the story. Hope Vishal understands Jo & later on convinces his family abt Jo-Ja relation. But how can Jo act so strong & calm every time. Plz show her emotional side also that how she's feeling to see Jalal's miserable condition.
But when he's not in front, she is an emotional mess too... right from the Rishabh-munh-dikhaai where she missed his ring on her ring finger, to how she defended him in her house to breaking down under that peepal tree after having broken up with him... to this chapter - where she goes all hazy-eyed when talking to Meera about him
Missing? She YEARNED for him! Any second that went by where she didn't have something to recall about him, was a rare second indeed! When there'd been not a dull minute in his company - when there'd been not a day where she hadn't learnt something new from him - when there'd rarely been a touch of his that hadn't turned her on, how could she not miss him? What wouldn't she do to be back in his arms - to experience his husky voice whispering sweet-nothings into her ears - to relish the scents of his tantalizing cologne dotted on his neck. What wouldn't she do to just lie on his lap for five minutes and savour the feel of his fingers combing through her hair 'Be patient my heart' she had to tell herself many times a day 'It'll all come back...'
In fact, this is the first chapter we're getting to see an emotional Jalal...all previous ones have been Jo missing Ja vs Jo the family girl!

Having said that.. sometimes when a person is hit by too much trauma - one after another, it does tend to sap away your emotional side away for a while.. I guess its like the 'fighter' instinct in one's body trying to kick-in, so the mind can fight without distraction!

Now part 45. Its opening para.... As I started reading, I got scared for a moment that Jalal is with another girl.😲😆 But then I came into my senses when I read Ms. Singh.😳 Jalal having a dream of his 2nd reunion with Jo...
Actually, no dear.. its a modified dream of his first reunion with Jodha (that's why she wakes up at 2 am here too) but like most other dreams, the visions are mixed with events and incidents going back and forth (mixed timelines)... 😳 it's Jalal's conscience + hope + wishful thinking in this dream ... yes, it is vague.. but, I intended it to be like that - much like most dreams are.. just savouring the message of it!

Its just beautiful yaar. And what a symbolism...Jodha telling indirectly that she's going away from him just for some time and there's a strong reason behind it. Se'll come back to him eventually...and in the end she asked him to wake up...wonderful Shraddha.👏 They are soul mates in true sense. Ek ne apne dil ki baat dusre tak pahuncha hi di.😳 I just hope Jalal gets the hint and he got I feel when he heard the same words from Renu which Jo uttered once. You beautifully described Jalal's pitiable condition in this chapter.
He got the hint that he needs to stop self-sympathizing... but not much further.. he doesn't have the nerve to hope again - lest his heart gets broken!

Jalal-Abdul-Renu scene was very emotional. He's lucky to have such friends in his life but I still doubt on Abdul.🤔
Awww...😳
Can't see Jo-Ja separation any more,😭 plz reunite them. BTW, India ane pe pehle update dogi na?😳
I'm not going to India dear... the plans have been cancelled.. I guess I'll try and type as much as I can.. as fast as I can... 😳
Thanks so much for your beautiful reply dear.. thanks a lot.. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
@ Varsha, Jigu, Tahni, Mehak - read all of your messages dear..
Varsha, your stories are very inspiring as always 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lashy.. You aren't going to India!!! Yey yey yey 🥳🤪
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

@ Varsha, Jigu, Tahni, Mehak - read all of your messages dear..

Varsha, your stories are very inspiring as always 🤗


Aweee thank u lashy 🤗... but painful too 😭😡
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Lashy.. You aren't going to India!!! Yey yey yey 🥳🤪

yippeee ... lashy not going to india ... this calls for a party 🥳 ... jahnu dont u think with this happiness lashy should give us the next update right away 😆
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Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

yippeee ... lashy not going to india ... this calls for a party 🥳 ... jahnu dont u think with this happiness lashy should give us the next update right away 😆


Varshu.. I prefer stalker's name to next update 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


Varshu.. I prefer stalker's name to next update 😉

me too jahnu ... but lashy has made it very clear that she will reveal the stalker's name in the end 😡 ... agar aisa hai toh ... when will we have wedding , honeymoon & twins 😡 ... bahaut ziddi hai lashy 🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

me too jahnu ... but lashy has made it very clear that she will reveal the stalker's name in the end 😡 ... agar aisa hai toh ... when will we have wedding , honeymoon & twins 😡 ... bahaut ziddi hai lashy 🤢


Do you still hope Lashy would write wedding? 😆 I think she'll end with a group hug of Ja-Jo's families.. that's all I can expect ⭐️

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