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OMG, samy!!!
Ayesha!🤗it was such an awesome chapter. I loved it.Thanks a lot dear!🤗🤗You know I did not realize Jodha was dreaming until she realized she was dreaming,too! You took me by shock and surprise both times- when Jodha went to Jalal's room in a dream and when she realized it was a dream.Awww...😳. I had written the scene in such a way that it seemed real. I never gave it the impression of dream! I wanted the reader to realise it with Jodha that it was dream! And I am happy my purpose was fulfilled here!😃I have to tell you that Jodha in her dream was the boldest Jodha I have ever seen in any of IF JA's ff/ss or os.Ohh thank you so much!😳😳 I ad to show this side of her; it is present in every woman. It comes out when the time is right!😉I loved how you built the entire chapter with her mini desires, thoughts, weirdenessm, fluster etc around Jalal. btw, jodha's dream was so hot and sensuous and bold.Aww...thanks a lot! All the thoughts were important in building up the tempo. It filled up Jodha like a balloon which ultimately burst. The dream was a result of that!😳But, I am kind of glad that it was the dream bec i wanted to see love confession first which i got to read when Jodha went directly to Jalal and told her feelings.I wouldn't have wanted that either😆 It would be too impulsive. The confession always comes first and then the rest of it!😳I also liked how Jalal told her about his first attraction towards her and his first time realization for his feelings towards her. I love it when couples tell each other how and when of their feelings and thoughts to each other.Aww...I also liked their first kiss and then chasing each other, making out and cuddling each other.
Update soon and update other story, too plzz. thx for pm.Thanks a lot Ayesha!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 Will update the other story next!😳
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