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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: aisha...11110
aww...such a cute nd emotional chapter
sachi mei mjhe teri zaroorat hai🤗😆

aur mujhe tere update ki zaroorat hai 🤣

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: justlovetv
Anu🤗
Will read it at leisure!😃

padhna zaroor! Hope you will like it! 😉

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shikha

@shikha-aggarwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Awesome dear
totally loved it
continue soon

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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal
Awesome dear
totally loved it
continue soon

Awww.Shikha di thank you sooo much for liking this OS. 🤗

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Anu vow really beautifully written... The way it start with his desperation... then he is lost in his first confession... then when he saw first time... beautifully written...

I loved how Jodha made him to confess his love... I was confused at the end... I thought he found her then i realized this was the first time he saw her... I love how he is searching for her... I felt his desperation for her... beautiful shayari you have added was making it more emotional... Who has kidnapped Jodha How all this ideas comes in you little mind... wonderful yaar...Continue soon ... I want to know how he find her... 😃👏⭐️⭐️⭐️👏

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Divya Louis

@Divya879

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

It was amazing plz pm me when you update dr

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...jaskaran...

@...jaskaran...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Amazing hai anushka!!!!! Once again belated happy birthday... and the os is awesome... its speechless.. i also saw villain... one of the best movie and really said... is this os finishing here or it has some parts??? otherwise its very emotional and lovely... 😛😛

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

THANKS FOR THE PM ANUSHKA...I AM GETTING SHOCK ONE AFTER ANOTHER, KNOWING THAT THERE ARE SO MANY WRITERS IN JA FORUM😲😳...BUT THE MORE, THE MERRIER😉😊

LOVED THE START BUDDY...ESPECIALLY THE CONFESSION PART...IT WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN WITH JODHA ACTING TEDA😉 AND JALLU ACTING QUITE SEEDHA FOR A CHANGE😆...JODHA KIDNAPPED AND JALLU IN TEARS, SEARCHING FOR HER EVERYWHERE, DESPERATELY...WHO KIDNAPPED JODHA --- SHARRIF😆, ADHAM😉, MA😡 OR NAYI ENTRANT MC😆...UPDATE SOON AND DO PM😃

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Samanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Anushka🤗

That was really beautiful😳

I loved the way the story switched between past and the present

Jalal is broken! Poor guy! So some idiots kidnapped her!😡

I hope he finds her soon😳

Loved the confession! It was beautiful!

Btw is this a one-shot or are you going to update it?😳

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: ---Mehak---
unres
Anu 🤗 Truly said , OS are wayward easier then FF😆i know that very well ..😆i am holding 4 at a time ... *sweating*

Now back to you ...

Hmmm.. i really liked the story line , how he confessed his love & how they met !

Bt ..?? ending .. it can't end like this .. i mean he had"nt find Jodha & u gave the ending😲please continue it , it will be worth reading😳

Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost 😆
Loved your comment soo much! 😳
And love you 2 ❤️