5~*NOT just a passionate affair~*Pt 43 (1&2) THE GAMES BEGIN

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
I will
Unres soon but just one thing
Rishabh is the stalker

Argentina won and Spain's pain has been avenged..

Ohhh is it ... goo messi 🥳 bwt messi ne kitne goal kiya hai ...?? 😎

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Jas2204

@Jas2204

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

Wow, loved the new chapter. Glad to see Jo putting her thinking cap on. It will be very interesting to see how Jo is going to outsmart the stalker. Confrontation between Jo and Jalal was very painful to read. Again an amazing chapter.

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

But jahnu ... this stalker is keeping a close eye on each & every move of jodha ... so their might be a possibility ... ki khabar udhte udhte hi sahi pahunch gaya hoga ... also even your statement makes sense ...

I have one more serious doubt ... when jodha was trapped in green room ... couldnt she make out the stalker by HIS VOICE .🤓...??? I mean he was talking to jodha right ...

everybody's voice is unique ... so atleast jodha could have deciphered by recognizing his voice 😉

'No...no...don't give up Jodha...' she tried to regroup herself 'Maybe you can recognize his voice...'

Unfortunately; even those hopes of the lone junior weren't meant to be!

When he dug his face into her hair once again, his ensuing eerily hoarse words seemed to be muffled by his scarf, masking his original voice -

>> So Jodha never heard his original voice, in fact Jalal did going by below lines

'Ar...rrr...rrr...rrgh'

The rascal's yells had finally came out 'undisguised' - an involuntary reaction to the alarming pain abruptly inflicted on his back

'Why do I know that voice?' a few doubts instantly raced past Jalal's mind, while still keeping up with that delirious chase. Intrigued, he made a swift mental note of the stalker's dressing - especially how the elegant footwear was a stark contrast to the 'ruffian' get-up he was otherwise sporting 'I'll find out why I know you...soon...'

Varsha dear, Jalal saw his eyes, heard his voice so he has more chances of identifying him than Jodha..

BTW Lashy this is for you:

Intrigued, he made a swift mental note of the stalker's dressing - especially how the elegant footwear was a stark contrast to the 'ruffian' get-up he was otherwise sporting 'I'll find out why I know you...soon...'

Is that line in blue going to hint Jalal about the stalker in future, else you wouldn't have mentioned it, right?

Edited by hemakeerti - 11 years ago

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samy18

@samy18

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#774

brilliant update 👏 loved it

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...jaskaran...

@...jaskaran...

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#775

OH my god!!!!! what have u done????😛😛 Changing the track from a crying one to a mysterious one😆😆... its awesome... lovely... i was crying and crying but when i read the half last part.😭😭. i was on cloud 9... after 2 weeks now i will be exited for ur next update... kyonki before that i just knew ki 3 and 4 parts vaste karne se pehle. u will show nothing expect crying begging... begging se yaad aaya.. oh my jalal... his state seems to be worst than jodha.. becoz he think that his jodha is changed now... and she is not the one who he has loved... how he begged the first and last time...he got hurt.. his tears... really chocked while seeing his state.. never cried even when jodha left jalal in JODHA AKBAR... u r truly an amazing writer...u really made me sobbing while just reading a story... story??? no it seems somewhere is really happening.. nd i wish that it should be a happy ending... i just love the ending track.. i cant stop praising now... after so many tears dried up on my face... i gave a huge smile after its ending... now jodha is going to use the stalker... she has quietly know him.. nd now he is not even sure that he is being used up... nd then he is going to get back jodha jalal... no cry for my jalala... its only few months... jodha is planning to get back to u..its only for sometime... plss update soon.. now really cant wait... ab no rona dhona... we have got our jodha back...👏

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

😆 Ok...So there a question thrown in for us on why Jodha did not tell Jalal all and broke his heart when they could have united and played this dangerous game together😉...Let me give a try...I have a couple of reasons...One of them or might be all of them put together should make sense...If none of them is right, then LALAT hai mujhpar for reading this story till now and still not understanding Jodha😭...

1) SHE WANTS TO SHOW WHAT JALAL IS and what RISHABH IS😉...Jalal is the only man for her, something she totally believes in...He is neither a MANHOOS or a man who has BHATKOED her from way (as her family thinks) NOR is he a WOMANISER (as stalker claims)...By trying this dangerous game, she is trying to play a RISHABH VS. STALKER game, which will not only show Rishabh's true nature/character and how strong he can/will stand for Jodha in the long run (this is for her family) but will also show how dangerous Stalker is, leading to his exposure simultaneously...With Jalal out of the picture, he stays protected and safe...

2) SHE HAS GUESSED THAT THE STALKER IS EITHER IN COLLEGE/OR FROM THEIR GROUP AND SHE DOESNT WANT TO TAKE THE RISK ---------- For Jodha, Jalal's safety is her MAIN priority...She has all thru I think guessed that the stalker is someone from college...ACTING JILTED and BEING REALLY HEARTBROKEN are two different things...If she tells this to Jalal, there will be a lot of answering to do...Secondly they will plan and make moves...If Jalal by mistake lets this known to his friend/s or stalker gets a wind of it, then all hell breaks loose and Jalal's life is in danger...By breaking his heart, his group comes to know that Jodha is really a BITCH who left her love for her family and has got engaged...They will keep her away from him...THIS NEWS WILL SPREAD LIKE WILDFIRE...Stalker relaxes from Jallu's side but gets to know about engagement and goes after him...JALAL IS SAFE😉

3) SHE IS GATHERING HERSELF, WANTS TO SHOW TO HER FAMILY IN PARTICULAR THAT IT IS NOT JUST JALAL BUT SHE TOO IS VERY MUCH IN LOVE WITH JALAL 😉...Enough of crying, pleading, feeling guilty, needless rishta...Jodha is not THAT😊...She is a strong, clever, smart, beautiful girl who has FALLEN in LOVE with Jallu, KNOWINGLY that she will have to face opposition from her family...But enough is enough now...Jallu has done a LOT for now till now...Always supported her, understood her like none others, been with her thru her good, bad and worst phase of life...He also left college so that she continues studying...Now it is her time, to gather herself and show to the world that SHE LOVES Jalal equally and will stand/support him, even if it means playing a dangerous and temporary game that keeps Jalal away from her for a short time ...IT is like 'Ankhon mein dhul jhok rahi hai sabke'😉 ...

Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

'No...no...don't give up Jodha...' she tried to regroup herself 'Maybe you can recognize his voice...'
Unfortunately; even those hopes of the lone junior weren't meant to be!
When he dug his face into her hair once again, his ensuing eerily hoarse words seemed to be muffled by his scarf, masking his original voice -

>> So Jodha never heard his original voice, in fact Jalal did going by below lines
'Ar...rrr...rrr...rrgh'

The rascal's yells had finally came out 'undisguised' - an involuntary reaction to the alarming pain abruptly inflicted on his back

'Why do I know that voice?' a few doubts instantly raced past Jalal's mind, while still keeping up with that delirious chase. Intrigued, he made a swift mental note of the stalker's dressing - especially how the elegant footwear was a stark contrast to the 'ruffian' get-up he was otherwise sporting 'I'll find out why I know you...soon...'
Varsha dear, Jalal saw his eyes, heard his voice so he has more chances of identifying him than Jodha..
BTW Lashy this is for you:
Intrigued, he made a swift mental note of the stalker's dressing - especially how the elegant footwear was a stark contrast to the 'ruffian' get-up he was otherwise sporting 'I'll find out why I know you...soon...'
Is that line in blue going to hint Jalal about the stalker in future, else you wouldn't have mentioned it, right?

Ohhh yesss yess , how can I forget this THIS part of the story 😡 ... but jahnu dont you think lashy should unmask the stalker to her reader's though she can hide the stalker from jalal , jodha & her family 😉 & reveal him later whenever she wants to 😆

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: Pals2411
😆 Ok...So there a question thrown in for us on why Jodha did not tell Jalal all and broke his heart when they could have united and played this dangerous game together😉...Let me give a try...I have a couple of reasons...One of them or might be all of them put together should be make sense...If none of them is right, then LALAT hai mujhpar for reading this story till now and still not understanding Jodha😭...

1) SHE WANTS TO SHOW WHAT JALAL IS and what RISHABH IS😉...Jalal is the only man for her, something she totally believes in...He is neither a MANHOOS or a man who has BHATKOED her from way (as her family thinks) NOR is he a WOMANISER (as stalker claims)...By trying this dangerous game, she is trying to play a RISHABH VS. STALKER game, which will not only show Rishabh's true nature/character and how strong he can/will stand for Jodha in the long run (this is for her family) but will also show how dangerous Stalker is leading to his exposure simultaneously...With Jalal out of the picture, he stays protected and safe...

2) SHE HAS GUESSED THAT THE STALKER IS EITHER IN COLLEGE/OR FROM THEIR GROUP AND SHE DOESNT WANT TO TAKE THE RISK ---------- For Jodha, Jalal's safety is her MAIN priority...She has all thru I think guessed that the stalker is someone from college...ACTING JILTED and BEING REALLY HEARTBROKEN are two different things...If she tells this to Jalal, there will be a lot of answering to do...Secondly they will plan and make moves...If Jalal by mistake lets this known to his friend/s or stalker gets a wind of it, then all hell breaks loose and Jalal's life is in danger...By breaking his heart, his group comes to know that Jodha is really a BITCH who left her love for her family and has got engaged...They will keep her away from him...THIS NEWS WILL SPREAD LIKE WILDFIRE...Stalker relaxes from Jallu's side but gets to know about engagement and goes after him...JALAL IS SAFE😉

3) SHE IS GATHERING HERSELF, WANTS TO SHOW TO HER FAMILY IN PARTICULAR THAT IT IS NOT JUST JALAL BUT SHE TOO IS VERY MUCH IN LOVE WITH JALAL 😉...Enough of crying, pleading, feeling guilty, needless rishta...Jodha is not THAT😊...She is a strong, clever, smart, beautiful girl who has FALLEN in LOVE with Jallu, KNOWINGLY that she will have to face opposition from her family...But enough is enough now...Jallu has done a LOT for now till now...Always supported her, understood her like none others, been with her thru her good, bad and worst phase of life...He also left college so that she continues studying...Now it is her time, to gather herself and show to the world that SHE LOVES Jalal equally and will stand/support him, even if it means playing a dangerous and temporary game that keeps Jalal away from her for a short time ...IT is like 'Ankhon mein dhul jhok rahi hai sabke'😉 ...

Ohhh pals ... my girl ... hell yeah you are absolutely right 👏...!!! I too feel the same way👍🏼 ... but STILL i feel jalal is sidelined here ... I knw I knw itz for his own safety ... but jodha could have managed to give him some slight hint as to why she is doing this ...without revealing her plans ... she could have shared the video & email with jalal right ... I mean hez devastated yaar ... just cannot see him LIKE THIS 😭 ...

& to make my life more miserable lashy made a statement saying lets see how many plans will work for jodha & how many DONT 😡 ... Ohhh plz I dont want her plans backfiring henceforth ... itz been enuf torture of the stalker from 2nd chapter till 42nd & the stalker has been successful in winning every plot ... so now it should be jodha's turn to turn the stalker's victory into HER's ... 😳

Also I dont want jalal to be a mere spectator watching some real life Jhansi ki rani show whoz fighting all alone 🤢

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago

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ash

@ashpat

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#779

Shraddha, this was a torture for jajo and us too. By the end of both chapters, I was choked with emotions and crying . It was nice to see Jalal being happy and cheerful and u had done superb job with showing his feelings and his anticipation of meeting Jodha. It is another thing that he was welcomed with this cold Jodha. It was heart-rendering to see Jalal yell, cry, talk,beg and try everything to convince Jodha to tell him why she is acting thsi waya nd be back with him. I just wanted to hug him so tightly and I knew Jodha had a reason for it but still I don't know if Jalal will be able to handle heart-break this time like last time even if it is temporarily.

it was emotionally draining for me to read these two chapters. But, you know what gave me hope was the entire paragraph when jodha reveals about her plan to restore her realtionship with jalal and their respect etc. As much as I felt for Jalal, I could relate how helpless Jodha was feeling doing all these and especially when she counts her trade-in. I don't why but whenever I read stalker, the actor who plays sharifuddin in JA pops up. I badly wants to know who thsi stalker is. I thought in last chapter that it must be rishabh and if he is then how will jodha prove jalal is real and better man than rishabh. So, now i feel it's not rishabh unless u want to give us another shock and ruin jodha's plan. One thing for sure I badly wants this stalker to be tortured to death who is playing with my ja and my jo's lives. I understand why jo is doing all these and hiding from Jalal but she assuming that it will be back to normal and will be able to nurse jalal's heart- i don't know about that. I mean ya she could but what if it's too late by then that jalal has moved ahead (EDIT: i don't mean with another girl- just that he is done witth letting her break his heart again)unless it gets revealed why jodha did all this to jalal and he understands her and forgives her and accepts her.

update soon shraddha.

btw, because we, readers have gone through so much up and downs with jo and ja,😭 we at least deserve chapters consisting Ja-Jo real marrriage, consummation,preganancy and twins .Please, shraddha, fulfill my request,demand or wish whatever u want to consider.😳

Lots of love,🤗

Your loyal fan since ur first os and your one of closese frds- Ayesha

Edited by ashpat - 11 years ago

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#780

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
Ohhh pals ... my girl ... hell yeah you are absolutely right 👏...!!! I too feel the same way👍🏼 ... but STILL i feel jalal is sidelined here ... I knw I knw itz for his own safety ... but jodha could have managed to give him some slight hint as to why she is doing this ...without revealing her plans ... she could have shared the video & email with jalal right ... I mean hez devastated yaar ... just cannot see him LIKE THIS 😭 ...

& to make my life more miserable lashy made a statement saying lets see how many plans will work for jodha & how many DONT 😡 ... Ohhh plz I dont want her plans backfiring henceforth ... itz been enuf torture of the stalker from 2nd chapter till 42nd & the stalker has been successful in winning every plot ... so now it should be jodha's turn to turn the stalker's victory into HER's ... 😳

Also I dont want jalal to be a mere spectator watching some real life Jhansi ki rani show whoz fighting all alone 🤢

Why do you feel Jalal will be a mere spectator Varsha😆...Yes, Jodha has not included him in her plan and the reason is ONLY HIS SAFETY...But you think Jodha will fight this war alone till the end...As far I have known Jalal and his understanding of Jodha...He will read this situation again and will be in action soon😳...Just wait and watch😉...I have full bharosa on my Jalal and Jodha and the understanding and love/trust they have for each other😃...As Lashy said, they are NOT DUMB😉...Don't jump the gun buddy😉...The game has just begun and Jalal will also join Jodha in the plan in a short while and they will fight together OR he will like Jodha try to figure things out independently while finally joining hands with Jodha again, just wait a bit for that😉 ...Either ways they will continue their TRUST on each other and fight back strongly😃

Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago