AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3)

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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

chal pagal

haww main pagal nahi hun...😆

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

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will try to update by sunday

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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#943

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch
will try to update by sunday

abhi to u said naa ki updating jaldi??😲

But I'm guessing ki u r busy..

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anushka8722

abhi to u said naa ki updating jaldi??😲
But I'm guessing ki u r busy..

are bohot kaam hai yaar...

pura din ofc me bit ta hai😡

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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#945

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

are bohot kaam hai yaar...
pura din ofc me bit ta hai😡

so you are also working...

M glad I'm in 7th grade..😆 itta kaam nahi hota humein😆😉

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anushka8722

so you are also working...
M glad I'm in 7th grade..😆 itta kaam nahi hota humein😆😉

7th grade 😲😲

choti bachhi...😲

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Ashwini

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hay plz update the next chapter dear

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...jaskaran...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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res.. will comment in a while😉

First of all... your trio was amazing.👏👏👏. for chapter 12... im speechless.😊😊😊. u have a different whats say.. hunar of writing.😆😆😆.. its beyond expectations. ur way of writing.. always leave an eagerness.😊😊😊.. in us.. to know what will happen next.😆😆😆.. initially i was requesting.. u to show some romantic part..😳😳😳. and to not make jodha feel disgusted...😕😕😕 etcetc.., bcoz i didnt knew about what happened.😡😡😡. but what u have revealed in the third part.. is really disgusting..😭😭😭 means how can jalal can be so ruthless..😡😡😡 even if he can't live without her.. he has to make himself understand.😲😲😲. and if he couldn't.. u should die.... but how can u force to sleep with a person u love.🤢🤢🤢. or u can say .. it was not love.. bcoz love is the other name..😡😡😡. of Qurbaani...😛😛😛. the most and first thing u want to see in a person u love.. is the happiness in her eyes... and what he did?... he ra**d her.😡😡😡..oh my god... and that innocent soul.😭. who lost her dignity... lost her whole strenght to fight back.😭😭😭. she give herself to him... and she felt disgusted of being a women...🥱🥱🥱. she was crying all the way.. and felt like her world has been destroyed.. how can he do so.. how can our hero do so... of course on one side.. somewhere.. we know.. that of whatever os ff ss.. jodha is only made for jalal.😆😆😆.. this little feeling... give us relief.. that even if he has molested her.😭😭😭.. she has been trapped by her love only..😊😊😊 that is jalal.. no doubt that she is still not in love with him.. 🥱😲😲but will soon bend down to him... u should write with ur own way..😊😊😊.. and its really good whatever jodha said to jalal.. that she doesnt care about him.. weather he is dead or not.. he really deserves soo..😉😉😉... but i think now it has been years... to reoccuper from the sad tragedy.. but whats destiny..😕😕😕 that has to happen... so will wait for jajo bonding to go stronger.😛😛😛. and jodha to fall in love with him... update soon dear.😃😃😃 . and again u r amazing...😛

nd u r a superstar⭐️ and i forgot the most important think.. thank god they found rukku.. now hope he will be the one to unite jajo...😛😛 and abdul is a true friend..😉

Edited by ...jaskaran... - 11 years ago