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Originally posted by: alisha_sid

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U told u willupdate today then update na plz plz plz plz a request.

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First of all these roses are for you😳😳
Hope you like it...😃






So here the Chapter -2 😉😉
do post comments for aisha plz😳😳

CHAPTER 2
JALAL IS STANDING IN THE FRONT OF THE MIRROR...LOOKING AT HIMSELF...SMILING...HE STARTS DRESSING HIMSELF... HE TAKES OUT THE BLUE KURTA...HIS SERVANTS MAKE HIM WEAR IT...HE LOOKS AT HIMSELF...
RUKS ENTERS THE HOJRA...SHE IS DRESSED IN GREEN AND RED...



SHE ASKS THE SERVANTS TO LEAVE...JALAL LOOKS AT HER...HE SAYS" WAAH RUKKAIYA TUMHARE UPAR YE HARA RANG BOHOT KHUBSURAT DIKHTA HAI...AAJ SACH MEIN TUM BEGUM-E-KHAAS LAG RAHI HO..."
RUKS SMILES...SHE SAYS" AAP KO KHUSH KARNE KE LIYE HUM KUCH BHI KAR SAKTE HAI JALAL..."
JALAL SMILES...
RUKS: JALAL HUM AAPKI KHUSHI KE LIYE SAB KUCH KAR SAKTE HAI AUR AAP?
JALAL: SAAAF SAAF KAHIYE RUKAIYYA BEGUM AAPKO KYA CHAHIYE?
RUKS: AAPKO KAISE PATA CHALA KI HUM AAPSE KUCH MANGANA CHAHTE HAI?
JALAL: AAPKE BOLNE KE TARIKE SE...KAHIYE...
RUKS: JALAL HUM CHAHTE HA KI AAP JASHN KE BAAD HUMARE HOJRE MEIN RAHE...
JALAL: JO HUKUM BEGUM-E-KHAAS...
RUKS IS HAPPY...AND SHE LEAVES TO GO TO THE JASHN...
JALAL THINKS AB HUM JODHA BEGUM KA CHEHRA DEKHNA CHAHTE HAI...


JODHA IS IN HER ROOM...MOTI ASKS HER TO GET READY...SHE REFUSES TO DO SO...MOTI SAYS SHEHENSHAH KA AADHESH HAI..AAPKO JANA HI HOGA...
JODHA MAKES A FACE AND THEN GOES TO CHANGE...
JASHN PLACE...
EVERY1 IS SITTING...
JALAL;S ENTRY IS ANNOUNCED...JALAL ENTERS...
AND THEN LATER HE ANNOUNCES THT THIS JASHN IS FOR RUKS BEGUM AND HENCE WANTS RUKS TO COME AND SIT NEXT TO HER...JODHA FUMES...
BENAZIR 'S ENTRY IS ANNOUNCED...SHE WALKS IN...HER STYLE...SHE IS WEARING IN PINK...AND HAS A VEIL COVERING HER FACE...ONLY HER EYES ARE SEEN...WELL SHE DOES LOOK STUNNING! ALL THE MEN ARE DOWN ON THERE KNEES...AND ALL THE WOMAN ARE BURNING WITH ANGER!


JALAL LOOKS AT JODHA
SHE IS BURNING WITH ANGER...
HE ENJOYS THT SIGHT!
SHE SMILES TO HIMSELF AND THEN SAYS TO BENAZIR...AAJ TUM IS MEHFILL MEIN AAG LAGA DO! DIKHA DO SABKO KI AAPSE JYAADA KHUBSURAT AUR KOI NAHI...HE AGAIN LOOKS AT JODHA...JODHA IS GIVING HIM THE KILLER LOOKS!!
BENAZIR SITS SOWN AND STARTS SINGING...
Aa...
Tumhari Adao Pe Main Vari Vari - 2
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Har Ek Baat Hain Jaise - 2
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Tumhari Adao Pe Main Vari Vari - 2
SHE GOES TO JALAL AND TRYS TO FEEL HIM UP JALAL PLAYS ALONG...RUKS DOES NOT CARE...SHE GIVE JALAL A DRINK...SHE SMILES AND CONTINUES TO LOOK AT BENAZIR...SHE CONTINUES
Haa..
Chalate Ho Jo Naino Ke Baan Tikhe
Nishaana Tumh Aaisa Kaha Se Ho Sikhe
Ke Dil Mein Kasak Ho Magar Pyari Pyari
Tumhari Adao Pe Main Vari Vari - 2



JODHA IS JUST STARING AT THEM...SHE IS FUMING...
BENAZIR JUST CONTINUES HER DANCE...AND EVERY1 IS MESMERIZED...ALL THE MEN!!
LATER WHEN BENAZIR IS DONE DANCING...EVERY1 STARTS CLAPPING AND PRAISING BENAZIR...
BENAZIR GOES BACK TO HER PLACE AND JALAL SAYS...ISSE KEHTE HAI KHUBSURATI...
AAJ KA JASHN YAHI KATAM HOTA HAI..." JUST THEN A SERVANT COMES AND SAYS...SHEHENSHAH...BAHAR KOI HAI...AUR KEH RAHI HAI KI WOH BENAZIR SE BHI JYAADA KHUBSURAT HAI...
JALAL ASKS TO SEND HER IN...


NEXT CHAPTER NOTE: A BEATIFUL LADY IN RED IS DANCING HER FACE IS COVERED WITH GHUNGAT...HER BODY IS LIKE MELTING GOLD!! EVERY1 IS STUNNED LOOKING AT HER



With Love ❤️
Mrs. Tokas

Do post comment for aisha😳😳

Edited by --Mrs.Tokas-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update plz continue soon
Tanx for da pm
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very nice update but short...
this FF is similar to
Edited by RaniShanthappa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey rani i don't know about this but its written by aisha and I found it on dhawni
so Ishared it with you all.

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