~His First Love~ 2 Part 31 (Pg 134) OCT 23 Note on 140 - Page 15

Originally posted by: justlovetv

Originally posted by: AntaresVega

The update is wonderful but I have one small suggestion to make:

Jodha is too innocent. He kisses her hands and forehead, she must immediately back-off instead of consenting to it. Only after she fully Realises that she loves him can she accept that. ..😳...And Jalal too should have controlled it. What if Jodha takes it as lust?

Hey Lyra! Thanks for your comments! Well, what I exactly wanted to show is that Jodha is comfortable with him now. She does have slight feelings for him! That is the reason she accepted it! Jalal is also not very experienced in these matters! He is going as slow as he can! But Jodha will realise her feelings soon! That is why I am still not showing them having a full-blown kiss till they confess to each other!

I hope you don't mind me saying that. The update was otherwise well written. I look forward to reading more from you.😳

No probs dear! Suggestions are always welcome! Will update soon!

Oh and Lyra, if you read carefully, Jodha herself didn't mind! Jalal wasn't going to do a thing but she innocently asked him to do so!

Originally posted by: dharshu

Dii!! Update kab milega?? Update soon na!!

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

udpate dooo???😭😭😭

Originally posted by: dodoneha

samanika, is ff ka update kab milega😡😲

pls update it soon😳

Will update soon!

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

hello dear ...😛..😛...😛..😛..😛..😛..😛...😛

update kab aa raha hain...!!!!!!!