~His First Love~ 2 Part 31 (Pg 134) OCT 23 Note on 140

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Samanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#821

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

oh common , you write so well...😃

Haan but the stories are far from reality😆

I am mean fairy land mein jyada hoti hai

They do not potray realistic situations😕

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@old_charm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#822

true dear , but to me they will remain a beautiful creation on our akdha...😃😃😃

i wanted to suggest you something on the storyline of HFL , only if you want 😊

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Samanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#823

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
true dear , but to me they will remain a beautiful creation on our akdha...😃😃😃

i wanted to suggest you something on the storyline of HFL , only if you want 😊

Aww...thanks you so much😳 Yes please tell me!😳

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#824

Originally posted by: justlovetv
Aww...thanks you so much😳 Yes please tell me!😳

i think you should introduce a male character 😉 to spice up the plot as a best friend of jodha 😆, her childhood buddy it will surely rise the jealousy quotient in jalal which will be good fun .

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arpita1226

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Posted: 11 years ago

#825

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

i think you should introduce a male character 😉 to spice up the plot as a best friend of jodha 😆, her childhood buddy it will surely rise the jealousy quotient in jalal which will be good fun .

Please no no jeoules track I will stop reading then because they are best couple for me from all stories and I don't want rift between but if you show then jodha should give more importance to jalal that he will fell happy

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Samanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#826

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
i think you should introduce a male character 😉 to spice up the plot as a best friend of jodha 😆, her childhood buddy it will surely rise the jealousy quotient in jalal which will be good fun .

Originally posted by: arpita1226
Please no no jeoules track I will stop reading then because they are best couple for me from all stories and I don't want rift between but if you show then jodha should give more importance to jalal that he will fell happy

Dearies, I thought about it and realised that there is not much scope here to introduce a jealousy track. It will seem unnatural to show Jalal jealous after they have already confessed. But there is still scope for this in the other story😉 So I will incorporate it there😳

Edited by justlovetv - 11 years ago

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Preet

@rishbala3018

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Posted: 11 years ago

#827

Jealousy track wud have been okay before confession, not now!!

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Samanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#828

Originally posted by: rishbala3018
Jealousy track wud have been okay before confession, not now!!

Exactly, Preet. It would be unnatural here. But I can do it in the other story😉

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#829

oh please please even i don't want any type of MU or conflict b/w them .😲

i wanted that it should be like jalal shoud be more possessive of her & little bit fun b/w them.😉

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Samanika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#830

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
oh please please even i don't want any type of MU or conflict b/w them .😲

i wanted that it should be like jalal shoud be more possessive of her & little bit fun b/w them.😉

I don't like MUs😆

But no jealousy track here😳

He will be possessive, in mild but cute ways😳