~His First Love~ 2 Part 31 (Pg 134) OCT 23 Note on 140 - Page 70

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thanks for the pm
fantastic update

continue soon

Originally posted by: najma123

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it!!!!!!!!!!11

Awww...thanks Najma!🤗

thanks 4 the pm and update i was waiting 4 it.wow awsme update.jodha 's thoughts dreams and confessions.jalal 's anixty about jodha's changed behaviour.its super awsme .

Originally posted by: Smirna.vava

thanks 4 the pm and update i was waiting 4 it.wow awsme update.jodha 's thoughts dreams and confessions.jalal 's anixty about jodha's changed behaviour.its super awsme .

Hey dear! Thanks a lot for your comment! I am glad you liked it!

Spectacular update..seriously i have no words to describe how I'm feeling now

Di.. the update was mesmerising... abhi online through phone.. aaj raat mein I'll comment detail mein.. ignore my spellng mistakes.. I make mistakea through phone

It was Ooo mmm ggg update
Gonna waait for next chapter

Ohhh myyy goddd .😲... *phew* ... FINALLY ... the most awaited ...GREAT CONFESSION ...happens in chapter 30 ...
... CHAAAPTERRR 30
Hey bhagwaan tera laakh laakh shukar hai ... ... kitna naariyal phodu .. abhi bata de ... 😆 ...

Beta Samanika ... kidar gayi tu ... aaja ... teri aarti utaarti hoon ... finally tune confession karaya ... after a looong wait ...

hadh hai koi itna wait karata hai kya ??? 😡 ... 30 chapters tak wait karna padha ... for a confession ... but anyways ... u gave an amazing update so isiliye sab galatiyan maaf karti hoon 🤓

Okay enuf of daanting & ranting ... coming to the update ...

mein kya bolu yaar sammy ... i guess out of all the chapter's u have given so far in HFL ... this was a major blockbuster chapter for me ... 👏 ... infact i am finding really hard to find words to express myself in this comment ... extremely superb writing from your end ...
here u go I give u a start for it ...⭐️


This chapter was the birth of our new jodha in HFL ... a coy , innocent , simple studios girl ... can also have a hidden desires in herself ... which she couldnt hide & hold back in exploring her NEW self ...

Till now it was just a girl hiding ... but today she embraced herself as a women & not as a girl ... she embraced her desire & love for jalal ... & she didnt had an ounce of guilt or hitch in expressing it ... 👏


at first she was scared & denying ... it as just a desire to get one with jalal & then she slowly analyzed all the pieces of the past events ... & realized her feelings for jalal ...☺️

infact I was truly surprised as to how come jodha gathered courage to confess her feelings to jalal ... while reading I just thought it as some kind of dream again ... as u r very good in giving such dream sequence sammy ... & breaking our hopes ... 😡

but thankfully the confession was not a dream ... & i was literally jumping out of joyy ... 😆

And and the SR dream of jodha was so so sooo ☺️ ... we got to see menaka , rambha & urvashi in jodha 😆 ... & our jodha has finally come out of her cocoon ...as a beautiful butterfly in the arms of jalal , her love ... hatss off to jalal for controlling himself & his wait has finally paid off ... i would say even jalal will feel that HIS wait was worth ... !!!🥳

Our jalal has finally succeeded in making our jodha fall for HIM ...
gosh .. u must be thinking what took me so much time to comment na sammyy ... becoz I was reading the chappy again & again ...

just cannot get enough of it ...☺️ ... as jahnu said ... ur writing has deffo improved from the previous ones ... u have a loong way to go sammy ... keep writing , keep surprising us & keep giving SR chappy's cum OS ...☺️ dekho your lalalala di ... is giving all kind of puppies & babies faces

All in all ... i loved the update ... sammy 🤗

sammy ... whatever happens ka update kabhi dogi 😎