UNPREDICTABLE LUV #2 (closed) new link added- pg-1 - Page 8

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Originally posted by: shahbhavini

ME ME ME ME FIRST😆 HOORAY😃


VOW... VOW LONG UPDATE... HORRAY... VOW...

MAINE JO LIKHA HAI


Congratulation for New Thread... There are lot of stories starts writing and after two to three chapter give up... don't kill me but I thought same for you

DII!!!!EVEN I THOUGHT LIKE THIS ONLY COZ THERE R MANY THINGS WE DO FIRST TIME...ND R NOT SURE ABOUT IT...EVEN I TOO SAID THAT I FELT LIKE M DREAMING COZ NEVER IN MY WILDEST DREAM I THOUGHT OF WRITING😆

ND IF WE HAVE TO LIVE IN THIS WORLD WE HAVE TO PROVE OURSELVES...MAY BE THERE R MANY WHO DOESNT LIKE THIS STORY BUT I FEEL BLESSED THAT U LIKED IT

... and I remember you requested to pm all of the buddies... to everyone... and I was not sure that time you will go that far... but U have done it... and I am so glad that you have written so many chapters... Love U Aishu...

HAHAHA!!!!!! AND DI M GLAD THAT U HAVENT DONE THAT...AGER AAP AISA KER DETE...MJHE KABHI PATA HE NHI CHALTA WHAT AM CAPABLE OF😃

If i have to say something about your story in one Word ... I will say

HILARIOUS

You probably don't know because I have never told you... When ever i am upset I read your story or Pallavi's story ... and feel better...

I WILL ONLY SAY...DII ITS YOUR GREATNESS

In this story your Jodha is out of this world...

HAHAHA!!!LIKE ME😆

She is making me cry... laugh... also giving pain... She is really one unique piece... Of course I love Jalal too... but I love Jalal because of Jodha... They are perfectly cutest couple... Also the way you written bindas comedy... I will advice you start writing comedy script and send it to comedy club... they will love it...
Probably you thinking why I am writing all this lecture😆

NOO!!! YE TOH AAPKI SPECIALITY 😆

but this comment is for your new thread... and I feel honored to be first one to comment on it... and also I wanted to tell you what I love in your story... So likh diya yaar... zel lena ab.😆 My wishes.. Hope this thread filled soon and I comment on thread 3 soon again👏...

MAY GOD FULFIL YOUR WISH🤣

Chal ab yeh chapter ke baare me likhti hu.. actually mene kal padha tha... aur yaad karke likhti hu...
I love the most Panipuri part... and Panipuri shayri.🤣..Out of this world... Yaar where you get all this comedy idea...

TOP SECRET DII😆
I love moti... part.. ahem ahem... then her reaction was mind blowing... 🤣
🤣I love the part when she ask her brother for messy bed... heheheh... poor bro... nayi nayi shadi hui hai... to fight thodi karenge... Seriously your Jodha is one piece...🤣

YEH TOH SAHI KAHA AAPNE

How can I forget VEER... hilarious and cute
🤣 I was reading your chapter on phone while waiting for my daughter to finish her class... in waiting area I was laughing bindas... I couldn't help it... ppl were looking at me like ... I M ONE weird piece...😆😆
I CAN UNDERSTAND COZ M EXPERIENCED😆
You are out of this world comedy writer... Love U Aishu.. Never stop writing... every one can write... but this Hilarious no...👏👏👏

U Deserve Super Star for this story

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❤️⭐️❤️

❤️⭐️❤️

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SACH KAHU DII!!! TOH AM HONOURED THAT U LIKED IT...COZ WHEN WE WRITE THE ONLY THING THAT CAME TO OUR MIND IS ...KYA EVERYONE WILL LIKE IT...ND AFTER READING THIS COMMENT I FEEL RELIEVED ND HONOURED AT THE SAME TIME😉

Originally posted by: ruthshalini

😃😛 buz i love read it again nd again nd now I AM FREE TI POST HAS MANY I CAN , CAN GUESS Y😳

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

First of all Congratulations for the new thread...

THNKS A LOT DEAR

hope u will be able to make 1000 of threads like this

NHIII...😆.ITNE NHI

.. this story made by u will continue... regarding the update... its awesome... love the seducing part.. and your jodha is so cute... nd u r one of those whose update really make me laugh..

AWWW...

. your shayaris are awesome more than dialouge...

MATLAB MY DIALOGUES R NOT GUD😡😆

they make ur update more special than what is it... love uu and ur update... aweesome... no other words to describe anything... or haan kash agar jalal apne aap pe kaabu na kar pata.. or jodha na soti...to kya hota??? really want this soon...☺️

SAMAJHDAAR KO ISHARA HE KAFI HOTA HAI🤣

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

hum toh achi baatein kerte hai😆

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

aapne wo nahi pada.. agar Jalal control nahi karta aur Jo nahi soti🤣

Originally posted by: devi1966

amazing update dear😃