AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3) - Page 97

Originally posted by: ...jaskaran...

res.. will comment in a while😉

First of all... your trio was amazing.👏👏👏. for chapter 12... im speechless.😊😊😊. u have a different whats say.. hunar of writing.😆😆😆.. its beyond expectations. ur way of writing.. always leave an eagerness.😊😊😊.. in us.. to know what will happen next.😆😆😆.. initially i was requesting.. u to show some romantic part..😳😳😳. and to not make jodha feel disgusted...😕😕😕 etcetc.., bcoz i didnt knew about what happened.😡😡😡. but what u have revealed in the third part.. is really disgusting..😭😭😭 means how can jalal can be so ruthless..😡😡😡 even if he can't live without her.. he has to make himself understand.😲😲😲. and if he couldn't.. u should die.... but how can u force to sleep with a person u love.🤢🤢🤢. or u can say .. it was not love.. bcoz love is the other name..😡😡😡. of Qurbaani...😛😛😛. the most and first thing u want to see in a person u love.. is the happiness in her eyes... and what he did?... he ra**d her.😡😡😡..oh my god... and that innocent soul.😭. who lost her dignity... lost her whole strenght to fight back.😭😭😭. she give herself to him... and she felt disgusted of being a women...🥱🥱🥱. she was crying all the way.. and felt like her world has been destroyed.. how can he do so.. how can our hero do so... of course on one side.. somewhere.. we know.. that of whatever os ff ss.. jodha is only made for jalal.😆😆😆.. this little feeling... give us relief.. that even if he has molested her.😭😭😭.. she has been trapped by her love only..😊😊😊 that is jalal.. no doubt that she is still not in love with him.. 🥱😲😲but will soon bend down to him... u should write with ur own way..😊😊😊.. and its really good whatever jodha said to jalal.. that she doesnt care about him.. weather he is dead or not.. he really deserves soo..😉😉😉... but i think now it has been years... to reoccuper from the sad tragedy.. but whats destiny..😕😕😕 that has to happen... so will wait for jajo bonding to go stronger.😛😛😛. and jodha to fall in love with him... update soon dear.😃😃😃 . and again u r amazing...😛

nd u r a superstar⭐️ and i forgot the most important think.. thank god they found rukku.. now hope he will be the one to unite jajo...😛😛 and abdul is a true friend..😉

Originally posted by: ...jaskaran...

kar diya.. ab to read karlo.. bas so na jaiyo.. mera comment parke😆

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

Pp so nice update but no rhico pp ... It was too small update ...

Its so cold cold no no hot

Originally posted by: taaniroyal

Res...
Where r uoy prainka...

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

bhabya...yeh bhi tujhe chota laga😲😡

Originally posted by: Pals2411

FINALLY YOU UPDATED😆...THANK GOD FOR US READERS...

I ALREADY TOLD YOU THIS CHAPTER IS AWESOME😃

THE BUILD UP TO THE ACTUAL PAINFUL PROCEEDINGS OF THE NIGHT WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN...

about your tariff...😆..thak nehi jaati😲

JODHA TRYING TO MAKE HIM UNDERSTAND...THE LOOMING FEAR...HER FIGHT TO PROTECT HER DIGNITY, SELF AND SOUL...AND FINALLY LOSING IT ALL WAS TERRIBLE...

ON THE OTHER HAND JALAL NOT WANTING TO HEAR WHAT JODHA WANTS TO SAY...HIS INCREASING DESIRE TO MAKE HER ONLY HIS...HIS MIND FINALLY DECIDING TO GO TO THE UNFORBIDDEN PATH...HIS FORCEFUL ACT...BUT STILL HIS EMOTIONS FLOWING FREELY FOR HIS LOVE (HE WANTED TO MAKE HER HIS WIFE)...HE WAS SENSITIVE AFTER THE ACT BUT NOT BEFORE BECAUSE SHE DIDNT RELENT AND HE DIDNT WANT TO HERE A NO...

DESPITE HIS FEELINGS FOR HER...HIS ACT WAS DISGUSTFUL, PUNISHABLE...HE NEEDS TO BE TAUGHT A LESSON BY JODHA...AND I COMPLETELY UNDERSTAND HER HATRED FOR HIM...😡

jodha should teach him a lesson...chorna nehi chahiye😡

am with you😳

EVERYTHING WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN PP...THANK YOU FOR NOT MAKING IT TOO GORY OR EXPLICIT😃

note taken😃

PS: WHAT DID I DO😕...ONLY PROOF READING KIYA NA😕...MASKA MAT MAAR ...I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE TRYING TO DO 😡😡...BHUL JA😡

you know you are good...but you can be best😎

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

haan it was too small pp, write long long update within 5 minutes i read the whole part,,,,,, write long one atleast next time,,,, but it was super ... Cant type more from mobile