(Deep deep very very deep sigh ... *phew* ) 😆 ... finally I am going to unres this SHORT chapter of PBD ... 😆 ...i am nariyal phoding on the entrance of this thread now ... as i am unresing 😆
coming to the update what can I say sweets ... as i said ... i finished reading it several times now ... i just cannot get enough of jodha & her weird- sweet-cute- antics ...plus hawk eyed jalal's observations ... just a mere taking of jalal's name makes me go all blushy , wushy & mushy & so many unawakened emotions wake up ☺️ ... (okay let me just put a stop on my raging hormones & continue with the comment 😆)
so the dinner party they had at the office was one hell of laugh riot for me jahnu ... jodha giving the warning to her colleague to stay away from her tandoori chicken like a small kid ... & then the whole scene at the table was just very well written by you 👏 ...
things I particularly loved -
1) jodha admitting to not to share her tandoori chicken with anybody ... but she was ready to share it with jalal later 😆 ... was it out of courtesy or something else ... that only u knw 😉 ...
2) jodha teasing shashank saying
"Ah, you can't be so late Raj. See how Shashank is staring at that biryani like flood victims vehemently waiting for puliogare packets, made me 🤣 hard ... & immediately after this ... our Hero enters 😎 jalal rocks & shocks jodha 😆 by taking the seat opposite to her , making her all nervous... waah kya scene tha 😆
(kindly give us such dhaansu entry scenes of MY jalal in future ) 3) next comes this scene
"Ayyo, why did he sit here? How can I tug this thigh piece before him? by shopNdrrop" id="_GPLITA_6" href="http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4065337&TPN=122#">God, hope I don't look like an adivasi. Waise, should I offer him this chicken? Huh, I've only two pieces," badly self-pitying for her state, she determined to ignore him and looked aside restlessly waiting for the superiors to be served - blissfully unaware of her evil colleague's devilish intentions. Passing on the starters to Raj and Jalal, Shashank slyly looked at Jo whilst questioning Jalal in extra sweeteness- "Would you like to try tandoori sir?"
I rofled again & pitied jo for her bewildered state ...🤣 ... & shashank's evilness of trying to rile up jodha ... 🤣
Startled out of blue, she momentarily adorned the expression of a five year old forced to share her one and only chocolate with others, but her 25year old self quickly made it up with a decent smile. With no chance to kill her wicked colleague with fiendish stares, she extended the plate masking her disconcert, and rest of the team sealed their lips recollecting her previous warnings.
🤣 ... @ bold -abb kya bolu mein ... jodha , jodha , jodha 🤣 i could imagine our kiddo jodha with that expression 😆 i loved this part too my jaan ... i could relate myself completely with jodha here when it came to sharing ... i was forced to share my things with my sister ... & trust me i used to throw tantrums every now & then ...🤣 ...
4) then came jalal's reply ... gosh ... hez one heck of an observer cum listener cum charmer cum what not ... so Mr.Ahmed had heard her warning ... my goodness 🤣 how , when & where ?? ... he thought to back off from getting cursed by jodha 😆 i loved jalal's reply after that ... ohh godd seriously u had me cracked up through out this chapter re jahnu ... awesome laughter therapy for the day ... 😆
5) nazar utaro scene was just hilariously awesome...🤣 ... did she really do that 😆 ...gawdd ...shez no less than a kid herself ... i am wondering when she & jalal will have kids ... what would she do if she has to share this tandoori chicken with her kids 🤣
6) connecting his degree with his fork & knife handling abilities ... waahhh what can i say here for jodha 🤣 btw was she observing him 😉 ... & those gestures of jalal asking her do-you-want was cherry on ice 😆 .. so he caught her staring at him or his plate ?? a song clicked in my mind while reading this eye staring session
aankhon hi aankhon mein ishara ho gaya ... baithe baithe jeena ka sahara ho gaya ... 😆
7)
"A few strands of hair falling on his forehead and a pair of sharp edged eyes!! Why do these eyes look familiar to me?"
when will this revelation be done ... I am waiting desperately ...
8) was the pencil's pierced in her hair when jalal dashed in her cabin ... OMG i was just imagining jodha with her horns 😆 ... & jalal complimenting her ACTUALLY instead of that stand ...loved the that whole scene re ... 😆 ... & this definitely calls for scene of the day for me ... ☺️)
next ... things I hated 😡
1) That Assistant Whatever Manager ... 😡 ... I didnt like her one bit when divya told her the whole story about she badmouthing jodha for no reason 😡 ... How dare she ... hope one fine day jalal shows that manager her exact place & ask her to stay in her limits ... 😡
2) Jo saying she is no competition to that manager 😡 ...my dear jo so what if jalal is divorced ... he too is a human & has all the right to fall in love & remarry ...😡 ... i am starting to hate jo for her THIS particular attitude towards jalal & he being divorced ... jahnu ... u better do something about this before I start hating her completely 😭 ...
these are the 2 aspects of the chapter that didnt please me much ... but anyways lets see how well jodha changes her mind towards jalal in future ...
the next worry of mine is jo's leaves ... uff hope their wont be any war between these two, on this topic now ... I am having a bad feeling that jalal may not sanction her leave or he might get displeased after knowing that she is going on leave ...
whatever it is jahnu ... u better not create huge problems btw these 2 ... okaayyy 😡😡😡😡
anyways ... "phew" ... finished my biggg task of unresing ... but i loved this whole chapter .. it was short ... i am hoping u will compensate this with a looong one in the next update 🤗
to end ... the tandoori chicken , fried rice , kebab platters , jalal & jodha's antics ☺️ ... this was a complete "Mouth Watering" update from you jaan ... luuubbb uuu 🤗
Edited by varshaakulkarni - 10 years ago
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